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Post by WAIF on Jan 30, 2014 19:08:24 GMT -5
Tell me what you guys think. ENJOY! and give feedback
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Post by Dylan. on Jan 30, 2014 22:03:23 GMT -5
I'll watch, and try to review tomorrow.
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Post by WAIF on Jan 30, 2014 22:05:21 GMT -5
I'll watch, and try to review tomorrow. Kk
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Post by PRIME Wrestling on Jan 31, 2014 7:52:24 GMT -5
I haven't watched anything from you in awhile, and I can tell you that I was blown away with the quality of your fed now. I think posing needs to be improved a little, but I can definitely see improvement from one of the previous shows I saw to this one. Cena Vs Bryan was a good match to start it off! I thought the match was a little too quick and should have been longer, but it was good. In this match, and I think all of the other matches, you had false finishes. You need to work on that. A finisher is a finisher for a reason, it usually finishes a match. The busaiki knee by DBry happened way to early, and Cena kicked out, and then Bryan kicked out of the AA! I would say just save false finishes for big matches and main events. The Miz Vs Ambrose was a great match. I didn't like the springboard that Ambrose did. I've seen a lot of stuff from him and I don't think I've ever seen a springboard, or any highflying move for that matter. Still a good match. The next match was odd. I don't know about that CAW. I would just take CAWs out of feds for "new breeders", until they get everything else down for their fed. Still liked the match, I was just confuses over the CAW the whole time. I liked the ending to Rollins Vs Bourne. I didn't like the barbed wire chair spot at all. I can't picture the Miz, Rollins, Or Bourne working with barbed wire at all. I also didn't like that Rollins jumped off of the top rope with the chair in hand. Kind of a stupid spot. I would've liked just a chair, and maybe a move of the top without of the chair. I liked the show and you've improved a lot, LDHW. Can't wait for the next one. Try to make your next show a little longer, like five or six matches.
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Post by Gnaddi on Jan 31, 2014 12:16:24 GMT -5
I really liked this man! Never expected it to be that good. Your posing has really improved. The flow of the matches was good as well. You had some too crazy moves in there. Especially in the 3 way. Cara would have killed himself by doing that dropkick to the outside on the table. Also Rollins jumping from the stage in the Main Event was a little too much to me. But those were only a few unrealistic spots. Most of the sequences were very well done. loved when Cara dropkicked Ziggler on the Caw to the outside and Ziggler hit the DDT trough the table. You should use a ref on the next show, but overall this was really good.
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Post by WAIF on Jan 31, 2014 18:38:40 GMT -5
I haven't watched anything from you in awhile, and I can tell you that I was blown away with the quality of your fed now. I think posing needs to be improved a little, but I can definitely see improvement from one of the previous shows I saw to this one. Cena Vs Bryan was a good match to start it off! I thought the match was a little too quick and should have been longer, but it was good. In this match, and I think all of the other matches, you had false finishes. You need to work on that. A finisher is a finisher for a reason, it usually finishes a match. The busaiki knee by DBry happened way to early, and Cena kicked out, and then Bryan kicked out of the AA! I would say just save false finishes for big matches and main events. The Miz Vs Ambrose was a great match. I didn't like the springboard that Ambrose did. I've seen a lot of stuff from him and I don't think I've ever seen a springboard, or any highflying move for that matter. Still a good match. The next match was odd. I don't know about that CAW. I would just take CAWs out of feds for "new breeders", until they get everything else down for their fed. Still liked the match, I was just confuses over the CAW the whole time. I liked the ending to Rollins Vs Bourne. I didn't like the barbed wire chair spot at all. I can't picture the Miz, Rollins, Or Bourne working with barbed wire at all. I also didn't like that Rollins jumped off of the top rope with the chair in hand. Kind of a stupid spot. I would've liked just a chair, and maybe a move of the top without of the chair. I liked the show and you've improved a lot, LDHW. Can't wait for the next one. Try to make your next show a little longer, like five or six matches. Thanks bro. That means a lot really does.I get why you didnt like the caw and all. I mean I already wrote him to story lines so I think its too late for him to go.
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Post by WAIF on Jan 31, 2014 18:40:47 GMT -5
I really liked this man! Never expected it to be that good. Your posing has really improved. The flow of the matches was good as well. You had some too crazy moves in there. Especially in the 3 way. Cara would have killed himself by doing that dropkick to the outside on the table. Also Rollins jumping from the stage in the Main Event was a little too much to me. But those were only a few unrealistic spots. Most of the sequences were very well done. loved when Cara dropkicked Ziggler on the Caw to the outside and Ziggler hit the DDT trough the table. You should use a ref on the next show, but overall this was really good. Thanks man I didn't think those spots would look so unrealistic. Thsnks for the positive review. And im glad I made you enjoy it as much as u did.
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Post by PRIME Wrestling on Jan 31, 2014 19:10:02 GMT -5
You heard it here first, folks: Gnaddi said that someone's spot were too unrealistic.
