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Post by Dylan. on May 7, 2013 20:33:57 GMT -5
I worked hard, and it's my longest fed to date. Nothing like JCs will be, but it's good length. I dedicate this show to all of the hard work Troy has put into TNF, PFI, and into helping feds. Thank you Troy!
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Post by PhoenixFeathers on May 8, 2013 12:26:35 GMT -5
The show was good, I liked the Money In the Bank & Sheamus Vs Brock the best. The only problem I had in this show was the awkward posing. Sometimes it made it really hard to follow the match, made some of them seem very inconsistent. Other than that, it was a good show.
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Post by Karl Malone on May 9, 2013 20:57:54 GMT -5
Man Have ever told you that i love you. well... I do. Match of the night: Monet In Tha BANK I loved the spots they weere just awesome something new and improved. Will edit..
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Post by Trademark on May 12, 2013 13:06:36 GMT -5
I watch through a couple days ago and it was pretty good. Christian and Jericho was decent. I wasn't a fan of the opening and how Christian tried to jump him. Pretty short match, which is fine, but I personally couldn't get in to it. The Money In The Bank was great. This would be my MOTN. Posing seemed good the whole time. In all honesty, this is probably the best I've seen you pose. I wasn't a big fan of the No Ropes Match. the posing just seemed off and I got confused at parts in the match. Glad to see you're trying to do some innovative stuff, though. Same with Christian and Jericho, I just couldn't get into Callihan Vs. Orton. Michaels Vs. The Rock was good in a way. I think that if the match didn't have the rope, this would have been so much better. I thought it was pointless to throw in as the match was fine without it. Sheamus Vs. Lesnar was surprisingly good. I really liked this match and thought it was one of your best. The 3 Stages of Hell Match was just too much for me. I couldn't get into this match at all. Not saying hardcore is a bad thing, I just wasn't feeling this one. I will say there were some innovative spots. CM Punk Vs. Austin was decent. I just felt it lacked that big show main event feel. It left me disappointed when the show ended.
Was not very good. Not every match needs to be hardcore or have a stipulation as it doesn't come off to good. This is not me just bashing you. I wanted it to be good, I did. But it wasn't. Good effort, though. The picture quality, stage, and arena are a huge improvement, so well done on that front. Really work on your posing. Bend those joints and really try to focus on capturing a match. Try to add in a story in each match. Maybe even plan out some spots before filming. Also, please, give me some realism. Keep things realistic in the future.
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Post by Dylan. on May 12, 2013 13:21:31 GMT -5
I watch through a couple days ago and it was pretty good. Christian and Jericho was decent. I wasn't a fan of the opening and how Christian tried to jump him. Pretty short match, which is fine, but I personally couldn't get in to it. The Money In The Bank was great. This would be my MOTN. Posing seemed good the whole time. In all honesty, this is probably the best I've seen you pose. I wasn't a big fan of the No Ropes Match. the posing just seemed off and I got confused at parts in the match. Glad to see you're trying to do some innovative stuff, though. Same with Christian and Jericho, I just couldn't get into Callihan Vs. Orton. Michaels Vs. The Rock was good in a way. I think that if the match didn't have the rope, this would have been so much better. I thought it was pointless to throw in as the match was fine without it. Sheamus Vs. Lesnar was surprisingly good. I really liked this match and thought it was one of your best. The 3 Stages of Hell Match was just too much for me. I couldn't get into this match at all. Not saying hardcore is a bad thing, I just wasn't feeling this one. I will say there were some innovative spots. CM Punk Vs. Austin was decent. I just felt it lacked that big show main event feel. It left me disappointed when the show ended. Was not very good. Not every match needs to be hardcore or have a stipulation as it doesn't come off to good. This is not me just bashing you. I wanted it to be good, I did. But it wasn't. Good effort, though. The picture quality, stage, and arena are a huge improvement, so well done on that front. Really work on your posing. Bend those joints and really try to focus on capturing a match. Try to add in a story in each match. Maybe even plan out some spots before filming. Also, please, give me some realism. Keep things realistic in the future. 6/10 Remember, I'm just trying to help you out. Thanks for leaving a comment. Means alot. I'll be working on the posing and the story. I just was in a rut, and some of the things that happened was to get me out of it. Basically all the storylines will be done better and most exsisting ones are over. Criticism helps me out especially, I will take that advice and try to make my next one better and up to those expectations of a good show. I appreciate it!
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Post by Jesus of PFI on Jun 30, 2013 12:59:27 GMT -5
Amazing show. Sorry I'm only watching it now, but I wanted to see it when you uploaded it, but I forgot about it. No real complaints about the show. The posing could do with a slight improvement, but it was great. 9/10.
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