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Post by Deleted on Feb 2, 2014 14:21:15 GMT -5
just a random match, trying to improve, sorry foxes' entrance got cut off |
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Post by Ethan on Feb 2, 2014 15:40:20 GMT -5
I quite liked this actually, there was a few odd poses and there is room for improvement, but I thought this was quite good.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 2, 2014 15:47:30 GMT -5
I quite liked this actually, there was a few odd poses and there is room for improvement, but I thought this was quite good. Thanks a lot!!! |
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Post by Zee Steiner on Feb 2, 2014 16:00:56 GMT -5
that was epic dude and i subed great job.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 2, 2014 16:10:43 GMT -5
that was epic dude and i subed great job. Omg thanks dude! |
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King Of Spice
Trevor From OLN
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Post by King Of Spice on Feb 2, 2014 18:35:46 GMT -5
I enjoyed this match bud.
The posing improved greatly from why I last saw of you, which was your PFB match in our 3 way with Heisenberg.
I liked the spots in this match, and it flowed a lot better than your previous work.
Looking forward to more from you, mes copain.
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Post by Jack on Feb 3, 2014 14:39:50 GMT -5
Posing looked a little stiff for me in general, again, moving the joints, especially in the legs will help. Some of the poses especially in the lock ups could use some work, as well as looking at pacing more, this seemed kinda a rushed start. I actually liked the diving senton to the outside by Fox, you pretty much got his moveset, i still think you have to watch more Fox matches, as I cannot remember him doing a german suplex. Anyways, nice effort, but alot of work to do.
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Post by gabe on Feb 4, 2014 18:27:05 GMT -5
All honesty there is more stuff you should work on, but it was an entertaining match.
1. The posing looked weird whenever they would get on the top rope. They would either sit on the actual rope or sit on the post itself which I thought was weird.
2. Some sequences confused me and some were just eh. It was alright though for some of them. An example is the lock-ups.
3. Why does everyone make the wrestlers land on their heads when someone gets hit with a hurricanrana/frankensteiner? Example there.
4. I think it was weird how whenever Bourne missed a SSP he would land flat and his arms and legs would be flat when if you think about it, the joints are supposed to be bent so it doesn't look like he's taking a nap after missing the SSP.
But yeah, good match but you've gotta move the joints more, less confusing poses, and less non-consequential sequences (when Fox put Bourne in an armlock after a move when the match was going pretty fast). But like I said, this was a very entertaining match but I think you should work on these. Good job.
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Post by Dylan. on Feb 5, 2014 9:58:32 GMT -5
STOP USING OUR LAST NIGHT WHAT THE FUCK
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Post by Deleted on Feb 5, 2014 12:38:51 GMT -5
STOP USING OUR LAST NIGHT WHAT THE FUCK Thanks for the review lol in all seriousnes, one of my pic fed ppvs just got taken off because of a copyrighted song, so I went with one I know dosent do that |
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