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Post by Deleted on Sept 27, 2013 13:54:10 GMT -5
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Post by Jack on Sept 27, 2013 14:13:21 GMT -5
I feel like I repeat myself so much when watching and commenting on shows. Ok, I will try and make this really clear. When you are posing make sure EVERY joint is the way you want. As in not just the legs, or the arms. If ONE joint is out like an arm, then it ruins the whole pose and makes it look bad. Secondly, your frame rate is way to fast for your level of fedding, put it to maybe 0.75 or 0.8 as it just looks confusing. Next, and I said this last time but you took no note of it. PACING! Literally in the first 30 secs of the opener there was a scissor kick and a spear. Like come on! Where would you see that in wrestling? Build it, have some tie ups run the ropes, shoulder tackle, work the body ect... just watch the top fedders, Cody, Mike, Harrison, John. I would rate this 3.75.
Ok this is what you do now. You go away, you practice, you TAKE my advice. You go away and do something about it. Dont just do nothing and wonder why I repeat myself again.
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Post by gabe on Sept 27, 2013 15:26:47 GMT -5
I agree with Jack. Work on the posing. Just because a match is long doesn't make it good. And some of the moves people were doing were unrealistic. Examples: Christian hitting a Canadian destroyer, R-Truth with a springboard hurricanrana, etc. Watch a lot of matches, pic fed or not and you can find a variety of moves you can put onto more matches.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 27, 2013 23:40:05 GMT -5
I feel like I repeat myself so much when watching and commenting on shows. Ok, I will try and make this really clear. When you are posing make sure EVERY joint is the way you want. As in not just the legs, or the arms. If ONE joint is out like an arm, then it ruins the whole pose and makes it look bad. Secondly, your frame rate is way to fast for your level of fedding, put it to maybe 0.75 or 0.8 as it just looks confusing. Next, and I said this last time but you took no note of it. PACING! Literally in the first 30 secs of the opener there was a scissor kick and a spear. Like come on! Where would you see that in wrestling? Build it, have some tie ups run the ropes, shoulder tackle, work the body ect... just watch the top fedders, Cody, Mike, Harrison, John. I would rate this 3.75. Ok this is what you do now. You go away, you practice, you TAKE my advice. You go away and do something about it. Dont just do nothing and wonder why I repeat myself again. Anything positive or was it all just utter trash and should be called shit |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 27, 2013 23:40:46 GMT -5
I agree with Jack. Work on the posing. Just because a match is long doesn't make it good. And some of the moves people were doing were unrealistic. Examples: Christian hitting a Canadian destroyer, R-Truth with a springboard hurricanrana, etc. Watch a lot of matches, pic fed or not and you can find a variety of moves you can put onto more matches. So there is no positive thing to think of? |
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Post by Jack on Sept 28, 2013 1:12:27 GMT -5
I feel like I repeat myself so much when watching and commenting on shows. Ok, I will try and make this really clear. When you are posing make sure EVERY joint is the way you want. As in not just the legs, or the arms. If ONE joint is out like an arm, then it ruins the whole pose and makes it look bad. Secondly, your frame rate is way to fast for your level of fedding, put it to maybe 0.75 or 0.8 as it just looks confusing. Next, and I said this last time but you took no note of it. PACING! Literally in the first 30 secs of the opener there was a scissor kick and a spear. Like come on! Where would you see that in wrestling? Build it, have some tie ups run the ropes, shoulder tackle, work the body ect... just watch the top fedders, Cody, Mike, Harrison, John. I would rate this 3.75. Ok this is what you do now. You go away, you practice, you TAKE my advice. You go away and do something about it. Dont just do nothing and wonder why I repeat myself again. Anything positive or was it all just utter trash and should be called shit Dont get butt-hurt, just trying to tell the truth to help. Would you rather we said, 'WOW! Awesome Job!' |
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Post by gabe on Sept 28, 2013 6:49:17 GMT -5
As a friend, I was just trying to give you some creative criticism.
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