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Post by Wicked on Jan 31, 2014 23:59:23 GMT -5
I totally agree with Gabe. What a smart boy. I have to commend you LDHW for taking criticism and not crying about it.This show was like a 2013 TNA show it has it's good parts and its bad parts. You have improved a lot with this show however I still think you can do better. The posing has improved a lot however you still can improve by bending joints more and watching videos of moves if you don't fully remember how to do it. Another thing about posing is it always seems like your figures arms are bent in some weird way, take the extra second to look at there arms and legs and everything to make sure it looks proper. I also just noticed how the figures never really look into the camera during there entrance, they are either down or to the side. Also don't make people oversell big moves like the smart people have said above me. I didn't really like the barbed wire spot seeing how Ambrose is the only one that has the characteristic of taking Barbed Wire. The triple threat was kind of a spot fest but I thought it was pretty good. The end was really good. I thought it was very creative. I really thought Paul Roma was going to join the Shield. You have good picture quality and ok posing. I am excited to see your next show just work on the things we all said as well. Good job buddy. Thanks for the feedback bro. I will put all of this to play once I start to film Hollywood Beatdown. What a name ....
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Post by WAIF on Feb 1, 2014 0:06:04 GMT -5
Thanks for the feedback bro. I will put all of this to play once I start to film Hollywood Beatdown. What a name .... Well it was Hell in Hollywood but.....
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Post by Wicked on Feb 1, 2014 0:12:54 GMT -5
Well it was Hell in Hollywood but..... In my opinion Hollywood Hell sounds better. But that is just this Mother Canuckers opinion. Eh.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 1, 2014 11:29:21 GMT -5
I liked this, to me the movements of every single picture but a few flowed very very well. I also like how you had some crazy ass spots in their too, lol. Overall pretty great show IMO, I'd give it an 8/10, good job buddy.
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Post by Jack on Feb 3, 2014 14:43:18 GMT -5
Right, lets get on with this. Like the storytelling off the start, Austin and Heyman are a cool combo. Your posing has gotten so much better and your quality, like alot better. Some of your punch poses are hit or miss, so just watch that if you can, good attempt at pacing but did seem a bit quick and a few too many big moves hit. Throughout also there was a few iffy spots that I didnt really buy and some of the movesets could still use work. Ambrose vs. Miz was my favourite match of the night, clicked for me. Well Done, I see improvements.
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Post by WAIF on Feb 3, 2014 15:20:43 GMT -5
Right, lets get on with this. Like the storytelling off the start, Austin and Heyman are a cool combo. Your posing has gotten so much better and your quality, like alot better. Some of your punch poses are hit or miss, so just watch that if you can, good attempt at pacing but did seem a bit quick and a few too many big moves hit. Throughout also there was a few iffy spots that I didnt really buy and some of the movesets could still use work. Ambrose vs. Miz was my favourite match of the night, clicked for me. Well Done, I see improvements. Wow thanks Jack. Glad you liked The Miz and Ambrose match. I tried to make it click. So yeah. Thanks again.
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Post by Steiner Recliner on Feb 6, 2014 15:01:25 GMT -5
Well this is a change from the last time I viewed one of your shows. That's a good thing as before your shows were honestly hard to watch but I quite enjoyed this. There is a few things that you can improve on but so far you are going in the right direction. only things I seen wrong were maybe add a few more frames in between moves and fix some of the posing but other then that I fairly enjoyed it. Good job.
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