Post by FWL on Aug 22, 2014 19:55:36 GMT -5
This was great. Enjoyed every match on the card. I really loved the Fatal 4-Way, but I felt like at times you did it a little backwards. There should be buildup to the crazy moves towards the end. What it felt to me like you did was a little buildup, then crazy match ending moves, then an odd few seconds in the middle that consisted of more buildup moves, then more crazy moves to end it.
Finishers. It was a problem for you before, and on a much smaller scale than before, it's a problem now, but I'm sure you work it out in time. Save the multiple kickouts for REALLY big matches. I get that you probably wanted your first show back to go over well, and it obviously has, just don't make it a habit. Also, don't make moves like Harper's hurricanrana an every-match thing, because they will lose their effect very quickly. Moves like that are "holy shit" moves, which is why we've only seen it from him on TV once or twice.
Posing is good for the most part, but try to keep your moves more in frame so they're easier to watch. It'll also help the match as a whole flow better. Letting your fingers show is nowhere near a horrible offense, so don't try so hard to keep them out of the picture. Pacing was fine, just work on how quickly or slowly someone gets up from certain moves. I struggle with it as well. Your sequences were good, better than most of the shit I come up with.
I really liked this show overall, you've come a long way. I remember watching your first show, and watching this now is like watching two completely different people. I tried to give some helpful advice because I want to see you get better and I know you can. Keep up the good work.
Finishers. It was a problem for you before, and on a much smaller scale than before, it's a problem now, but I'm sure you work it out in time. Save the multiple kickouts for REALLY big matches. I get that you probably wanted your first show back to go over well, and it obviously has, just don't make it a habit. Also, don't make moves like Harper's hurricanrana an every-match thing, because they will lose their effect very quickly. Moves like that are "holy shit" moves, which is why we've only seen it from him on TV once or twice.
Posing is good for the most part, but try to keep your moves more in frame so they're easier to watch. It'll also help the match as a whole flow better. Letting your fingers show is nowhere near a horrible offense, so don't try so hard to keep them out of the picture. Pacing was fine, just work on how quickly or slowly someone gets up from certain moves. I struggle with it as well. Your sequences were good, better than most of the shit I come up with.
I really liked this show overall, you've come a long way. I remember watching your first show, and watching this now is like watching two completely different people. I tried to give some helpful advice because I want to see you get better and I know you can. Keep up the good work.