FWL: Proving Ground

[FWL]

Sorry about the long wait. I know this is not my best work (the first couple matches especially), but I wanted to get this out so I can start working on the Royal Rumble. Any criticism at all would be great as always, looking to improve with each one. Thanks for watching.



Match Card:

Batista vs Shawn Michaels

Randy Orton (c) vs Stone Cold Steve Austin vs Jake The Snake Roberts for the United States Championship

Edge vs Mankind in a Falls Count Anywhere Match

Alberto Del Rio (c) vs The Rock for the Intercontiental Championship

The Miz (c) vs Kane for the FWL Championship

CM Punk vs Bret Hart in a Submissions Count Anywhere Match (created by x24xWOLFx24x, one of my subscribers who won a contest to make this match)

Drew McIntyre (c) vs Undertaker in a Street Fight for the World Heavyweight Championship

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8/10 :-X

[JC Deadly Shot!]

Batista VS Shawn Michaels: This match was pretty good, not the best but it was a good way to start of the PPV. Eddie coming in at the end was great.

Austin VS Orton VS Roberts US Title: This was a great match and I loved the fact it was 3 deadly snakes just going at it for the gold. Everything in this match was awesome, alot of reversals and pin break ups which was great for this kind of match. Randy punting Austin after the match was great and I thought you would make something of it in the future.....until I saw DDP coming out and in the future that is something that I want to see.

Edge VS Mankind FCA: This match was fucking incredible and definitely one of my favourites of the night. We all know how great of a match Foley and Edge can pull off as they have shown it WWE, and this one was no different. The Garbage dumpster spot was epic and Edge just landing on Mankind as they fall out of it pinning him was great. The only thing I didnt like about this was how short it was I expected more out of this match.

ADR VS The Rock IC Title: This match was alright, not really the best and got a bit boring. I did like the bit when Rock put Del Rios scarf on him and then started beating the crap outta him. ADR winning shocked me.

Kane VS Miz FWL Title: I am so disappointed in this match. It had the potential to be a huge show stealer but you ended it with a shot to skull with the belt in a couple seconds. John Cena coming out didnt exactly make me any happier either. Sorry bro but I just didnt like this match.

Cm Punk VS Bret Hart SCA: WOW who ever of your subs made that up is one smart fan. The second I saw Punk and Bret in the same ring I knew it would be an instant classic. Great way to start off with some wrestling and then heading to the outside with both men using the steps to create submissions. The pile driver off the steps was awesome, and so was the GTS on the steps. The hart dynasty interfering surprised me and Punk taping to both mens submissions was great.

Taker VS McIntyre World title: This match was epic and had alot of great spots and wrestling. The continuous kick outs made it just that more great. The weapons being brought in were used well and were a great mix. Glad Taker won.

This PPV was alright during the start and not you best. Some matches were great while others were not that great. The only thing I think you need to work on a bit is posing in some places. Cant wait till the Royal Rumble.

7/10

[FWL]

Dec 30, 2012 21:54:49 GMT -5 JC Deadly Shot! said:

Batista VS Shawn Michaels: This match was pretty good, not the best but it was a good way to start of the PPV. Eddie coming in at the end was great.

Austin VS Orton VS Roberts US Title: This was a great match and I loved the fact it was 3 deadly snakes just going at it for the gold. Everything in this match was awesome, alot of reversals and pin break ups which was great for this kind of match. Randy punting Austin after the match was great and I thought you would make something of it in the future.....until I saw DDP coming out and in the future that is something that I want to see.

Edge VS Mankind FCA: This match was fucking incredible and definitely one of my favourites of the night. We all know how great of a match Foley and Edge can pull off as they have shown it WWE, and this one was no different. The Garbage dumpster spot was epic and Edge just landing on Mankind as they fall out of it pinning him was great. The only thing I didnt like about this was how short it was I expected more out of this match.

ADR VS The Rock IC Title: This match was alright, not really the best and got a bit boring. I did like the bit when Rock put Del Rios scarf on him and then started beating the crap outta him. ADR winning shocked me.

Kane VS Miz FWL Title: I am so disappointed in this match. It had the potential to be a huge show stealer but you ended it with a shot to skull with the belt in a couple seconds. John Cena coming out didnt exactly make me any happier either. Sorry bro but I just didnt like this match.

Cm Punk VS Bret Hart SCA: WOW who ever of your subs made that up is one smart fan. The second I saw Punk and Bret in the same ring I knew it would be an instant classic. Great way to start off with some wrestling and then heading to the outside with both men using the steps to create submissions. The pile driver off the steps was awesome, and so was the GTS on the steps. The hart dynasty interfering surprised me and Punk taping to both mens submissions was great.

Taker VS McIntyre World title: This match was epic and had alot of great spots and wrestling. The continuous kick outs made it just that more great. The weapons being brought in were used well and were a great mix. Glad Taker won.

This PPV was alright during the start and not you best. Some matches were great while others were not that great. The only thing I think you need to work on a bit is posing in some places. Cant wait till the Royal Rumble.

7/10

Thanks a lot for this. I like getting replies like this, it helps me figure out what I need to work on. This whole PPV was rushed for the most part to try to get it out by Sunday, and I know I can and will do much better than this in the future. I just really wanted to get started on the Royal Rumble.

[Gnaddi]

Nice show! I only didnt like that every match was like a Main Event Match. You should maybe try to get some space for Mid-Card Matches on the PPV´s card. Also the Match from one of your YT subbers, looked really the same like your Arena. All was the same. Was he filming this in your house?

The posing in the first two matches wasnt really that good. But then in the Edge vs Mankind and Rock vs ADR it really got way better. The People´s Elbow into Cross Armbreaker was amazing. One of my favorite poses of the PPV. Miz vs Kane was a little short lol. The SCA was pretty awesome. I liked The Hart Dynastie helping out Bret. The Main Event was alright.

So, I cant wait for the Royal Rumble!

From me, for this show, 6/10!

[Jack]

Great Show over all bro! Really Enjoyed it. I am going to type out a longer reply tomorrow as I only had time to watch the show! Thanks!

Edit:

Batista VS Shawn Michaels: This was a good way to start the PPV and had a big match feel! I would rather you used a proper stage rather than a laptop and I did find some of the poses in this match a bit stiff, but I thought the diving Elbow sequence was very nice. Eddie coming in at the end was cool. Eddie VS Batista rivalry will be good as I have rarely seen that done in Pic Feds.

Austin VS Orton VS Roberts US Title: I liked the theoru behind this match with the snakes and the viper in Randy Orton. I thought the match was really good and unpredictable but a few poses let it down a bit. DDP coming out was unexpected.

*Will Edit More Later*

[FWL]

Dec 31, 2012 12:54:09 GMT -5 Gnaddi said:

Nice show! I only didnt like that every match was like a Main Event Match. You should maybe try to get some space for Mid-Card Matches on the PPV´s card. Also the Match from one of your YT subbers, looked really the same like your Arena. All was the same. Was he filming this in your house?

The posing in the first two matches wasnt really that good. But then in the Edge vs Mankind and Rock vs ADR it really got way better. The People´s Elbow into Cross Armbreaker was amazing. One of my favorite poses of the PPV. Miz vs Kane was a little short lol. The SCA was pretty awesome. I liked The Hart Dynastie helping out Bret. The Main Event was alright.

So, I cant wait for the Royal Rumble!

From me, for this show, 6/10!

Thanks for the feedback. He came up with the idea for the match, I filmed it myself.