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Post by WAIF on Jan 31, 2014 20:17:45 GMT -5
Lol
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Post by WAIF on Jan 31, 2014 23:07:36 GMT -5
28 hour bump
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Post by gabe on Jan 31, 2014 23:14:46 GMT -5
I don't know how to say this any other way but man, I just don't know how I feel about this show. To start off, there was way too much overselling in this show. So many times the wrestlers would just land on the top of their head and their feet would go inward, even from just a drop kick or big boot. I didn't understand what was going on for most of the Bryan/Cena match, and I didn't understand the finish. Most of it was a squash match to me and the busaiku knee was done early in the match. Dean Ambrose cashing in at the end was pretty neat, and Miz turning on Evan was cool. I don't know, maybe it's just me that wasn't all too A for effort on this show. Some parts were good and others were meh. You've never known me to bash your fed or PPVs, but I really didn't understand what was going on during a lot of the matches. I think you should work on that as well as match flow. I don't know, I guess I was just indifferent to this show.
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Post by WAIF on Jan 31, 2014 23:22:51 GMT -5
I don't know how to say this any other way but man, I just don't know how I feel about this show. To start off, there was way too much overselling in this show. So many times the wrestlers would just land on the top of their head and their feet would go inward, even from just a drop kick or big boot. I didn't understand what was going on for most of the Bryan/Cena match, and I didn't understand the finish. Most of it was a squash match to me and the busaiku knee was done early in the match. Dean Ambrose cashing in at the end was pretty neat, and Miz turning on Evan was cool. I don't know, maybe it's just me that wasn't all too A for effort on this show. Some parts were good and others were meh. You've never known me to bash your fed or PPVs, but I really didn't understand what was going on during a lot of the matches. I think you should work on that as well as match flow. I don't know, I guess I was just indifferent to this show. Thanks for the honesty. I get where your coming from. I made the opener quick sense I didn't want to stale out the feud since they will be facing off at the next 2 ppvs maybe one more though. The Ambrose and Miz match was just build to the ending. The Triple threat wasn't supposed to be squashy. And hopefully u dont think the main event was bad. I mean thanks though really.
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Post by gabe on Jan 31, 2014 23:27:07 GMT -5
I don't know how to say this any other way but man, I just don't know how I feel about this show. To start off, there was way too much overselling in this show. So many times the wrestlers would just land on the top of their head and their feet would go inward, even from just a drop kick or big boot. I didn't understand what was going on for most of the Bryan/Cena match, and I didn't understand the finish. Most of it was a squash match to me and the busaiku knee was done early in the match. Dean Ambrose cashing in at the end was pretty neat, and Miz turning on Evan was cool. I don't know, maybe it's just me that wasn't all too A for effort on this show. Some parts were good and others were meh. You've never known me to bash your fed or PPVs, but I really didn't understand what was going on during a lot of the matches. I think you should work on that as well as match flow. I don't know, I guess I was just indifferent to this show. Thanks for the honesty. I get where your coming from. I made the opener quick sense I didn't want to stale out the feud since they will be facing off at the next 2 ppvs maybe one more though. The Ambrose and Miz match was just build to the ending. The Triple threat wasn't supposed to be squashy. And hopefully u dont think the main event was bad. I mean thanks though really. No problem man. I liked some bits of the show but I don't know, this one was a bit iffy for me. The 3-Way was fine, as well as the main event too and I can't wait to see where you go with Ambrose as the champ.
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Post by Wicked on Jan 31, 2014 23:43:02 GMT -5
I totally agree with Gabe. What a smart boy. I have to commend you LDHW for taking criticism and not crying about it.This show was like a 2013 TNA show it has it's good parts and its bad parts. You have improved a lot with this show however I still think you can do better. The posing has improved a lot however you still can improve by bending joints more and watching videos of moves if you don't fully remember how to do it. Another thing about posing is it always seems like your figures arms are bent in some weird way, take the extra second to look at there arms and legs and everything to make sure it looks proper. I also just noticed how the figures never really look into the camera during there entrance, they are either down or to the side. Also don't make people oversell big moves like the smart people have said above me. I didn't really like the barbed wire spot seeing how Ambrose is the only one that has the characteristic of taking Barbed Wire. The triple threat was kind of a spot fest but I thought it was pretty good. The end was really good. I thought it was very creative. I really thought Paul Roma was going to join the Shield. You have good picture quality and ok posing. I am excited to see your next show just work on the things we all said as well. Good job buddy.
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Post by WAIF on Jan 31, 2014 23:45:50 GMT -5
I totally agree with Gabe. What a smart boy. I have to commend you LDHW for taking criticism and not crying about it.This show was like a 2013 TNA show it has it's good parts and its bad parts. You have improved a lot with this show however I still think you can do better. The posing has improved a lot however you still can improve by bending joints more and watching videos of moves if you don't fully remember how to do it. Another thing about posing is it always seems like your figures arms are bent in some weird way, take the extra second to look at there arms and legs and everything to make sure it looks proper. I also just noticed how the figures never really look into the camera during there entrance, they are either down or to the side. Also don't make people oversell big moves like the smart people have said above me. I didn't really like the barbed wire spot seeing how Ambrose is the only one that has the characteristic of taking Barbed Wire. The triple threat was kind of a spot fest but I thought it was pretty good. The end was really good. I thought it was very creative. I really thought Paul Roma was going to join the Shield. You have good picture quality and ok posing. I am excited to see your next show just work on the things we all said as well. Good job buddy. Thanks for the feedback bro. I will put all of this to play once I start to film Hollywood Beatdown.
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