FWL: Proving Ground II

[FWL]

Here it is! Comments and criticism appreciated as always. Thanks for watching!

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I'm watching this before I start working on Rise To Glory some more. I'm excited for Miz/HBK.

[Jesus]

It was ok you really need to work on your poses and just bend the joints more that's the privileged of having elites. you should get another stage, this one is breaking down and it's too plain. Be creative with the stage. you could've done more with the main event and other matches like Cesaro vs Jericho. Not your best work but work on your poses. I liked the promos a lot you and the way you used randy Orton in that promo. one thing about the Orton and mankind match was the use of the trash can, I believe you did a little too much with having Orton inside the trash can Like that kinda was too much. you should've just had him in the trash for just like maybe 4-5 pics at most but yea. Also I liked the opener, it was very solid and like I said it would've been much better if your poses was on point and what I mean by this aswell is fix the wrist, the boots ,the legs, and the stuff that looked bad. The battle royal was ok as well but ryback did a little bit too much. I'm not trying to tell you what to do but when you film a match with many participants, have them all move around, don't just have them stiff, waiting to do a spot. Overall I rate this a 6,9/10. Work on your poses, stage , and when you film your rumble, please move the other figures. I have a lot of faith in your fed and I know you could better man. please don't take this wrong way. It's just feedback

[Wicked]

This show was pretty entertaining. I liked it a lot. Good job. However with that said I agree with the phenomenal 1. I think you can improve on posing. Try to bend the joints more buddy.Take a look at this. forum.wrestlingfigs.com/thread/67813/brms-rules-posing this should help you.
I am excited for the next show.

[Ethan]

I loved thus show! It was very well done. The way you pose your figures gives the moves so much impact. Oh and I love how your using the Miz, making him vicious and dangerous, it's great!

Del Rio vs Guerrero ***

Cesaro vs Jericho ***1/2

Orton vs Mankind ***1/4

MITB ****

Miz vs Michaels ****1/4 (MOTN)

Kane vs Hart *** 1/2

Great show! Well done.

[JC Deadly Shot!]

Ok dude Im gonna be honest, I havn't seen your stuff for a while but this clearly shows that you have improved a ton from the last time. The posing is great the matches a more paced and its just better all round. The opener was good but was a bit confused with the ending but it was cool Barrett and Regal coming out. Jericho and Cesaro was a great match and you used Cesaro great in this I loved when he turned the lionsault into a back breaker, great stuff. But what seemed odd in this match was when Jericho was unable to shoulder tackle Cesaro and Cesaro kept teasing him pointing at the ropes for him to do it again, it just makes no sense cause they are the both the same size so there really is no reason why Jericho shouldnt be able to shoulder tackle him, just cause Cesaro may be stronger does not mean that he can still be standing with out movement from a shoulder tackle by Jericho. The ending to that match was great though. Taker and Brock coming out to save Y2J was great. Randy and Mankind was also a good one, I thought you could have done more with the hardcore side of things but it was still good, I dont get though how Randy could be in control while the trash can is still over his head and blocking his arms. It may have looked cool but it actually brings down Mankinds credibility and makes the match less meaningful and also makes people question the fact that he beat Randy in this match cause its almost like if he cant beat him while Randy cant see so how can he beat him when Randy can see and also while he is fighting off Edge, it may not have seemed that important when you were filming it but it actually all comes together. Non the less it was a good match though. The battle royal was great, finishers out of no where was great to begin with. HHH winning for me is awesome since Im a huge fan. HBK and Miz was another good one. The backstage segments were great and were a good hype up for the future. Kane and Hart was a good one, I liked the spot when Bret reversed the tombstone into a pile driver of his own. The finish was great I liked when McIntyre came out to attack Taker and Punk turned on Kane. This was a good PPV man. Your posing has massivly improved. Well done on that. I think you should really work on psychology and really think about the things you do in your match. Great job. 7/10. Keep it up man. Cant wait till the Rumble. Merry Christmas man.

[Jack]

Good Show, listen to what ^^^^ said and you will improve even more.

[FWL]

Thanks a ton for all the feedback, guys. I appreciate it all and will definitely keep working on everything I need to correct. It's all leading up to WrestleMania II, huge plans in store. Stay tuned!