gabe
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Post by gabe on Aug 22, 2013 15:59:52 GMT -5
I found some lost matches on my laptop recently and decided to upload them. Like & Comment!
Filmed: 6/30/13 - 7/1/13
Match Location: Hammerstein Ballroom in NYC
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Post by gabe on Aug 22, 2013 22:58:49 GMT -5
Anyone?
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Post by Jesus of PFI on Aug 23, 2013 2:46:05 GMT -5
I'll give you a little review here. The punches looked extremely stiff at the match's start. Move those joints more. Not keen on the use of the 2 same pics for the whips on the corner. Saw your fingers once or twice. Loved the lionsault onto Christian on the Pepsi can. Liked how Jericho used the con-chair-to on Christian. The punch through the gap in the chair was a little unrealistic. The piledriver through the table was a sweet spot. The suplex thing on the chair was a nice spot. Would have been nice if the lighttubes disappeared after the backdrop and instead there is salt/paper/anything that looks like the broken pieces of glass. I liked the ending with Christian thinking he'd won. Overall, this was a pretty decent match which I enjoyed watching. The main problem is the posing. Move the joints more and make it look realistic. The only other problem is that I saw your fingers a few times. Nothing minor though, as it can be fixed quite easily. You built up to the big spots quite well, too. Keep working on the posing! It's not bad, but it's not good either. I'm not bashing, just trying to help you get better.
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