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Post by UnitedWePurge! on Aug 10, 2013 15:52:27 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Aug 10, 2013 15:53:30 GMT -5
Looks great
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Post by Ethan on Aug 10, 2013 17:50:36 GMT -5
holy shit that was great!
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Post by PhoenixFeathers on Aug 10, 2013 21:47:28 GMT -5
Some of your spots make me wonder if you understand "building a show's hype". You don't need stupidly crazy spots every single match. Especially in the opener. Breaking the TB's with a belly to belly is so ridiculous. I'm sorry.. Your spots are creative but they defy all logic and it's really hard to watch sometimes. I'm not trying to be an ass, but not every single match needs to have a 5 star quality. You lighting is good, posing is nice but the thing that really throws your fed off for me is the crazy spots, and I told you about this not to long ago. You need to lay off the spots, just do matches. Don't worry about doing something stupidly creative every show.
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Post by UnitedWePurge! on Aug 10, 2013 22:06:20 GMT -5
Some of your spots make me wonder if you understand "building a show's hype". You don't need stupidly crazy spots every single match. Especially in the opener. Breaking the TB's with a belly to belly is so ridiculous. I'm sorry.. Your spots are creative but they defy all logic and it's really hard to watch sometimes. I'm not trying to be an ass, but not every single match needs to have a 5 star quality. You lighting is good, posing is nice but the thing that really throws your fed off for me is the crazy spots, and I told you about this not to long ago. You need to lay off the spots, just do matches. Don't worry about doing something stupidly creative every show. Yeah I know, I f**ked up on this ppv... this honestly is another Death Before Dishonor in my opinion or it reminds me of that ppv lol Anyways thanks for the feedback!
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Post by Fetty San on Aug 11, 2013 3:28:22 GMT -5
I will never understand why superstars come in randomly and attack someone or just come out on a mic and leave. That and I am not constant with a lot of feds. Some moves didnt make sense too
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Post by Jesus of PFI on Aug 11, 2013 5:33:50 GMT -5
Just going to do a short review. Ryback vs Lesnar should not have been the show starter. Should have been Rey vs Gabriel then triple threat then this. Was a good match though, just should have been later on. Rey vs Gabriel was pretty solid with some good spots, not crazy ones which was good. I was surprised it was Gabriel and not Cara. Glad Sandow's attack was after and not during the match. Then the triple threat which was good too with some nice spots involving all three men. The Hell In a Cell was also a fun match, though I don't really kow what the yellow specks were. Sand? Sawdust? Anyway, that Orton custom is great. That should have been the one in E21 and not the purple Orton. The tag match was OK. This seemed a bit odd being so late as the matches earlier on were better. I didn't really get into this match. Savage vs Punk started off amazing but I think the weapons ruined it a bit, although they brought in some good spots. This was probably MOTN for me, with Gabriel vs Rey not far behind. Overall, a solid show which was very entertaining. I enjoyed it, and I hope the next PPV is good.
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Post by UnitedWePurge! on Aug 11, 2013 12:13:17 GMT -5
Just going to do a short review. Ryback vs Lesnar should not have been the show starter. Should have been Rey vs Gabriel then triple threat then this. Was a good match though, just should have been later on. Rey vs Gabriel was pretty solid with some good spots, not crazy ones which was good. I was surprised it was Gabriel and not Cara. Glad Sandow's attack was after and not during the match. Then the triple threat which was good too with some nice spots involving all three men. The Hell In a Cell was also a fun match, though I don't really kow what the yellow specks were. Sand? Sawdust? Anyway, that Orton custom is great. That should have been the one in E21 and not the purple Orton. The tag match was OK. This seemed a bit odd being so late as the matches earlier on were better. I didn't really get into this match. Savage vs Punk started off amazing but I think the weapons ruined it a bit, although they brought in some good spots. This was probably MOTN for me, with Gabriel vs Rey not far behind. Overall, a solid show which was very entertaining. I enjoyed it, and I hope the next PPV is good. Thanks for the feedback,and the yellow specks were suppose to be thumbtacks... I should of changed the color to gray...
