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Post by Ethan on Nov 10, 2013 1:16:16 GMT -5
Enjoy this and please leave a comment, also if you really like it subscribe to my channel
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Post by JC Deadly Shot! on Nov 16, 2013 7:28:24 GMT -5
This was great man, Your posing is improving slowly through every show. The rolling elbow poses with Hero were some of the best poses Ive seen you do. Bryan and Bourne for me was a show stealer but during the finish it seemed like it dragged on a bit too long. I liked how Bryan made Bourne continue the match. IMO you should have had the finish right after Bryan reversed the Air Bourne into the triangle choke, Both guys were at the top in the match and it seemed like the perfect moment but when you started adding more reverse frankenstieners, and canadian destroyers that it just started getting too dragged. The camera angles you should really work on because some are good and most of them are from high above that it just makes it difficult to enjoy when its too far away to see exactly whats happening. But I can tell through your PPVs that you are improving alot. 7/10 man, Keep it up.
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Post by Dylan. on Nov 16, 2013 9:37:15 GMT -5
I really enjoyed it. More people need to give you a chance, and watch this. Posing was solid, and I got into most of the matches. Your best show yet, great job.
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Post by Jack on Nov 16, 2013 11:49:56 GMT -5
Right, FWA time. This was a pretty good show to be honest, and one of your best. I really like the way you do the near falls, they work really well and are very effective. A few of the sequences during this looked a tad confusing but there was not to many of them. Just keep trying to utilise all the joints in the figures to avoid the few stiff poses. The 3 way was maybe a bit too much of a WWE style 3 way for me, like revolving door kinda match, but had some nice near falls at the end. Just again keep all your poses as realistic as possible, I like your top rope moves, they do contain alot of realism in them which I am impressed with. Your set up also is really well done, simple but gives it a nice feel. I do feel the show did drag a bit long for my liking, as in it is a pretty damn long watch and maybe a tad too long than what this show needed to be. Main event was pretty good. I agree with Jchannels comment about camera angles, they are quite high.
I would rate this actually 7.25. Pretty good show and worth checking out guys.
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Post by Ethan on Nov 16, 2013 15:33:01 GMT -5
Thank you all, I really appreciate it. I will take the advice and try my best to use it and make,y fed better.
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Post by Ethan on Nov 16, 2013 15:33:23 GMT -5
Thank you all, I really appreciate it. I will take the advice and try my best to use it and make my fed better.
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Post by Karl Malone on Nov 17, 2013 0:29:40 GMT -5
um..I like our posing and your matches but your arena is awful, Not trying to be cruel but the little details matter please get something like a black poster board i should not be interested in your patio and get rid of that random ass vans box or cover it up with some construction paper.I'm mean presentation isnt everything but it helps the fed out.But nice show and next show have a better arena
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Post by Karl Malone on Nov 17, 2013 0:34:46 GMT -5
aww yea you should just get a spring ring.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 17, 2013 4:21:30 GMT -5
um..I like our posing and your matches but your arena is awful, Not trying to be cruel but the little details matter please get something like a black poster board i should not be interested in your patio and get rid of that random ass vans box or cover it up with some construction paper.I'm mean presentation isnt everything but it helps the fed out.But nice show and next show have a better arena I built my Scale ring from scratch while y'all MTHERFUCKAS BUY SPRINGS |
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