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Post by King Of Spice on Dec 2, 2013 16:23:16 GMT -5
Here it finally is guys. I'm sorry for the last part being rushed. I needed to get it out and I have to watch my niece in 10 mins. So, I tried my balls off to improve on posing, and I hope I did. Part 1.
Part 2.
Hope you enjoy my show guys.
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Post by WAIF on Dec 8, 2013 20:40:15 GMT -5
Okay im just going to tell you what ypu need to work on and what you did well Picture Quality and Angles- It looks like you used a lot of zoom. It didnt feel organic. It was very awkward
Your posing wasnt bad. I understood most of what was going on.
I couldnt get into the matches.
Also you put out a 7 minute PPV. It could have been longer. You had some strong matches but honestly none lived up to my expectations.
You have potential and I know you can get better.
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Post by King Of Spice on Dec 9, 2013 13:24:59 GMT -5
Okay im just going to tell you what ypu need to work on and what you did well Picture Quality and Angles- It looks like you used a lot of zoom. It didnt feel organic. It was very awkward Your posing wasnt bad. I understood most of what was going on. I couldnt get into the matches. Also you put out a 7 minute PPV. It could have been longer. You had some strong matches but honestly none lived up to my expectations. You have potential and I know you can get better. Thanks bro. It was really rushed yeah, I'm making Christmas Clash much bigger and much more full.
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Post by WAIF on Dec 9, 2013 15:18:58 GMT -5
Okay im just going to tell you what ypu need to work on and what you did well Picture Quality and Angles- It looks like you used a lot of zoom. It didnt feel organic. It was very awkward Your posing wasnt bad. I understood most of what was going on. I couldnt get into the matches. Also you put out a 7 minute PPV. It could have been longer. You had some strong matches but honestly none lived up to my expectations. You have potential and I know you can get better. Thanks bro. It was really rushed yeah, I'm making Christmas Clash much bigger and much more full. Ok I cant wait to review it bro!
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Post by Jack on Dec 12, 2013 13:51:36 GMT -5
What you need to work on is the posing and where you take each frame. You could probably come back slightly and try and get more of the figure in each frame. Try also to move every joint in EVERY figure in a pose. This makes it more realistic and also gives the whole match a much better flow and pacing. The length was pretty short, but I dont mind a short show, if done well.
I would rate this, 4.5.
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Post by Wicked on Dec 14, 2013 0:55:05 GMT -5
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Post by King Of Spice on Dec 14, 2013 3:55:48 GMT -5
Cheers mate, that thread really useful.
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