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Post by Ethan on Apr 14, 2013 5:09:17 GMT -5
not my best in my opinion but ill let you decide
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Post by Deleted on Apr 14, 2013 5:17:15 GMT -5
You gotta work on your presentation man everything looks EXTREMELY sloppy it takes away from any effort that you may have put into this show.
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Post by JC Deadly Shot! on Apr 14, 2013 5:29:46 GMT -5
You gotta work on your presentation man everything looks EXTREMELY sloppy it takes away from any effort that you may have put into this show. This and also, your posing was good but the fact that the figures seemed dirty or badly painted kind of made the show seem not worth it just because the look was not good, and honestly the posing in this has really improved and I saw the effort you put in that, But also focus your effort on the look of the show and the presentation like he said. |
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Post by Ethan on Apr 14, 2013 5:43:58 GMT -5
You gotta work on your presentation man everything looks EXTREMELY sloppy it takes away from any effort that you may have put into this show. This and also, your posing was good but the fact that the figures seemed dirty or badly painted kind of made the show seem not worth it just because the look was not good, and honestly the posing in this has really improved and I saw the effort you put in that, But also focus your effort on the look of the show and the presentation like he said. yer i know it wasnt the best, i didnt like it that much, but i will certainly take this advice and lets hope it will help me |
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Post by Jesus of PFI on Apr 14, 2013 6:14:28 GMT -5
Yeah, like Troy and JC said, You have good posing but the sloppy paint job on the figures takes away from that. Also, try and not use themes that people have used in other feds.
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Post by Gnaddi on Apr 14, 2013 7:23:41 GMT -5
Same as everyone else said. The posing was good. But this crappy look of the figs is awful. The show would be 100% better if you would let your figs how they are. The arena was ok. But we should all have learned now to not use songs that were used in other Feds. The first was the one Harrison used in his Royal Rumble PPV and I think the other one was a theme of a TNWF PPV not to long ago followed by more EWF themes. Just come up with your own theme. Other Pic Fedders made me love ADTR (never heard a song from them before)and also other stuff. But better not use the exact same theme. This will only lead you in problems. Anyhow, just use the tipps you get from the other members here. There is definitly potential in your Fed.
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Post by Jesus of PFI on Apr 14, 2013 9:32:51 GMT -5
OK, I didn't watch the whole thing earlier, but I am now, so yeah. The first match was pretty good. Good posing and there were a few points in that match where I thought it was over. The second match was good, but I didn't understand why one team was in their corner and weren't fighting for the first minute or two. The last match was a decent match, too, though it was bit short. Onto the Rumble. 8 minutes is a bit short for a Rumble, but it was good and had a few spots. 2 themes from this PPV were themes from Harrison's PPV's. Everyday Combat by Lostprophets was in Rumble '13 and Can't catch tomorrow by Lostprophets was used by Harrison at WBOWYCCM '12. Kofi winning was unique. I enjoyed this PPV. Don't really like giving ratings to feds, anymore. You definitely have potential to become the next big thing, no pun intended.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 14, 2013 10:58:26 GMT -5
wow bro sorry for making fun of u and stuff on highflyer329 vid ur really good im still watching now when im done ill def. sub u please sub me too im epickota69
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