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Post by Dylan. on Nov 15, 2013 16:30:31 GMT -5
I hope you guys like it, I really am not sure what I think of this show. I tried to use this more of a story line and character development show. Enjoy?
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Post by Jack on Nov 15, 2013 17:04:38 GMT -5
New Show. Yay. Love the set up firstly, looks really good, simple but effective. Opener is a match I wanted to see. Liked the pacing here and the flow of the match. A few poses looked a tiny bit strange but in general the early exchanges were pretty fun. Loved the kick to Gabriel on the outside and the ending here worked well I felt. Mid card to this show was pretty solid actually, nothing blew me away but it was all pretty consistent and a card I enjoyed actually. I see what you meant about the show being more storyline base which I don't mind every now and again. I did feel Bryan VS Dragon did drag a bit for me, ending was a bit sudden I felt and one I wasn't a huge fan off. Really like how you perceive Hardy in your fed works well and I really did like that match. Loved the Rana over the rope. Main event was a good match as well but not my favourite main event especially with your current standards. I did love the ending sequences though, that did save the match for me.
I would rate this a pretty solid 7.5.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 15, 2013 17:48:37 GMT -5
New Show. Yay. Love the set up firstly, looks really good, simple but effective. Opener is a match I wanted to see. Liked the pacing here and the flow of the match. A few poses looked a tiny bit strange but in general the early exchanges were pretty fun. Loved the kick to Gabriel on the outside and the ending here worked well I felt. Mid card to this show was pretty solid actually, nothing blew me away but it was all pretty consistent and a card I enjoyed actually. I see what you meant about the show being more storyline base which I don't mind every now and again. I did feel Bryan VS Dragon did drag a bit for me, ending was a bit sudden I felt and one I wasn't a huge fan off. Really like how you perceive Hardy in your fed works well and I really did like that match. Loved the Rana over the rope. Main event was a good match as well but not my favourite main event especially with your current standards. I did love the ending sequences though, that did save the match for me. I would rate this a pretty solid 7.5. Agreed
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Post by PhoenixFeathers on Nov 15, 2013 17:54:59 GMT -5
First off, the headstand battle in the opening match was great. LOL I really have no complaints in this match minus Gabriel's 450 looking a little odd. Great opener and I didn't expect the ending. Dragon Vs Dragon BAH GAWD ALMIGHTY! Just like to say I love the chain wrestling in here. It seems odd at some point but you're using a ruthless dragon so I can't really knock off points for it. The ending was slightly odd for me. Still a good match, very technical. BAH GAWD Wade Barrett just killed the Undertaker! I love the way you're using Natalya. This should be an interesting match. I liked this match, the chaos reminded me of a classic Rated RKO match. Jericho coming in was a nice touch. You finally did a nice Killswitch! LOL. Liked this match. Storms and Hardy Oh LAWD. That rolling elbow was devastating. Hardy picking up the win was surprising. BRUTALITY! OH MY GAWD ITS THE SHIELD! Storms has got his work cut out for him. Time to get balls deep in some Cesaro Vs Bourne. I like that Cesaro is dominating, few odd poses with him but after using the figure myself, I don't blame you. Holy shit, bourne just fucked him up! That cartwheel moonsault over the turnbuckle was awesome, but I doubt ANYBODY would do that. Feel free to prove me wrong. LAWL. Good match, love the lack of False Finishes. MAIN EVENT TIME SON. I didn't expect wrestling here. Austin & Punk are really being a team here. They're kicking ass. WHAT THE FUCK? Sami just powerbombed a mini punk on the apron? LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL BAH GAWD AUSTIN, AUSTIN'S DEAD! The ending was nice, good job.
Good show, your shows are getting better and better. Few odd poses, some fingers. Other than that, I like it. 8.5/10
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Post by Ethan on Nov 15, 2013 20:16:05 GMT -5
BRILLIANT SHOW! I loved the opener, I couldn't tell who was gonna win but I love that Ziggler won. Dragon vs Bryan was good but not the best of the show. I love how your using Natty Niedhart kind of like Candice LeRae. Bringing Jericho out was a good touch. Storm vs Hardy was good and I'm glad that Jeff won. SIERRA HOTEL INDIA ECHO LIMA DELTA SHIIIIIIEEEELD!!!! Storm is in some deep shit now. Cesaro vs Bourne was great! MOTN right there, I loved this. The cart wheel flip was great! the main event was very well done, STONE COLDS DEAD BAH GAWD!!!!!!! Good ending.
All around great show, 8.3 out of 10
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Post by The Wolf of Wal-Mart on Nov 16, 2013 9:24:12 GMT -5
Great show. The pacing of the matches was spot on. My favourite match was Evan Bourne vs Antonio Cesaro. I'd also like to see where The Shield angle goes. I really enjoyed this show. Looking forward to F3AR of the Dark. I'd say this is about a 7.25 to 7.75 out of 10.
