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Post by JC Deadly Shot! on Dec 13, 2013 1:05:39 GMT -5
PART 1:
PART 2:
Enjoy and please leave a comment.
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Post by King Of Spice on Dec 13, 2013 2:13:18 GMT -5
Absolutely amazing show. Some of your best work right here.
The first opening promo was solid, I loved how the entire roster came out, it really highlighted how deep the HHH-Jordans feud is. Now for the first match - Solid spots, and great posing. Now, all of the matches were spot on really. There's basically nothing to pick up on. I would rate this a solid 8.75 doges out of 10.
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Post by Trademark on Dec 13, 2013 5:38:36 GMT -5
I will leave a longer comment when the full show is out. Incredible work though, and you're a true testament to the Pic Fed board.
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Post by Dylan. on Dec 13, 2013 7:31:17 GMT -5
In Booker T's voice OH MAH GOODNESS
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Post by Deleted on Dec 13, 2013 12:26:48 GMT -5
it 28 minutes and only Two Parts :0
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Post by FWL on Dec 13, 2013 18:16:19 GMT -5
Great start to the PPV. All matches were really enjoyable to watch. Nothing absolutely spectacular in any of them, but there doesn't need to be. Your matches are consistent, the pacing is great, and everything just flows together really well. Your storylines are great, I love that there's something going on with just about every match. Zack Gowen, divas, vignettes, match graphics... You're doing things that no one else is doing, and you're doing them really well.
My only gripes are minor things; your posing is great, but the way you sell moves is a bit inconsistent. Sometimes you sell them absolutely perfect, other times it seems like they're a bit undersold. The one that stood out to me was in the opener, when Ziggler hit a suplex on Bryan. Also, I notice that you change the way you do pins with every match. Some you do 3-counts, some you do just one. I get that three counts are necessary with some of the things you're doing with them, but it just bugged me a bit that you kept changing it match to match.
Like I said, minor things. Other than that, there's not much I would change. I can't believe this is only part ONE, and the main event is still to come. I love what you're doing, man. Keep it up.
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Post by JC Deadly Shot! on Dec 13, 2013 18:49:58 GMT -5
Thanks guys! I just want to remind you that part 2 is just the 2 final big matches, (3 stages of hell tag and JC/HHH) Im working on the 3 stages of hell tag now and I wanted to make these matches the best of the card and also the longest there fore I wanted to put it into 2 separate parts for you guys to watch the under and mid card now and then be blown away by the two main events later on. BTW Part 2 might be uploaded either Christmas eve or hell even Christmas itself. I dont expect any quick sudden reviews considering by the time I upload part 2 it will be that time of year that we will be with our families.
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Post by Wicked on Dec 14, 2013 0:32:39 GMT -5
This was a pretty awesome show. I really enjoyed it. My favourite match was the Hardcore ThreeWay dance. Great show. The posing for the most part was pretty good except a couple stiff poses. Anyways great show. I think it's one of your better ones. Great job!
7 Colt Cabana Headbands outta 10.
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Post by Jack on Dec 16, 2013 3:24:56 GMT -5
I will wait to see Part 2 before i give it a rating.
But this was great work here. The amount of effort into this show is freaking amazing. So much work that really makes me tip your hat off. Yes, there was a few iffy poses here and there but 90% of the poses were nicely done and flowed well into each other. Storytelling is freaking amazing, you put so much effort into that which is why I love your fed.
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Post by JC Deadly Shot! on Dec 29, 2013 1:35:55 GMT -5
Ok guys Part 2 is now up! Enjoy and Please leave a comment!
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Post by Trademark on Dec 30, 2013 2:29:48 GMT -5
Like I said in my previous comment, incredible work. There are so many little things you do that really catch my attention such as Bubba flopping to the mat and D-Von convulsing, just to name a few. Your posing is excellent and is honestly some of the best on this forum. My only gripe of course is the length. I understand that you are adding promos and backstage segments but that is a massive amount of time for a show and I honestly believe that's why you don't get as many comments as you should. The first match was good. Lots of good moves, great action, and I didn't know who was going to win, which was a bonus. I'm really excited for Angle Vs. Taker. That should be nothing short of awesome. The second match was alright. Like I said earlier, the little things are nice and in this case JBL walking out with a towel because he got the green mist. I liked the way it ended and I'm looking forward to seeing how you work with this new stable. The hardcore match was just great and probably my 2nd favorite match of the night. I was curious on how well you were going to use that Raven but you managed to do well with it. Loved the Pepsi Plunge through the table. That especially looked great. Gowen/RVD and Trish/Christian Vs. Lita/Matt weren't bad but were not memorable either. I did like the run in by Rhyno and big props on using a figure with one leg. The Three Stages of Hell match was my favorite match of the night. Great stuff all around but the best shined when they got locked up in the cage. Big fan of the diving off the cage spots. Also, great job on executing Mankind's need for a #1 Contender shot. No complaints about the main event. It was a nice brawl that did the job of what a main event should do. Longest match on the card and it put a nice end to the feud of Jordans/Evolution.
