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Post by The Wolf of Wal-Mart on Jan 17, 2014 13:53:12 GMT -5
My entry for PFB Evolve 2 Good Luck to ZigglyPuff, Dann and Shellbomb  |
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Post by JC Deadly Shot! on Jan 17, 2014 20:00:28 GMT -5
Great work man, some poses were great others were a bit stiff. The suplex pose by Jericho was done very well but the part were Jericho runs at Sheamus and Sheamus reverses into a tilt a wirl slam needed more frames with Sheamus catching him. The multiple forearms that Sheamus did to Jericho on the ropes were done good but after a while because it was the same to picks being repeated it got a little stale, for that I suggest taking a pic for each hit on those but for one hit make it a little higher on the chest and the other a little lower, etc. Dont make the hits to far about though other wise it will look like Sheamus dont even have an aim, but if you do it alittle bit apart it will look better and more consistent, Thats what I do for my Daniel Bryan kicks to peoples chests. The push up brogue kick for the finish was a great idea and done very well. I think you could have sold that a little more considering the hight he pushed Jericho up but it that awesome anyway. This was great man. Keep up the good work. 8/10.
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Post by The Wolf of Wal-Mart on Jan 18, 2014 2:44:26 GMT -5
Great work man, some poses were great others were a bit stiff. The suplex pose by Jericho was done very well but the part were Jericho runs at Sheamus and Sheamus reverses into a tilt a wirl slam needed more frames with Sheamus catching him. The multiple forearms that Sheamus did to Jericho on the ropes were done good but after a while because it was the same to picks being repeated it got a little stale, for that I suggest taking a pic for each hit on those but for one hit make it a little higher on the chest and the other a little lower, etc. Dont make the hits to far about though other wise it will look like Sheamus dont even have an aim, but if you do it alittle bit apart it will look better and more consistent, Thats what I do for my Daniel Bryan kicks to peoples chests. The push up brogue kick for the finish was a great idea and done very well. I think you could have sold that a little more considering the hight he pushed Jericho up but it that awesome anyway. This was great man. Keep up the good work. 8/10. Thanks man. I really appreciate it. I'll definetly work on those in my next match/show. |
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Post by Dylan. on Jan 18, 2014 10:53:11 GMT -5
Wow! I actually really liked this match. Good job.
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Post by The Wolf of Wal-Mart on Jan 18, 2014 11:36:14 GMT -5
Wow! I actually really liked this match. Good job. Thanks man! |
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