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Post by Jack on Aug 17, 2013 14:41:44 GMT -5
Ryback VS Lesnar - This was a match I have been looking forward to with the good build to it, thought it was pretty weird to open the show with this. But, this match did have a brawl feel to it. I felt you limited Brocks moveset slightly to just brawling but it was good. I was a bit confused why Stone Cold came out, i just feel that is un-needed. I liked the catch by brock into the post. I did like the whole set up here. Liked the toss through the table. Was ok. ***
Rey VS Cara - This match is pretty overdone. Anyway, your pacing can be a tad off in some matches, it just needed a bit better build here. I also would like to see a ref in your matches. The style of Sin Cara seemed off at times her, Liked the west coast pop type counter. Loved Justin being revealed as Cara that was unique and awesome. The match was pretty good actually in patches, the lighting was a bit dark but glad Rey won. More attacks, eh about that. A bit to much happening in this match. ***1/4
HBK VS Jericho VS Christian - This is a match I wanted to see it. This was a pretty standard 3 way here which isnt a bad thing tbh. I felt this was too WWE style, as in one on one with one guy on the outside a bit to much. But i liked the assisted destroyer as well as the crossbody. Liked the crossbody to the outside. Ending seemed a bit quick but still good. ***
Mankind VS Orton - The ring was pretty small here, i know you cant do much about it, but it did effect the match for me a bit. I also think you had to many big spots on the cage and the outside for a standard hell in a cell. I like most of the action being in the ring. Punt was done well. Impact on the fire looked neat. I felt some of the action was a tad unrealistic. Fire then up for RKO? Looked cool, but you get me. **3/4
BOD VS Hardy and Edge - Liked the pacing to this match better, much better. Nice leg drop impact with taker. This match was pretty standard though tbh. Again like typical WWE style tag match. Liked the double spear alot. Kane doing the spear was, well, cool. Liked the use of AJ here. Nice chokslam for the win. ***1/4
Punk VS Savage - So like a rematch from Mania a few years ago which is kinda neat, i wasnt really looking forward to this but this could be good. Pacing was ok, it was a bit of to many big spots early on which was a tad rushed I felt. Liked the running knee combo, that looked really slick. I didn't think you really nailed Savage's move set to well. Match was actually building pretty well. Weapons weren't needed here at all imo, i dont like main events with them really. Urgh another interference, you lack so many matches without people coming into the match. This does confuse me, as if a ref was here it would have been a DQ? Anyways, was ok. ***
This was a very eh show really man. Too many big spots, and interferences, run ins ect... just get back to wrestling if you wanna get a much higher rating as although the show was consistent there was nothing that blew me away here. I would rate this 6.
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Post by UnitedWePurge! on Aug 17, 2013 21:59:41 GMT -5
Ryback VS Lesnar - This was a match I have been looking forward to with the good build to it, thought it was pretty weird to open the show with this. But, this match did have a brawl feel to it. I felt you limited Brocks moveset slightly to just brawling but it was good. I was a bit confused why Stone Cold came out, i just feel that is un-needed. I liked the catch by brock into the post. I did like the whole set up here. Liked the toss through the table. Was ok. *** Rey VS Cara - This match is pretty overdone. Anyway, your pacing can be a tad off in some matches, it just needed a bit better build here. I also would like to see a ref in your matches. The style of Sin Cara seemed off at times her, Liked the west coast pop type counter. Loved Justin being revealed as Cara that was unique and awesome. The match was pretty good actually in patches, the lighting was a bit dark but glad Rey won. More attacks, eh about that. A bit to much happening in this match. ***1/4 HBK VS Jericho VS Christian - This is a match I wanted to see it. This was a pretty standard 3 way here which isnt a bad thing tbh. I felt this was too WWE style, as in one on one with one guy on the outside a bit to much. But i liked the assisted destroyer as well as the crossbody. Liked the crossbody to the outside. Ending seemed a bit quick but still good. *** Mankind VS Orton - The ring was pretty small here, i know you cant do much about it, but it did effect the match for me a bit. I also think you had to many big spots on the cage and the outside for a standard hell in a cell. I like most of the action being in the ring. Punt was done well. Impact on the fire looked neat. I felt some of the action was a tad unrealistic. Fire then up for RKO? Looked cool, but you get me. **3/4 BOD VS Hardy and Edge - Liked the pacing to this match better, much better. Nice leg drop impact with taker. This match was pretty standard though tbh. Again like typical WWE style tag match. Liked the double spear alot. Kane doing the spear was, well, cool. Liked the use of AJ here. Nice chokslam for the win. ***1/4 Punk VS Savage - So like a rematch from Mania a few years ago which is kinda neat, i wasnt really looking forward to this but this could be good. Pacing was ok, it was a bit of to many big spots early on which was a tad rushed I felt. Liked the running knee combo, that looked really slick. I didn't think you really nailed Savage's move set to well. Match was actually building pretty well. Weapons weren't needed here at all imo, i dont like main events with them really. Urgh another interference, you lack so many matches without people coming into the match. This does confuse me, as if a ref was here it would have been a DQ? Anyways, was ok. *** This was a very eh show really man. Too many big spots, and interferences, run ins ect... just get back to wrestling if you wanna get a much higher rating as although the show was consistent there was nothing that blew me away here. I would rate this 6. Thanks for the feedback, and when Stone Cold came out I forgot to add captions, he was saying that "He's the new general manager and the match is now a tables match" lol
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