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Post by King Of Spice on Mar 30, 2014 15:20:46 GMT -5
new show such wow watch pls omg
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Post by Deleted on Mar 30, 2014 15:46:30 GMT -5
I'll watch it right away!! Can't wait!!! O yeah, looks good!!
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Post by Deleted on Mar 30, 2014 15:54:05 GMT -5
Halfway so far, really didn't like how it suddenly went from outside to inside, this will be updated with a full reveiw.
If Trevor dosent turn up shits gonna go down...
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Post by King Of Spice on Mar 30, 2014 15:58:55 GMT -5
Halfway so far, really didn't like how it suddenly went from outside to inside, this will be updated with a full reveiw. If Trevor dosent turn up shits gonna go down... Me neither. Fuck the British weather.
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Post by Wicked on Apr 1, 2014 15:25:16 GMT -5
This was an alright show Bobby. I enjoyed it for the most part. I feel like you have improved a lot in the posing department. The forever changing arena was a bit weird but It does not really matter. Try to pay attention to little details like taking figures out of the background shots, and your xbox controller. I didn't really get why the table break between Bryan and Barrett was in the middle of the video. I liked the use of string. I liked the opening. This was an ok show just work on posing, arena and pay a bit more attention to details (Like bend the ref's arms & stuff).
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Post by King Of Spice on Apr 1, 2014 15:48:30 GMT -5
This was an alright show Bobby. I enjoyed it for the most part. I feel like you have improved a lot in the posing department. The forever changing arena was a bit weird but It does not really matter. Try to pay attention to little details like taking figures out of the background shots, and your xbox controller. I didn't really get why the table break between Bryan and Barrett was in the middle of the video. I liked the use of string. I liked the opening. This was an ok show just work on posing, arena and pay a bit more attention to details (Like bend the ref's arms & stuff). Yeah, thanks Ricardo. That was iMovie being a dick. And it changed because first it rained, and then my nieces cot got put where I was filming when she visited. Lol. Thanks bud.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 1, 2014 15:55:25 GMT -5
I liked this show!! You are really improving every show!!! Poses were good. Just some were a bit akward. The teleporting was epic lol. I understand since I live I. England, you never know when it's gonna rain!!! MOTN: chavo vs rey. What happened with barret and bryan? I liked how you did it but It was a bit random. Overall good! Little things like x box controller etc didn't really bother me tbh. Good show! Might I add, I really like how your using eddie in your fed!!
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Post by King Of Spice on Apr 1, 2014 16:11:55 GMT -5
I liked this show!! You are really improving every show!!! Poses were good. Just some were a bit akward. The teleporting was epic lol. I understand since I live I. England, you never know when it's gonna rain!!! MOTN: chavo vs rey. What happened with barret and bryan? I liked how you did it but It was a bit random. Overall good! Little things like x box controller etc didn't really bother me tbh. Good show! Might I add, I really like how your using eddie in your fed!! Thanks bud. Yeah, the frames got messed up, if you watch the UK version, the real finish is there.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 1, 2014 16:33:46 GMT -5
I liked this show!! You are really improving every show!!! Poses were good. Just some were a bit akward. The teleporting was epic lol. I understand since I live I. England, you never know when it's gonna rain!!! MOTN: chavo vs rey. What happened with barret and bryan? I liked how you did it but It was a bit random. Overall good! Little things like x box controller etc didn't really bother me tbh. Good show! Might I add, I really like how your using eddie in your fed!! Thanks bud. Yeah, the frames got messed up, if you watch the UK version, the real finish is there. Will do!!
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Post by Gnaddi on Apr 2, 2014 9:50:11 GMT -5
I liked that you added pyro. Looked pretty cool. Rey vs Chavo was good. Some weired spots like Chavos sault. splash into the corner. Posing was ok. Some stiff poses. The finish was awesome! I agree with Richard. You should try to get things like Sheamus laying in the ring during Cenas entrance, xbox controllers out. Cena vs Sheamus was meh. Posing was´nt too good in that match. Taker vs Eddie was way better. Really enjoyed that match. Posing was much better as in the two previouse matches. The location changes were weired but sometimes it can´t be avoided. Bryan vs Barrett was a crazy match. I loved how it got dark. Just looked really neat and different. Would be great for a Halloween show.
Overall this was an decent show. Not quite as good as your last one but still ok. My favourite match was Eddie vs Taker.
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Post by King Of Spice on Apr 2, 2014 11:18:24 GMT -5
I liked that you added pyro. Looked pretty cool. Rey vs Chavo was good. Some weired spots like Chavos sault. splash into the corner. Posing was ok. Some stiff poses. The finish was awesome! I agree with Richard. You should try to get things like Sheamus laying in the ring during Cenas entrance, xbox controllers out. Cena vs Sheamus was meh. Posing was´nt too good in that match. Taker vs Eddie was way better. Really enjoyed that match. Posing was much better as in the two previouse matches. The location changes were weired but sometimes it can´t be avoided. Bryan vs Barrett was a crazy match. I loved how it got dark. Just looked really neat and different. Would be great for a Halloween show. Overall this was an decent show. Not quite as good as your last one but still ok. My favourite match was Eddie vs Taker. Thanks bud! I'm really glad you enjoyed Eddie and Taker, that was a really fun match to make. I appreciate your feedback man. I thought you might like the darkness, lol.
