LDHW: PFB New Years Special

[WAIF]

 
I know I'm not good at making matches stretch. I will try to improve

[JC Deadly Shot!]

This was good but your posing needs some work and when Rollins hit Ziggler he should not have turned his back on him, it just makes him look dumb and also makes Rollins look as if he is too good to pay attention which for the person viewing is the wrong message to send. I see what you were trying to do but instead I think it would have been better if you had Rollins punch Ziggler and then mock him to his face and then Ziggler retaliates, especially because Ziggler was the face in this you dont want him attacking Rollins from behind to start the match. The spots were entertaining and I liked the spot where Ziggler drop kicked Rollins into the wall when he was on the ropes, it reminded me of a steel cage lol. The pacing was alright but you should slow stuff down at some point because a match is supposed to be like a roller coaster, it goes slow and then speeds up, then goes slow and then speeds up. But you have improved man. Keep it up.

[WAIF]

Jan 2, 2014 6:38:29 GMT -5 JC Deadly Shot! said:

This was good but your posing needs some work and when Rollins hit Ziggler he should not have turned his back on him, it just makes him look dumb and also makes Rollins look as if he is too good to pay attention which for the person viewing is the wrong message to send. I see what you were trying to do but instead I think it would have been better if you had Rollins punch Ziggler and then mock him to his face and then Ziggler retaliates, especially because Ziggler was the face in this you dont want him attacking Rollins from behind to start the match. The spots were entertaining and I liked the spot where Ziggler drop kicked Rollins into the wall when he was on the ropes, it reminded me of a steel cage lol. The pacing was alright but you should slow stuff down at some point because a match is supposed to be like a roller coaster, it goes slow and then speeds up, then goes slow and then speeds up. But you have improved man. Keep it up.

Thanks man, but I still don't think I 'm going to beat Gnaddi. His was great.

[Wicked]

This was a pretty good match buddy. You have improved a lot. Just work on posing and what Colt said and you will get a lot better. Good match.