gabe
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Post by gabe on Aug 7, 2013 11:31:11 GMT -5
Thank you guys for helping me reach 50+ Subs! Sorry for some blurry pictures, and being late. Leave a comment! Next Stop: SummerSlam.
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gabe
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Post by gabe on Aug 7, 2013 15:51:24 GMT -5
Please leave feedback, thank you in advance!
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Post by Trademark on Aug 7, 2013 16:23:00 GMT -5
You're definitely improving but I feel you are limited in that small ring. I feel like your shows would be much better if you had a bigger ring. The posing is getting there but I feel like you could add a few frames on some sequences. Also, since you have a smaller ring I think if for some shots you zoomed out a bit it would look better. I really dig Orton as your Intercontinental Champion. One thing I noticed is that when Orton rolled Sheamus in the ring, Sheamus was very stiff. Again, when Orton was setting up Sheamus for the RKO, Sheamus was stiff. It's the little things that really help a PPV. Make sure you bend the joints even when they are on the mat. The RKO on the other hand looked really nice. In the MITB match I see you mixed basics with Deluxe's which looked a little odd. If you have extra money you should try to snag some weapons off Ringside. It would really help you out man. Morrison and Dolph Vs. DX was a fun little tag match. I liked it. Awesome. Love how the main event is a tag match. I feel sometimes they don't get enough love. Piledriver on the apron looked nasty! Ok, AWESOME sequence with Austin doing a dive on Angle followed by Bryan then Cena. Good main event with a good ending. I enjoyed this show. Keep at it man.
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Post by Fetty San on Aug 11, 2013 3:49:34 GMT -5
This was actually pretty good and a lot better than I thought. Posing could be worked on as some looked stiff/odd. Also, another thing is that pacing is good and also strange in your matches. I noticed it during your main event which was pretty good imo. The pacing was good but the way the moves came about like Angle's moonsault for example, seemed out of place as it happened sooner rather than later. Just small stuff I noticed as I want people's matches look as real as possible to and extent but yeah man, you've improved and cant wait to see your SummerSlam!
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Post by Jack on Aug 17, 2013 8:24:47 GMT -5
This was another good show by you man, for a small guy you really do put on good PPV's. Your posing was pretty decent I felt here which I liked. Your pacing has improved quite a bit since I saw your last show, you do a good job with your small ring which is pretty neat. I really dig Orton as your IC champ i have to say, that is very cool. Your sequences are actually good but I do feel they lack a frame here or there just to make them seem a bit more fluid and realistic. Just make sure again you watch alot of matches just to get the idea of the number of frames you need per sequence. There was the odd stiff and weird looking pose but nothing to bad at all. Really nice job! I would rate this 7.
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