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Post by FWL on Apr 11, 2014 14:08:14 GMT -5
Before I review, let me just say that your intro is amazing. I liked Rey vs Chavo. Loved the sequence in the beginning, thought that was posed pretty well. Chavo's running dropkick looked a bit off, that could be posed a little better. I loved Chavo's reversal of Rey's attempt at the sunset flip powerbomb off the apron, I almost marked out because it would've been sick if it actually happened. Good match to start it off. Cena vs Sheamus was good.I loved when everyone TRANSPORTED TO A RED CARPET DIMENSION. HOLY SHIT MOMENT. The two trading punches could be posed a little better, at least have them sell the punches a bit. I liked Cena's reversal into the AA to end it. No crazy spots here, but there didn't need to be. I really liked Taker vs Eddie. ANOTHER DIMENSION CHANGE. MY MIND. Again, work on the punches. Taker punches hard, Eddie needs to sell that in the corner to get it across. I liked Eddie's dropkick on the apron into the Tope Atomico. Taker's dive over the top rope was awesome, I always love to see that move. Great job selling it as well with them both staying down. Loved Eddie's reversal of the Last Ride to win the match. Main event was okay, but lots of stuff with it bothered me. D-Bry blocking the chair shot with his foot early on was cool, not sure if I've ever seen that. Lots of good hardcore action throughout. I had wondered why Barrett slammed Bryan through a flaming table right after Chavo vs Rey, now I know why. Don't let stuff like that happen, it screws the match up and it's easy to prevent. Also, you leaving your red marker and your phone laying in the middle of the ring while the match is going on ruins the illusion for me. Don't do that either. Overall, it was a good show. Your posing is pretty good, but it can improve. One more thing that bothered me: this is the Trevor Phillips Invitational, right? Not that I have anything against Mumford and Sons, I love them, but I expected some songs from Channel X for the Trevor Phillips Invitational. I don't see him as much of a Mumford and Sons fan. Just my opinion. Nice work brother, looking forward to seeing more from you.
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Post by King Of Spice on Apr 11, 2014 14:33:10 GMT -5
Before I review, let me just say that your intro is amazing. I liked Rey vs Chavo. Loved the sequence in the beginning, thought that was posed pretty well. Chavo's running dropkick looked a bit off, that could be posed a little better. I loved Chavo's reversal of Rey's attempt at the sunset flip powerbomb off the apron, I almost marked out because it would've been sick if it actually happened. Good match to start it off. Cena vs Sheamus was good.I loved when everyone TRANSPORTED TO A RED CARPET DIMENSION. HOLY SHIT MOMENT. The two trading punches could be posed a little better, at least have them sell the punches a bit. I liked Cena's reversal into the AA to end it. No crazy spots here, but there didn't need to be. I really liked Taker vs Eddie. ANOTHER DIMENSION CHANGE. MY MIND. Again, work on the punches. Taker punches hard, Eddie needs to sell that in the corner to get it across. I liked Eddie's dropkick on the apron into the Tope Atomico. Taker's dive over the top rope was awesome, I always love to see that move. Great job selling it as well with them both staying down. Loved Eddie's reversal of the Last Ride to win the match. Main event was okay, but lots of stuff with it bothered me. D-Bry blocking the chair shot with his foot early on was cool, not sure if I've ever seen that. Lots of good hardcore action throughout. I had wondered why Barrett slammed Bryan through a flaming table right after Chavo vs Rey, now I know why. Don't let stuff like that happen, it screws the match up and it's easy to prevent. Also, you leaving your red marker and your phone laying in the middle of the ring while the match is going on ruins the illusion for me. Don't do that either. Overall, it was a good show. Your posing is pretty good, but it can improve. One more thing that bothered me: this is the Trevor Phillips Invitational, right? Not that I have anything against Mumford and Sons, I love them, but I expected some songs from Channel X for the Trevor Phillips Invitational. I don't see him as much of a Mumford and Sons fan. Just my opinion. Nice work brother, looking forward to seeing more from you. Thanks man. I have finally figured out the secret of dimension swapping. I appreciate the watch. Looking forward to your mania!
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Post by Jack on Apr 22, 2014 4:31:28 GMT -5
I kinda felt you could have done a bit better here bud, nonetheless I did enjoy this in parts. Posing still needs a bit of work such as making sure every joint is bent in the correct position to increase the realism of the pose. Arena problem wasn't to big a deal for me. I liked that you used string in some of your poses, it does help when it is used every now and again. I suggest practising using string as much as you can and then putting it into practice when you do a show. Cena vs. Sheamus was pretty weak, very very standard match. I actually really enjoyed Barrett vs. Bryan. I liked the added extra's in the match.
Overall a pretty ok show is the best way to put it. I know you can do better.
Rating - 6.
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Post by King Of Spice on Apr 22, 2014 9:18:41 GMT -5
I kinda felt you could have done a bit better here bud, nonetheless I did enjoy this in parts. Posing still needs a bit of work such as making sure every joint is bent in the correct position to increase the realism of the pose. Arena problem wasn't to big a deal for me. I liked that you used string in some of your poses, it does help when it is used every now and again. I suggest practising using string as much as you can and then putting it into practice when you do a show. Cena vs. Sheamus was pretty weak, very very standard match. I actually really enjoyed Barrett vs. Bryan. I liked the added extra's in the match. Overall a pretty ok show is the best way to put it. I know you can do better. Rating - 6. Thanks a lot bud. I appreciate that you see an improvement in me.
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