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Post by UnitedWePurge! on Nov 23, 2013 20:40:35 GMT -5
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Post by PhoenixFeathers on Nov 23, 2013 21:32:20 GMT -5
I don't even know what to say honestly. I gave you advice. I gave you so much advice and I feel like you just didn't even attempt to make any changes. I don't want you to get mad but seriously, what was this? I told you to tone down the ridiculous spots and what do you do? first match we see a fucking superplex to the outside onto the stage. I tell you to calm down with all the shitty plot twists and boom, you do more! This is starting to get ridiculous. I feel at times you just throw shit together and it really grinds my gears because you have so much potential. I can't get into any of your storylines because they change in so much it's like they are a 14 year old girl. I'm sorry to say, but I literally enjoyed none of this and the only upside to the show was posing. Which in retrospect looked great minus the lazy ass poses with figures with bigger knee pads. Also, not every match of the night needs to be a 5 star classic with huge moves, finisher after finisher and false finishes. You honestly need to fix this, it's so broken and I feel you can't pick up the pieces, but PLEASE try.
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Post by Dylan. on Nov 23, 2013 21:33:51 GMT -5
I don't even know what to say honestly. I gave you advice. I gave you so much advice and I feel like you just didn't even attempt to make any changes. I don't want you to get mad but seriously, what was this? I told you to tone down the ridiculous spots and what do you do? first match we see a fucking superplex to the outside onto the stage. I tell you to calm down with all the shitty plot twists and boom, you do more! This is starting to get ridiculous. I feel at times you just throw shit together and it really grinds my gears because you have so much potential. I can't get into any of your storylines because they change in so much it's like they are a 14 year old girl. I'm sorry to say, but I literally enjoyed none of this and the only upside to the show was posing. Which in retrospect looked great minus the lazy ass poses with figures with bigger knee pads. Also, not every match of the night needs to be a 5 star classic with huge moves, finisher after finisher and false finishes. You honestly need to fix this, it's so broken and I feel you can't pick up the pieces, but PLEASE try.
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Post by Trademark on Nov 23, 2013 21:35:15 GMT -5
I feel like your face equals The Miz in your signature after you read Mike's comments.
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Post by Jesus on Nov 23, 2013 21:48:02 GMT -5
I'm happy you got the ref but you should move him around don't make him just stand there. Also he got killed about three times by Jbl , big show , etc. one thing that threw me off was when Ziggler got speard and then like a second later he instantly got up, should've had him down then Rollins pun him and have Ziggler kick out also you didn't use the cage up that much only in the two main events but not too much. I have to agree with mike about the storyline thing because I thought punk was leading the nwo not the avengers not saying their nothing wrong with punk being in a different stable but you just finish having punk and nwo against cena and the shield and you never continued with the shield attacking everybody and who they were gonna fued with besides big show but I will say I liked the cena and punk match the best but the ending drew me off and I feel like you didn't put your effort in that main event you could've done so much and you forgot the ref for the main event just work on your movement of the ref and booking /storylines for matches I give this a 7 you could do way better
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Post by UnitedWePurge! on Nov 23, 2013 21:59:15 GMT -5
Thanks for the feedback, wow I just lost a lot of motivation for pic fedding...lol
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Post by Steiner Recliner on Nov 23, 2013 22:15:08 GMT -5
Sheesh, gonna drop a comment tommorow. Not your best.
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Post by TeamKennedy - FWF on Nov 23, 2013 22:28:13 GMT -5
My overall comments on the match is speechless, and that's not really a good thing...
First Match- Way too much time on the entrances. 50+ seconds is pushing it. Decent posing. A semi-good variety of moves. Slight confusion though on why the shield came out but never helped Roman Reigns. Dolph then went on to fight the rest of the shield, but tried to pin Seth Rollins. Truthfuly, I'm not even sure which member of the Shield was fighting. The match, in my opinion, is too slow paced (Such as the ref counting to three taking up 6+ pics). I'm not really sure why Dolph continued to attack Seth Rollins after winning the match. If Dolph even won the match, who knows. Then why does The Giant come out and fight Roman Reigns? Also, a ref is always a nice touch to any Pic Fed, unless they just stand around and don't do anything (Except count). Wait, so now the Shield is jumping in? So it seems like we have three different matches going on at once. 4/10.
