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Post by Jack on Jan 4, 2014 12:56:50 GMT -5
A thumbs up would be great guys as well as a comment/thoughts.
Cheers.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 4, 2014 13:24:39 GMT -5
This was great, Jack. All the matches were great, and I love the tables are legal concept. Awesome first episode.
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Post by Steiner Recliner on Jan 4, 2014 15:46:18 GMT -5
Honestly didn't enjoy this. Bryan got the victory without working over the arms of sandow. Ambrose should've pinned him off the avalanche joker driver but inst we into another move. Christian hit a Canadian destroyer...... And then instead of punning him he threw him outside and onto the table. Hit him with a springboard splash on the table then picked him up and tried a top rip move to the outside. Seemed like you were just trying to fit in moves rather than focus on the story telling of the match.
No rating as I don't believe in those but it wasn't that good.
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Post by Jack on Jan 4, 2014 15:50:16 GMT -5
Honestly didn't enjoy this. Bryan got the victory without working over the arms of sandow. Ambrose should've pinned him off the avalanche joker driver but inst we into another move. Christian hit a Canadian destroyer...... And then instead of punning him he threw him outside and onto the table. Hit him with a springboard splash on the table then picked him up and tried a top rip move to the outside. Seemed like you were just trying to fit in moves rather than focus on the story telling of the match. No rating as I don't believe in those but it wasn't that good. Sorry you feel that way. |
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Post by Jack on Jan 4, 2014 15:55:26 GMT -5
I personally thought, it filled its job.
1) Made Ambrose look strong and very dominant before his PPV match vs. Jericho.
2) Made Bryan still look like a strong character despite loosing to Punk, yes could have worked on the arm more.
3) Maybe could have included a pin in between. I tried to get the idea across that this is there 4th match and just pinning him is not enough. That was the story, didnt tell it very well.
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Post by PRIME Wrestling on Jan 4, 2014 19:24:45 GMT -5
I rather you work on one good PPV then three/four not good episodes. The matches were completely lacking and you don't follow wrestler's move sets at all. I don't like the fact that you always have stipulation matches, either. The spots are a little over the top for just an episode of a fed. You can't fit three good matches and some promos into a six minute video. I agreed with Cody on a lot of points he made on this. Did not like this at all. And yeah, maybe it "filled it's job", but your missing the best part of a fed. Having good, quality matches.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 4, 2014 19:27:14 GMT -5
This is the first video i've ever watched from you Jack and no offence that was really bad. Some of your poses are good and others just look like you got lazy. I went into this with an open mind not knowing anything about your fed and from what you say you went for I didn't get out of it. Bryan is suppose to be a strong character but yet got his ass beat the whole match. Got dropped on the steps then got two termanooses then kicked out and randomly one with the cattle. Like Cody said it would have been more believable if Bryan had worked on the arms at all. Ambrose didn't need to hit another move out of the Joker Driver to make him seem dominant because...well he was dominant Bourne didn't get any offense in that match other than one or two moves. And the Main Event... Did anyone even win it? Benjamin hit the superplex then Punk came out and attacked Benjamin... A lot of that stuff was not needed.. after the Panama Sunrise it honestly should have ended there or even after the spring board splash on the announce table. You say a pin wasn't enough but it wasn't for the title so why continue to beat the shit out of each other? Christian should have pinned him to prove he can beat benjamin and get himself a title shot down the line. I know you are trying to defend this show cause it's your show but definitely take what we say and learn from it bro because after watching this it makes me question if you even watch wrestling.
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Post by Trademark on Jan 4, 2014 19:44:40 GMT -5
I was going to post but I really don't want to just repeat what the above comments stated.
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Post by Gnaddi on Jan 5, 2014 2:48:03 GMT -5
I actually liked this! Bryan and Sandow as opener was good. The match was really well done. Shelton vs Punk should be a good match. It´s a real fun match to film for sure. Not sure how I feel about it that it´s Last Man Standing though. It´s their first match so a simple singles match would have been a better choice there in my opinion. Ambrose vs Bourne was ok. Maybe you could have added a graphic before the match for the Jericho vs Ambrose at your next PPV. But that´s just a small thing. You made Ambrose look strong for sure here. The way he injured Bourne was a little crazy for an episode. Moving on to the main event... this match was loaded with spots. I liked it since this was to end their feud. You should have added in some not that crazy moves though. It was like spot followed by spot followed by spot. Also you were lacking some pictures in some frames. Especially after the announce table spot, like 2 seconds later they were on the top rope again for the superplex. I liked that Punk came out after the match. Clearly showed that the Benjamin vs Christian feud is over now.
Overall this show was pretty good, needs some work at some points. But I´m looking forward to Episode 2!
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Post by Jack on Jan 5, 2014 3:49:43 GMT -5
Ok. Thanks for the feedback, firstly, it is nice to actually get some comments ect on what you produce so in that regard i am thankful. If you read the previous thread on the reasoning for these episodes, that is why the matches are short. These matches are 120 pics roughly and 3 of them take about 3 1/2 hours too film for me. The plan was too do 3 of these before i leave for School on Monday Night, for which I will not come home to pic fed for about, 10 weeks. I just wanted too have something prepared too at least put up to keep any storylines my fed has (@wweraws you wont know, my fed has been hit or miss of ANY shows as I have been away at Boarding school) in peoples minds. Without doubt parts of this show were dumb, Ambrose not winning of the joker driver, the reason for that was I wanted to give him the finisher I gave him in the end, personal preference. I actually thought that through. Main event was just a short spot fest and I agree 100% that, that as a whole was pretty dumb, I will try and work through that as a whole with endings. I was just trying to keep it going. Yes, could have worked more on the arm. Movesests yes could have been tighter. Yeah, understand, Steiner Recliner PRIME Wrestling @wweraws that hearing such "awful" remarks made about your show is not easy too take, but I am a big boy, and I will learn from them, obviously. Just puts me in such a hard position now on what too do with my fed for 2014, without it going down the toilet. |
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