gabe
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Post by gabe on Apr 10, 2013 14:23:55 GMT -5
My longest and biggest show of the year. I tried to make it to the best of my possibility. Please watch, and leave a comment!
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Post by Jesus of PFI on Apr 10, 2013 15:36:29 GMT -5
OK, there is a LOT of room for improvement. Work on your posing. Also, try to keep the camera at a decent distance from a figure like most fo the shots. When someone was punching pn the ground, there was a close up from underneath. make it modaretly close, but from behind, if you know what I'm saying. It's clear you didn't check this video through when you edited, because I saw a shot of 6 multi coloured drinks just beyond the 5 minute mark. I used to just render without checking, but I accidentally had 15 shots of a suplex which I just couldn't get right. Go through the entire video before you render to make sure everything is right. I saw your hand in a lot of pictures and in the entrances, of the first match I saw Sheamus just chilling on the ground. In the posing, try to do more reactions when someone gets slammed down or punched or something. Try to have their feet in the air realistically as if they have been thrown down, and if they've been punched, move their head to the side the punch is going. Add more detail, too. When someone throws a punch, move their waist to look as though they've pulled their fist back so much that their waist has moved, and tilt it over in the other direction when the punch lands as though their fist has powered through the opponents face. When someone is in the air, try to show as much of their body as you can, and just hold them by the ankle. Move every joint in every picture to get the most realistic posing possible. You have some damn good figures with 20 something points of articulation. Use it all. Work on your blood skills. The blood didn't look good. Work on it by getting a figure and putting a bit of blood on him, wiping it off, and just keep working on it. If the blood has flowed down his face, don't leave any gaps. There would be no skin in the middle of the blood flow in real life. There were a couple of blurry shots, but not many. Also, try not to show too many shots of the crowd. I liked the use of the awesome sign, but dont overuse it. Work on these things. It'll make you a better pic fedder. I'm not bashing your fed, just trying to help you get better. I did enjoy this show and found some of the things very creative like the table and the Austin thing. I very much enjoyed this. I hope to see more great videos from you in the future.
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gabe
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Post by gabe on Apr 10, 2013 16:05:40 GMT -5
I was in a bit of a rush since I wanted it to be on time for Wrestlemania 29. The blood on John Cena's back was supposed to be large gashes caused by the barb wired platform. The 5 or 6 multi colored Drinks were accodentally added in because of a science project i was doing and then all I did was sync the photos from my camera and into my laptop. I kind of rushed this PPV because I wanted to working on ECW Soon. I'll take those suggestions of posing and camera distance into consideration. Thank you.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 12, 2013 17:01:23 GMT -5
great man!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 14, 2013 14:28:22 GMT -5
really nice just try not to get ur fingers and body parts in pics 7/10
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