WAIF
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Post by WAIF on Jan 29, 2014 17:38:33 GMT -5
Well can I get some feedback Sure. -Great quality -Simple set up but still very clean -Posing has improved but it is still very awkward at times. For example, during Dean's entrance look at how lazy his pose is. Take your time man, no rush. -Work on taking more frames for poses. Some sequences look like they could use an extra photo or two. Look at 2:15 for instance. Notice how Ambrose was standing then next picture he was on the mat? -You had a neat idea for the ending but the small package looked really odd. Hope this helped out mang. Wow that means a lot. Wish I got this advice before I finished filming my ppv lol. This advice will come into play on the next ppv I film. Thanks a lot though |
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Post by Wicked on Jan 29, 2014 17:50:54 GMT -5
I have to agree with John about this.
This match was good buddy. Probably your best.
The pic quality is good.
Posing wasn't as bad as before. You are improving.
Try to work on match flow. Work on posing as well especially the awkward poses with hands and arms.
I liked the finish and I thought the 3rd member thing was very intriguing. I am excited to see where these leads the LDHW.
Good job. Sorry about the joke before. Sorry if you got offended.
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Post by WAIF on Jan 29, 2014 17:56:57 GMT -5
I have to agree with John about this. This match was good buddy. Probably your best. The pic quality is good. Posing wasn't as bad as before. You are improving. Try to work on match flow. Work on posing as well especially the awkward poses with hands and arms. I liked the finish and I thought the 3rd member thing was very intriguing. I am excited to see where these leads the LDHW. Good job. Sorry about the joke before. Sorry if you got offended. Thanks for the feedback bro means a lot. And just wait till tomorrow fo the next ppv so u can figure it out. Roma....... I mean the third man is coming for you nigha  |
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Post by Wicked on Jan 29, 2014 18:08:51 GMT -5
I have to agree with John about this. This match was good buddy. Probably your best. The pic quality is good. Posing wasn't as bad as before. You are improving. Try to work on match flow. Work on posing as well especially the awkward poses with hands and arms. I liked the finish and I thought the 3rd member thing was very intriguing. I am excited to see where these leads the LDHW. Good job. Sorry about the joke before. Sorry if you got offended. Thanks for the feedback bro means a lot. And just wait till tomorrow fo the next ppv so u can figure it out. Roma....... I mean the third man is coming for you nigha Paul Roma in the SHIELD I can't wait! |
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Post by Dylan. on Jan 30, 2014 7:36:36 GMT -5
As a reply to your post in the entry thread, you just copy and paste your match into the thread. Also go ahead and edit your previous post to put your match on it. Instead of making a new post, I just want entries no questions. Questions and remarks are made for the Revamp thread.
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