FWA DDT4 2013

[Ethan]

enjoy!

[JC Deadly Shot!]

Hey man, This was a great PPV. Your posing has very much improved I can see you have watched other feds and have looked more closely on TV and have put that into your fed. Nice job. Some poses were still weird and I did see your hand and fingers a couple times, But your still improving alot and it shows through this PPV.
The first match was great, there was not a whole lot of good psychology but there was some great moments in that one. Also that Jericho enzuguri that he did was posed perfectly, possibly the best pose of the PPV. The second match was not that greatly posed but the tag team work was really there and it worked good. The moves that ADR and Rey did were great. The segment with Steenerico was good but I was kind of hoping when Barrett came out that he would announce a new partner with him or something to still have a match but I didnt matter that much. The forth match seemed odd for some reason I think it was because of just how the teams IMO on paper can seem like gold but when you really try to get them in the ring and make a match, it just didnt seem to work or fit. Its like some of the Triple H/Lesnar matches. I didnt see there maina one yet but the SS and ER matches between them were not that good just because it didnt seem to fit with there styles or the stuff they did in the matches. When they planned it they probably though and we all did too that it would be classics but it just didnt turn out that way and I kind of go that feeling with this match. The fifth match was good but during the start the pacing of the match was not there. There was some great tag moves though and the false finishers were great as well. The sixth match really made up the both teams past stuff in this PPV. Like truths team didnt quite seem that good in there first match and Steenerico didnt even have a match so this match really made up for that. Some poses were off and I saw your hands at times but the match was still enjoyable. The attack on truth by Rollins afterwards was great. I already like them more as enemys than as a team lol. The triple threat was great it was nice and spotty and felt like a triple threat match witch you did good. The YES moment with the crowd was awesome. Some poses I can see you really focused on in this match and others I could see seemed rushed. That Canadian Destroyer was FUCKING CRAZY! The main event tag was good but I kind of expected better. The constant taging in and out with Punks team was good but it was too early for a submission hold on Steen. This match felt too quick and rushed. I was hoping that Richards would come back out and atleast try to help Punk but I think it will instead build up something better between the 2 I hope.

This PPV was great man, But I got to say that there was not really any Tag Team psycology that much throughout the event. You had the team work spot on and worked well with it but the other parts off a tag match were not there. I didnt even see a hot tag (were the face is crawling to his partner and when he finally tags him the partner beats up the other 2 guys) Watch some tag matches on Youtube and just look at how it is done and what the 2 teams do in the match that makes it work. Also I saw your hand too many time in this. But other than that it was a great PPV and I enjoyed it. I give this a 7/10. Keep up the good work man, Your really showing signs of improvement.

[Ethan]

Oct 10, 2013 4:09:31 GMT -5 JC Deadly Shot! said:

Hey man, This was a great PPV. Your posing has very much improved I can see you have watched other feds and have looked more closely on TV and have put that into your fed. Nice job. Some poses were still weird and I did see your hand and fingers a couple times, But your still improving alot and it shows through this PPV.
The first match was great, there was not a whole lot of good psychology but there was some great moments in that one. Also that Jericho enzuguri that he did was posed perfectly, possibly the best pose of the PPV. The second match was not that greatly posed but the tag team work was really there and it worked good. The moves that ADR and Rey did were great. The segment with Steenerico was good but I was kind of hoping when Barrett came out that he would announce a new partner with him or something to still have a match but I didnt matter that much. The forth match seemed odd for some reason I think it was because of just how the teams IMO on paper can seem like gold but when you really try to get them in the ring and make a match, it just didnt seem to work or fit. Its like some of the Triple H/Lesnar matches. I didnt see there maina one yet but the SS and ER matches between them were not that good just because it didnt seem to fit with there styles or the stuff they did in the matches. When they planned it they probably though and we all did too that it would be classics but it just didnt turn out that way and I kind of go that feeling with this match. The fifth match was good but during the start the pacing of the match was not there. There was some great tag moves though and the false finishers were great as well. The sixth match really made up the both teams past stuff in this PPV. Like truths team didnt quite seem that good in there first match and Steenerico didnt even have a match so this match really made up for that. Some poses were off and I saw your hands at times but the match was still enjoyable. The attack on truth by Rollins afterwards was great. I already like them more as enemys than as a team lol. The triple threat was great it was nice and spotty and felt like a triple threat match witch you did good. The YES moment with the crowd was awesome. Some poses I can see you really focused on in this match and others I could see seemed rushed. That Canadian Destroyer was FUCKING CRAZY! The main event tag was good but I kind of expected better. The constant taging in and out with Punks team was good but it was too early for a submission hold on Steen. This match felt too quick and rushed. I was hoping that Richards would come back out and atleast try to help Punk but I think it will instead build up something better between the 2 I hope.

This PPV was great man, But I got to say that there was not really any Tag Team psycology that much throughout the event. You had the team work spot on and worked well with it but the other parts off a tag match were not there. I didnt even see a hot tag (were the face is crawling to his partner and when he finally tags him the partner beats up the other 2 guys) Watch some tag matches on Youtube and just look at how it is done and what the 2 teams do in the match that makes it work. Also I saw your hand too many time in this. But other than that it was a great PPV and I enjoyed it. I give this a 7/10. Keep up the good work man, Your really showing signs of improvement.

Thank you so much JC, This really means a lot to me. I am not the best at tag team matches I will say that but I needed to get my tag team division going again, and I agree that my hand was in it quite a lot and more in the last matches that I was filming, I guess because I wanted to get them finished. But I am proud of this and I'm glad other people, especially as good as you. Thanks again man this really means a lot

[Jack]

This was much better than I thought it would be. Set up looks great, nice generic indy feel to it which is neat. Just be carefull with some of the joint movements that you dont exagerrate them to much to hence make them unrealistic. As Mike always says, strangely enough you can move them TOO much. Occasionally I felt a few of the transitions lacked a few pics just to make them a tad smoother. tbh, in general, the posing wasnt too bad. I really liked some of the sequences. The amount of time you gave each match was also good. You could work on pacing even more though. I have to say also sometimes you could have in general had more tag team moves/combinations/teamwork. It felt slightly like a singles competitions, but in the form of a tag team tourny if that makes sense. Just work on the small inconsistencies and you could be a serious fedder man.

I liked this in stages actually quite a bit, it has alot of potential to be a serious show. I would however rate this a solid, 6.5.

[Ethan]

Thank you everyone <3

[Wicked]

I really liked this show. I think you've improved a lot and now I am going to watch every show you do.

[Gnaddi]

Watched that show already some time ago but never left a comment. The show was very good. You have great posing! Yeah there are lots of hand spots but that also happend to me with my old camera. Can´t see them on the small screen but then on the computer damn... The customs need a little more work in my opinion, some really looked bad and that´s something that can ruin a match for me. I see lots of potential in your fed. Another point to make it better would to get a scale ring, but I know these things are expensive as hell these days. Anyhow looking forward to your next PPV.