Second Match- I'm not really sure why Wade Barrett is sitting in a chair, but whatever. This match was pretty decent, I like the unique movesets. The fact that the match was back and forth is a good aspect, much more entertaining than one wrestler dominating the entire match. This match seemed much more fast paced, rather than the previous one/two matches. But why are the two superstars now sitting in chairs with different camera angles toward the end? Ok... 6/10.
Third Match- This match was actually pretty enjoyable. Although the back-to-back Lockdown matches were kinda overkill. Overall the posing and move sets were pretty good. 7/10.
Fourth Match- Another Lockdown match?... Pretty decent posing and I felt the ref was more "active" this match compared to the last three. The overall match was fairly realistic to a normal WWE match, not sure if that was intended but I'll assume it was. Also, not sure why 5+ other wrestlers came running in at the end? 6/10.
Fifth Match- Another Lockdown match..... Why? I like how Triple H has Shawn Michaels and Chris Jericho had Christain, adds to to the whole match. One issue I have is the subtitles "Is he on drugs or something?" not sure if this is supposed to add to a future storyline, but this is pretty out of place. The weapons in the match, were extremely overkill. The posing decreased this match, same with any realistic aspect. I liked the title change at the end, extremely creative. 6.5/10
Finishing comments- 6./10 This PPV wasn't good at all. If I see another Lockdown match I'm going to throwup. In all reality I do feel you have potential and could put on a pretty good PPV. Better luck next time I guess...
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Post by Wicked on Nov 24, 2013 1:34:30 GMT -5
I just watched this, I really only liked the Generico vs. JBL match the rest of the show was mediocre. No offence. As many have said, you have a lot of twists and turns, it is harder to keep up with all the storylines sometimes (especially the factions?). I don't mean to hurt your feelings but I am just trying to help. I actually really liked the JBL Generico match. Besides the ending... Posing was ok, It was a tad sloppy at times like Mike said. I know you can improve buddy. So show us what you can do for your next show and shut our mouths by having a great next show. I like your customs, very clean. Anyways I believe in you buddy.
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Post by Gnaddi on Nov 24, 2013 6:33:38 GMT -5
Just watched it. I felt the opener was really good. Yeah that subplex to the outside was crazy, especially for the opener. But otherwise I think it was a nice way to start of the show. Big Show vs Reigns was not as good as the Ziggler vs Rollins match. But still solid. Now into the cage. I was not a big fan of JBL vs El Generico when I read the card. The match was ok, not my favourite though. Orton vs Gabriel was good troughout. Randy kicking out of the 450 from the cage was a little unrealistic to me. Cena vs Punk was my favourite match of the night. Great wrestling. I did not like the ending tha much though. The bew froup you have there now looks just thrown together IMO. The main event was good also. Maybe a little too many crazy spots but it ws the Main Event so... again the ending sucked IMO. You have a Hardcore cage match won by DQ? And before in a normal singles match you have the Shield attacking the Giant without getting DQed. This just did nor feel right to me. Overall I liked this show. Posing was amazing as usual and I was glad to see you using a ref. Still like Mike already said there were too many crazy spots and false finishes. But I actually enjoyed this show more as your previouse.
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Post by PhoenixFeathers on Nov 24, 2013 7:45:06 GMT -5
I know you're bum'd by your responses, but you honestly needed it. Post a show next month, prove us wrong. Please, I would be glad for you to shut me up.
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Post by UnitedWePurge! on Nov 24, 2013 12:12:57 GMT -5
I know you're bum'd by your responses, but you honestly needed it. Post a show next month, prove us wrong. Please, I would be glad for you to shut me up. Maybe a little. But yes I did need it, and my next show is in January. More time to work on The Rumble to improve!
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Post by UnitedWePurge! on Nov 24, 2013 12:13:35 GMT -5
Thank you Everyone for the feedback. I needed it!
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Post by Deleted on Nov 24, 2013 14:31:46 GMT -5
honestly chris, ive always loved your fed. never hated a single show of yours. not even this one! great job!
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Post by PRIME Wrestling on Nov 24, 2013 14:40:26 GMT -5
See, your posing and pictures are good, but the quality of your matches and the storylines are lacking, and almost not there. The crazy storylines are too crazy and it's hard to follow PPV's from month to month. You have way too crazy spots and way too early in the match. It's like you try to one-up yourself every PPV to a point where the shows are becoming unwatchable.
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