Gnaddi
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Post by Gnaddi on Dec 21, 2013 12:42:50 GMT -5
Enjoy! Comments and thoughts would be appreciated as always.
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King Of Spice
Trevor From OLN
Let the retards run wild
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Post by King Of Spice on Dec 21, 2013 13:15:32 GMT -5
Awesome show bro! The main event was pure gold!
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PRIME Wrestling
Production Isn't Everything, huh?
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Post by PRIME Wrestling on Dec 23, 2013 2:17:27 GMT -5
I didn't like this at all. I just got done with it and honestly, there's so much potential there. You have tons of figures, great customs, and awesome arenas, but the posing and match material is not there at all. The posing, for one, has not improved at all. Cesaro looked like a pretzel at all times. JTM and Brooks Vs The Tatsus was all spots and nothing else. The main event was lacking completely and was spots upon spots upon spots. The cage was barely used in the match. Really hope you actually listen to me this time.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 23, 2013 3:35:53 GMT -5
I thought this was awesome however you should take TNWF's advise
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Wicked
The Man of a Thousand Questions
'The Nightmare Warrior'
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Post by Wicked on Dec 23, 2013 11:53:44 GMT -5
I %100 agree with Jordan you have all the potential for an awesome fed but you just don't utilize it properly. You really need to work on Posing (This could help. forum.wrestlingfigs.com/thread/67813/brms-rules-posing ) , Blurry Pictures, and match quality. I believe in you to make a good fed. Try to work really hard on posing, and camera work. I totally agree with what Jordan said about the pretzel comment. It seemed like Cody Rhodes was a pretzel or just bent a weird way. 5.75 Package Pile Drivers Out Of 10. Sorry to be hard on you but you have so much potential yet the shows don't come out as well as they should.
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Gnaddi
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Post by Gnaddi on Dec 23, 2013 12:00:50 GMT -5
I didn't like this at all. I just got done with it and honestly, there's so much potential there. You have tons of figures, great customs, and awesome arenas, but the posing and match material is not there at all. The posing, for one, has not improved at all. Cesaro looked like a pretzel at all times. JTM and Brooks Vs The Tatsus was all spots and nothing else. The main event was lacking completely and was spots upon spots upon spots. The cage was barely used in the match. Really hope you actually listen to me this time. I appreciate the feedback man. Tatsus vs Brooks and JTM was supposed to be a spot fest to end up their feud. I totally agree that I could have used the cage more, after I had the match done and watched it I thought the same thing. It´s not that I´m not listening to you.. I did my best on the posing and matches.. I know that it´s not good and I´m trying my best to improve. Anyhow, thanks for watching and taking the time to comment.
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Post by Gnaddi on Dec 23, 2013 12:24:32 GMT -5
I %100 agree with Jordan you have all the potential for an awesome fed but you just don't utilize it properly. You really need to work on Posing (This could help. forum.wrestlingfigs.com/thread/67813/brms-rules-posing ) , Blurry Pictures, and match quality. I believe in you to make a good fed. Try to work really hard on posing, and camera work. I totally agree with what Jordan said about the pretzel comment. It seemed like Cody Rhodes was a pretzel or just bent a weird way. 5.75 Package Pile Drivers Out Of 10. Sorry to be hard on you but you have so much potential yet the shows don't come out as well as they should. This is really helpful, and I already read it a couple of times. I also think that I have not improved much in my last few shows. But this gives me even more motivation for my next show. Thanks for commenting bud.
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Post by Jack on Dec 26, 2013 6:41:00 GMT -5
Your arena is amazing, the extra bits you add to your fed are good and unique. The storytelling is also improving alot, I like your storylines. First thing is the arms of the figures, in general they are pretty all over the place. Again as I say, if you watch a match the wrestlers arms aren't in weird positions. i think you think the arms have to be in a certain area for their to be enough momentum too hit the move. You dont need too, simple works best. I say again, I think you need to take more time over each picture, like make sure every joint, every hand everything is in the right place before you take the picture. Like, this is weird as I feel you actually improved 2 or 3 shows ago when you were up the list but the last few shows have gradually dropped down. I knew the match would be a spot fest but I felt a bit more phscology could have been used throughout the match, a spot fest can still have a bit of a story too it. I kinda like it though. I did like the counter into the AA in the main event which I felt was slightly weak for a main event.
One of your weaker shows, 6.
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