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Post by WCStudio on Aug 17, 2013 18:41:08 GMT -5
Hope you enjoy
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Post by Jack on Aug 18, 2013 5:07:44 GMT -5
Love the location first off here, looks really good. I liked that you debuted a new superstar, that is cool and I like the creativity here. Pacing acualy seemed not bad tbh here, I didnt think the steel steps were really needed. Anyways, the poses were pretty stiff and some of the sequences seemed a bit weird to me and kinda didnt feel like they really all flowed into each other as well as they maybe should have done. I liked the ace-crusher on the chair, that actually looked cool.
I suggest in general especially with the next to matches, take more time over the poses, they seemed a bit rushed, make sure you utilize all of the joints. I have to say though that your matches are pretty fun, so well done on getting that over. I also felt some transitions lacked some frames just again to make it all flow that bit better. The five star splash had great impact. I felt you could have ended the match with the one from the top of the arena. I like the attempt at the storytelling. Tag match was ok, same kinda erros as above, had some nice dives. Roch VS Punk was a match I didnt wanna see tbh. Main event you put alot of effort into but I still felt errors were present.
Ok, now there were some good things here, as well as quite a few errors you need to try and work on. Keep working on pacing matches up to the ending as well as making the poses not stiff by moving as many joints as you can to make it all flow and be realistic. Some of the matches were ones I didn't want to see as they have been done to much in either WWE or other feds, but some were good and uniquely booked. I would probably rate this show a 4.5.
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Post by WCStudio on Aug 18, 2013 5:53:04 GMT -5
Love the location first off here, looks really good. I liked that you debuted a new superstar, that is cool and I like the creativity here. Pacing acualy seemed not bad tbh here, I didnt think the steel steps were really needed. Anyways, the poses were pretty stiff and some of the sequences seemed a bit weird to me and kinda didnt feel like they really all flowed into each other as well as they maybe should have done. I liked the ace-crusher on the chair, that actually looked cool. I suggest in general especially with the next to matches, take more time over the poses, they seemed a bit rushed, make sure you utilize all of the joints. I have to say though that your matches are pretty fun, so well done on getting that over. I also felt some transitions lacked some frames just again to make it all flow that bit better. The five star splash had great impact. I felt you could have ended the match with the one from the top of the arena. I like the attempt at the storytelling. Tag match was ok, same kinda erros as above, had some nice dives. Roch VS Punk was a match I didnt wanna see tbh. Main event you put alot of effort into but I still felt errors were present. Ok, now there were some good things here, as well as quite a few errors you need to try and work on. Keep working on pacing matches up to the ending as well as making the poses not stiff by moving as many joints as you can to make it all flow and be realistic. Some of the matches were ones I didn't want to see as they have been done to much in either WWE or other feds, but some were good and uniquely booked. I would probably rate this show a 4.5. Thanks for the feedback I'll try to improve for my next PPV - Pain For Pride I So far PFP is just starting so it'll be used |
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