I do understand that you want to make it like an actual PPV, but that is a very long video. I don't mind watching, I just need some time to watch the whole show. Seriously, an hour long is quite redic and I bet that it's a reason why you don't get as many views as you should because you can have great matches. Enough with the criticism, and I can hope that you take it on board instead of going, 'well why don't you do another PPV, then', and onto the positives. I do appreciate you putting in all the time and effort, though. It WAS a good show. Your posing is fantastic, you can put on a great technical match and then have a nice hardcore brawl and you also now how to put a final chapter on a story. I like that you are a feud focused fed, that is nice to see. At the end of Jordans Vs. Triple H I felt as if Colt finally overcame Evolution. Nice job, man.
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Post by JC Deadly Shot! on Dec 30, 2013 5:08:30 GMT -5
Like I said in my previous comment, incredible work. There are so many little things you do that really catch my attention such as Bubba flopping to the mat and D-Von convulsing, just to name a few. Your posing is excellent and is honestly some of the best on this forum. My only gripe of course is the length. I understand that you are adding promos and backstage segments but that is a massive amount of time for a show and I honestly believe that's why you don't get as many comments as you should. The first match was good. Lots of good moves, great action, and I didn't know who was going to win, which was a bonus. I'm really excited for Angle Vs. Taker. That should be nothing short of awesome. The second match was alright. Like I said earlier, the little things are nice and in this case JBL walking out with a towel because he got the green mist. I liked the way it ended and I'm looking forward to seeing how you work with this new stable. The hardcore match was just great and probably my 2nd favorite match of the night. I was curious on how well you were going to use that Raven but you managed to do well with it. Loved the Pepsi Plunge through the table. That especially looked great. Gowen/RVD and Trish/Christian Vs. Lita/Matt weren't bad but were not memorable either. I did like the run in by Rhyno and big props on using a figure with one leg. The Three Stages of Hell match was my favorite match of the night. Great stuff all around but the best shined when they got locked up in the cage. Big fan of the diving off the cage spots. Also, great job on executing Mankind's need for a #1 Contender shot. No complaints about the main event. It was a nice brawl that did the job of what a main event should do. Longest match on the card and it put a nice end to the feud of Jordans/Evolution. I do understand that you want to make it like an actual PPV, but that is a very long video. I don't mind watching, I just need some time to watch the whole show. Seriously, an hour long is quite redic and I bet that it's a reason why you don't get as many views as you should because you can have great matches. Enough with the criticism, and I can hope that you take it on board instead of going, 'well why don't you do another PPV, then', and onto the positives. I do appreciate you putting in all the time and effort, though. It WAS a good show. Your posing is fantastic, you can put on a great technical match and then have a nice hardcore brawl and you also now how to put a final chapter on a story. I like that you are a feud focused fed, that is nice to see. At the end of Jordans Vs. Triple H I felt as if Colt finally overcame Evolution. Nice job, man. Wow bro, this comment really means alot to me. I couldn't agree with you more on all criticisms, And Im gonna really try to work on my length of things. I have been told this before so I think its time that I start to do it. Thanks alot for your comment and UWAW Judgement Day is coming soon! |
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Post by Wicked on Dec 30, 2013 23:37:15 GMT -5
I really enjoyed both parts for this show. I think you have such a great fed. Great storylines. I really love the 2002-2005 WWE type brand that the UWAW has. Great shows. The amount of time you spend on making your shows is awesome. I love all the promos they really set up feuds well. You have good posing. Damn you have come so far from being the guy with the Dresser Fed to having such a unique awesome fed.
- The Tag Team Title match was spectacular. I never heard of a Tag Team 3 Stages of Hell. How original. Great Idea. There were so many great counters and moves used. That fire spot was really awesome. I loved this match and the twist ending. Some great hardcore brawling action!
- I love the twist ending and I really like who became #1 Contender. Damn Mcmahon.
-Triple H vs. Colt "Deadly" Jordans was an awesome match with awesome brawling and hardcore action. What a crazy Stage spot by Jordans. This was a good match.
This all together was a great show!
I have to give it all together a BIG
8.5 stage splashes out of 10!
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Post by Steiner Recliner on Jan 1, 2014 1:34:25 GMT -5
This show on all levels was so god damn amazing dude. I loved the little things you did in this show like Devon's convulsing after Kane hit him with the table. The fact that JBL had green mist on his face during the match was awesome. Just the little things you do are awesome. You're honestly one of my favorites going today dude. My only problems with this show were the length ( understandable due to the promos) and the ring.
Solid 8.5/10
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