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Post by Deleted on Jul 25, 2013 23:49:57 GMT -5
Enjoy and please give feedback, thank you.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 26, 2013 5:49:28 GMT -5
Well... Anyone
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Post by Deleted on Jul 26, 2013 6:55:59 GMT -5
I liked taker v sheamus punk v ziggler orton v diesel and ryback v Bryan the rest were good all in all solid show
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Post by Deleted on Jul 26, 2013 12:48:37 GMT -5
I liked taker v sheamus punk v ziggler orton v diesel and ryback v Bryan the rest were good all in all solid show Thanks man |
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Post by Tony on Jul 26, 2013 13:11:01 GMT -5
X match - Tad weird at the beginning, and I lolled at Jericho's mask, is there some story behind it? Since I haven't seen your stuff before. The guys in red and blue are some of your customs? Really nice, though first I thought outcome Sin Cara unmasked haha. I felt the match was too short, the camera was out of focus at points and in a few frames the poses looked hard to realise what was going on. Rating: 7 Tag match - I liked it better than the last one, but the action was kinda hard to follow since there was many points where something was on focus and something else happened at the background. However, it was a pretty good match though again I saw camera out of focus. Rating: 7 Ryback vs Bryan - This was interesting, not too much points with out of focus and had pretty good posing. The end was great, both men down. Rating: 7.5 Cena vs Morrison - It was a good match, you should have taken a few pictures more of every move but I liked it. Rating: 7.5 Ziggler vs Punk - This match stole the show. Overally a great match, good posing and all. Rating: 8 Orton vs Diesel - Again, take more pictures of the moves. I liked this match as well though, ending was epic. I liked the extreme spots, great. Rating: 7.5 Taker vs Sheamus - Really good as well, great posing but again, camera out of focus. That bothers me in every fed I watch haha  Great spots though and great ending. Rating: 8 Overally, work on taking more pictures and keeping camera on focus. Keep it up! Overall rating: 7.5 |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 26, 2013 13:16:28 GMT -5
X match - Tad weird at the beginning, and I lolled at Jericho's mask, is there some story behind it? Since I haven't seen your stuff before. The guys in red and blue are some of your customs? Really nice, though first I thought outcome Sin Cara unmasked haha. I felt the match was too short, the camera was out of focus at points and in a few frames the poses looked hard to realise what was going on. Rating: 7 Tag match - I liked it better than the last one, but the action was kinda hard to follow since there was many points where something was on focus and something else happened at the background. However, it was a pretty good match though again I saw camera out of focus. Rating: 7 Ryback vs Bryan - This was interesting, not too much points with out of focus and had pretty good posing. The end was great, both men down. Rating: 7.5 Cena vs Morrison - It was a good match, you should have taken a few pictures more of every move but I liked it. Rating: 7.5 Ziggler vs Punk - This match stole the show. Overally a great match, good posing and all. Rating: 8 Orton vs Diesel - Again, take more pictures of the moves. I liked this match as well though, ending was epic. I liked the extreme spots, great. Rating: 7.5 Taker vs Sheamus - Really good as well, great posing but again, camera out of focus. That bothers me in every fed I watch haha Great spots though and great ending. Rating: 8 Overally, work on taking more pictures and keeping camera on focus. Keep it up! Overall rating: 7.5 I agree with you 100% and sorry but know story behind Jericho's mask except that he's a heel and it looks bad ass lol. Thanks for the comment man |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 26, 2013 14:14:31 GMT -5
*sighs*
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Post by Deleted on Jul 26, 2013 15:33:35 GMT -5
not bad, some poses looked a bit awkward on how the joints were moved. Good job though.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 26, 2013 16:00:22 GMT -5
not bad, some poses looked a bit awkward on how the joints were moved. Good job though. I get it, thanks for the feedback |
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Post by Jesus of PFI on Jul 26, 2013 16:30:05 GMT -5
I'll watch sometime soon.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 26, 2013 16:35:23 GMT -5
I'll watch sometime soon. Okay I'll be waiting on feedback lol |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 27, 2013 16:44:57 GMT -5
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Post by Jesus of PFI on Jul 28, 2013 3:09:52 GMT -5
Sorry for the late reply, but yeah.
The ladder match was decent to kick off the show. It had some nice spots. It was too short so didn't reach its full potential. The tag match also didn't reach its full potential because of the length, but it was a decent match. Ryback vs Bryan was great. Lots of really cool spots. The ending was good and was quite unexpected. This match seemed to have slightly better posing than the last two and was MOTN so far. Cena vs Morrison was good, while it lasted. For a match that could have been a show stealer, it lasted less than two minutes. But it was enjoyable and I loved the sliding across the ring to the outside and then the hurricarana which Morrson performed on Cena near the beginning of the match. Punk a Ziggler could have also been spectacular but you made it a bit too short. An extra minute and a half and this would have been phenomenal. It was a very good match though which I did enjoy. Orton vs Diesel was amazing. This is MOTN so far at a draw with Bryan vs Ryback. These two match are a few minutes longer than the others and this makes it better. Length makes matches that bit better. (Not if it's 10 minutes of punching). I loved the weapons in this match. The Visa card, the thumb tacks and the PSP game. Amazing match. Sheamus vs Taker also drew for MOTN. This had some good, pure wrestling. It had a good length and I loved Sheamus using Taker's leg drop and attempting the tombstone. Overall, this was a good PPV. While Notna's feedback was pointing out focus, mine was pointing out length. The only things to work on are length and awkward poses, because there were a few of them scattered through the PPV. I enjoyed this and will be looking out for your next PPV.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2013 16:15:46 GMT -5
Sorry for the late reply, but yeah. The ladder match was decent to kick off the show. It had some nice spots. It was too short so didn't reach its full potential. The tag match also didn't reach its full potential because of the length, but it was a decent match. Ryback vs Bryan was great. Lots of really cool spots. The ending was good and was quite unexpected. This match seemed to have slightly better posing than the last two and was MOTN so far. Cena vs Morrison was good, while it lasted. For a match that could have been a show stealer, it lasted less than two minutes. But it was enjoyable and I loved the sliding across the ring to the outside and then the hurricarana which Morrson performed on Cena near the beginning of the match. Punk a Ziggler could have also been spectacular but you made it a bit too short. An extra minute and a half and this would have been phenomenal. It was a very good match though which I did enjoy. Orton vs Diesel was amazing. This is MOTN so far at a draw with Bryan vs Ryback. These two match are a few minutes longer than the others and this makes it better. Length makes matches that bit better. (Not if it's 10 minutes of punching). I loved the weapons in this match. The Visa card, the thumb tacks and the PSP game. Amazing match. Sheamus vs Taker also drew for MOTN. This had some good, pure wrestling. It had a good length and I loved Sheamus using Taker's leg drop and attempting the tombstone. Overall, this was a good PPV. While Notna's feedback was pointing out focus, mine was pointing out length. The only things to work on are length and awkward poses, because there were a few of them scattered through the PPV. I enjoyed this and will be looking out for your next PPV. thanks for the feedback |
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Post by Gnaddi on Jul 28, 2013 20:53:57 GMT -5
The show was pretty good. Only thing I don´t liked was that every Match only had Main Event guys in it except the Tag Match. For me there was really no Mid-Card. The posing througout was good. It needs a bit more work though. Another thing you should improve at is the arena. Overall it was a decent show. Also lookingout for your next show.
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Great spots though and great ending.
