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Post by Deleted on Jan 17, 2014 0:54:19 GMT -5
. Hello PFI this is my first PPV doing pic fedding so dont really hate that much, all im asking is to get pointers so i can become a better pic fedder in the future, and if youre wondering why, i do not have a ring, and a friend on here suggested i do a backyard type fed
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Post by Jack on Jan 17, 2014 3:03:49 GMT -5
We do not "Hate" here we give feedback, there is a difference if you get me. First off, looks like you do not have a ring so maybe trying to find a cheap one would be beneficial. The posing for a first try was actually not to bad. Move the joints as much as you can in the legs and arms to make sure the poses are not stuff. Also try and think about realism of where a leg joint will be at a certain time, that will come with practice and just doing more moves. Remember, one bad joint, ruins the pose for me. Overall though the match had a story behind it and I enjoyed it. Hope you keep going and start posting here.
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Post by PhoenixFeathers on Jan 17, 2014 7:00:47 GMT -5
Hey bud, first off welcome to PFI. This show was pretty good, for this being your first show I must say you do a decent job at moving the arms. You just gotta work on everything else. Take punching for example, move the waist and the legs when you go into a punch. It'll make it look better. Move the legs a bit more, and move the body and I think you'll be goo. Also, in the future speed up your transitions, they seem a little slow at some points. And lastly, if you have a ring, I really suggest using it.
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Post by King Of Spice on Jan 17, 2014 15:06:21 GMT -5
Just like the others said, welcome dude. You're not too bad at all, just work on what Mike said, and move EVERY joint in EVERY picture. Your moves are pretty solid, just work on some aspects of poses. Also, I'd suggest using a different device for filming, because the watermark can e very distracting. Also, pick up a basic spring ring for around $15 at Walmart, Kmart, or wherever you can. That will bring a big improvement. Overall, enjoyable. 5.7/10
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Post by Wicked on Jan 27, 2014 0:21:27 GMT -5
I think you did a great job for your first show. The posing was pretty good and I enjoyed the Backyard aspect. However even if you don't have a ring I think its cool however I think a ring could improve your shows a lot. Good job for a first show however work a posing. Good job.
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Post by UnitedWePurge! on Jan 27, 2014 0:33:35 GMT -5
I loved it man. I also think that a ring could improve your shows so whenever you get the chance!
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