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Post by Deleted on Jan 19, 2014 14:55:38 GMT -5
maybe not my best but Im still trying |
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Post by gabe on Jan 19, 2014 16:06:08 GMT -5
Welcome back to PFI man, don't know if its just me but I haven't seen you on here in a while lol. Anyway, I can see you've made some improvements on the poses which is good. The opener was probably my favorite match, lots of nonstop action throughout. The MITB was good but there was a lot of confusing stuff during the match, like Ryback throwing Rey out of the ring really weirdly. I like the DB fix up too, looks nice. The WHC Match seemed to go pretty quickly but Orton's entrance was cool. The Main Event was pretty good, but still some confusing moves through the match. I think you need to work on the GTS, it looked like Punk was throwing Ziggler up in the air for a Swiss Death but then caught him with a knee. The Shield coming out at the end was cool, but the way Ziggler landed on the outside looks like it would have killed him. Overall, I think you need to work on
1. The way they run, I understand you're trying to make them look like they are coming at someone with full force, but it looks awkward to me.
2. The impact of moves. A lot of wrestlers landed wrong or landed like they died for a second. Overselling is good, but so many looked stiff.
3. Moves in mid-air. Mainly the way the GTS was done, like I said Ziggler wouldn't go that high in the air and Punk wouldn't throw him up either, he would hold him up before hitting him with the knee.
Overall I really enjoyed this show, no bullshit. The MOTN for me was the opener, well done. Just need to work on those and watch more matches on YT so you can see how they are done, then use the way that move is done in your fed. Good show.
PS: When you get the chance, invite me to a game of GTA V.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 19, 2014 18:46:33 GMT -5
thanks gabe! means a lot man! btw: do you have a headset?
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Post by gabe on Jan 19, 2014 18:50:18 GMT -5
thanks gabe! means a lot man! btw: do you have a headset? No problem man, and yeah I have a headset! Do you? |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 19, 2014 18:52:22 GMT -5
yesir! ill get on at 7:10 eastern
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Post by Deleted on Jan 24, 2014 22:09:53 GMT -5
well. im very happy with the feedback from you guys and I hope you are all hyped for LFLS (live from los santos)!
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Post by Wicked on Jan 27, 2014 0:07:22 GMT -5
I enjoyed this PPV a lot. I liked the Cage match at the start. The last match was good too. This PPV was ok. I would suggest working on match flow and Posing. This was good but you can do better. I am excited to see more work. Try to work on posing bud but besides that I enjoyed it. I liked the twist ending.
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