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Post by Trademark on Nov 16, 2013 12:13:55 GMT -5
Alright, m8, let's do this. Very cool stage but I'm not sure what the point was of J Gabe going on the mic with no text. Anyways, this was a pretty good opener. The pacing of the match was good and it seems your posing has improved a lot since the last time I viewed your fed. The headstand battle was very neat so kudos on that. The 450 was very awkward as well as the Zig Zag but I still enjoyed the match. Really nice length for an opener. Dragon Vs. Dragon time. Tis should be solid. Not gonna lie, I got lost a few times in this match. I just really couldn't get into even though it was technical. I feel like the posing was very odd at times. For example, look at Bryan's punches near the 8:50 mark. Ultimo Dragon is just laying there stiff as a board. Like Mike said, the ending just didn't do it for me. I felt like it was just too much. It might of just been the way you posed it, though. I'm very un-familiar on what you're doing with Taker and Wade but I do look forward to seeing what you can pull off with them. The tag match was good for what it was. I do think that it boiled down way to quickly. Maybe it's because I don't know the backstory of the feud. Either way, the moonsault looked nice and the Killswitch was good. The rolling elbow looked awesome in the Storms Vs. Hardy match but other than that not really much to say. Very cool how Antonio is man-handling wee little Evan Bourne. The UFO looked really good. Handspring moonsault over the top looked really cool. I feel like all of the sudden your posing picked up. Nice ending there. So far, that was my favorite match of the show. The main event was solid. Nice ending and had good back and fourth brawling like expected. It was pretty good. I'm seeing big signs of improvement match quality wise and posing. A few things that did throw me off is some awkward posing here and there as well as the ref standing in the same spot for a long period of time. Move him around and what not. Sometimes small things make a big difference. Solid stuff though. You'll do some big things in 2014, dude. If I had to rate I'd go with a 7?
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Post by Dylan. on Nov 16, 2013 15:06:19 GMT -5
Alright, m8, let's do this. Very cool stage but I'm not sure what the point was of J Gabe going on the mic with no text. Anyways, this was a pretty good opener. The pacing of the match was good and it seems your posing has improved a lot since the last time I viewed your fed. The headstand battle was very neat so kudos on that. The 450 was very awkward as well as the Zig Zag but I still enjoyed the match. Really nice length for an opener. Dragon Vs. Dragon time. Tis should be solid. Not gonna lie, I got lost a few times in this match. I just really couldn't get into even though it was technical. I feel like the posing was very odd at times. For example, look at Bryan's punches near the 8:50 mark. Ultimo Dragon is just laying there stiff as a board. Like Mike said, the ending just didn't do it for me. I felt like it was just too much. It might of just been the way you posed it, though. I'm very un-familiar on what you're doing with Taker and Wade but I do look forward to seeing what you can pull off with them. The tag match was good for what it was. I do think that it boiled down way to quickly. Maybe it's because I don't know the backstory of the feud. Either way, the moonsault looked nice and the Killswitch was good. The rolling elbow looked awesome in the Storms Vs. Hardy match but other than that not really much to say. Very cool how Antonio is man-handling wee little Evan Bourne. The UFO looked really good. Handspring moonsault over the top looked really cool. I feel like all of the sudden your posing picked up. Nice ending there. So far, that was my favorite match of the show. The main event was solid. Nice ending and had good back and fourth brawling like expected. It was pretty good. I'm seeing big signs of improvement match quality wise and posing. A few things that did throw me off is some awkward posing here and there as well as the ref standing in the same spot for a long period of time. Move him around and what not. Sometimes small things make a big difference. Solid stuff though. You'll do some big things in 2014, dude. If I had to rate I'd go with a 7? First off, I really appreciate that you left a review and watched it. Thanks for the advice, and as usual I will take the advice. I appreciate it man.
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Post by Trademark on Nov 16, 2013 15:51:19 GMT -5
No problem, bro. Like I said, I have a good feeling you'll be putting out awesome shows next year.
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Post by Dylan. on Nov 17, 2013 9:34:15 GMT -5
Bump
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Post by Wicked on Nov 17, 2013 11:27:08 GMT -5
i am going to update this after I finish my essay. 13EVA
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Post by Steiner Recliner on Nov 18, 2013 10:11:09 GMT -5
I really liked this whole show. As John said 2014 may be the year of Shrek! My only problem with the whole show was the mixture of a ruthless figure and a basic. Literally the only downfall of the entire show. Cesaro and Bourne may be one of your best matches yet! Super excited for your next show as the card looks really damn good. Keep it up muh fucka!
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Post by Wicked on Nov 18, 2013 20:19:59 GMT -5
Man this was such a great show. I really liked the whole show but My favourite match had to be Dragon vs. Dragon or the Main event tag. Great show bud and nice sig ... Anyways 8 Rolling Elbows outta 10! 17EVA
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