LDHW Hollywood Beatdown 14'

[WAIF]

NSRR Result: Dolph Ziggler won after being thrown out of the ring by Brock Lesnar. Brock did some early celebrating, not knowing that Dolph slid back in before his 5 count. Then Dolph dropkicked the big man and threw him over the top rope. So is the new and current holder of the MITB briefcase


Bourne vs Miz Result: Miz was on the ground with Even on the top rope. Evan went for the inverted shooting star press but Miz moving out f the. Evan land on is feet but injured his knee at the hard fall. Miz jumped at his chance and booted his hurt knee then hit him with 2 skull crushing finales, but he wasn't done. He went back into the ring and stomped at Bournes hurt knee then delivered a single legged boston crab followed by a figure four leg lock

[King Of Spice]

As soon as you review Roadblock, I'll watch this.

[King Of Spice]

Right, lets review this.

John Cena Vs. Daniel Bryan
This match was pretty good. Your posing has improved loads, no doubt. I enjoyed, but there were a few things wrong. Cena's moveset was kind of off. Like, I don't think I ever have, and I don't think I ever will see Cena do some of the moves in here. Also, a few hand poses were ishy. Overall, I liked it. Best spot was the running knee that caught Cena and HBK.


Antonio Cesaro Vs. Randy Orton
This was my favourite match from this show. Your posing was reeeeeeaaaallllllly good here Von. I liked it when Cesaro got slammed onto the Barb Wire Board. You could tell by his body expression he was thinking "aw shiet"
This may be one of the best matches you've ever made:


Seth Rollins Vs. The Undertaker
I struggled to get into this. Not quite sure why, but it just didn't click with me. It was a good match, don't get me wrong, just something about it threw me off. Good posing, good finish too.

Overall, this gets 7.5 thotties out of 10. You did okay for a thot

[WAIF]

Bump before I get bumped off the first page. Anyone else?

[WAIF]

Jack

[Jack]

Mar 6, 2014 16:50:28 GMT -5 WAIF said:

Jack

This will be edited with a review tomorrow morning.

[PhoenixFeathers]

Alright, first things first. Your arena, it's very plain. I get, there is not much people who have detailed arenas, which is fine. Just a thought. The lighting, it's got some really dark shadows. A little more light would probably do some justice. The posing is nice, the problem I have is that some of the poses look so odd, make sure you move every joint to a realistic look, even if it takes a little longer to pose the move. Clean up the poses, make sure they look realistic, for the most part the posing was much better than the last time I tuned into one of your shows. So kudos. Also, your match pacing is a bit, bad. Not gonna sugar coat it. Using Bryan Vs Cena as an example, a piledriver was hit, a very brutal one I might add. Cena basically got right back up. There is circumstances where a no-sell is okay. Not that early in the match though. You also need to work a bit on learning peoples move sets. It helps to look up *top moves* of the people you're using, even if you know them like the back of your hand. You'll find spots come more naturally and it looks like you know who you're using. (Seth Rollins being an example) Clean up the setup a bit,work on what I said and I think you could have a pretty dang good fed buddy.

[Trademark]

I'm not going to sugar coat anything, this needs a good bit of work. First, I would strongly recommend getting an actual referee figure. The Shawn Michaels figure with the Cena jersey really throws the show off for me. Your posing is improving but I noticed you tend to leave the figures joints in awkward places. For instance, look at Michaels arms around :54 seconds. When posing it almost seems like the figures joints are broken. You need to take your time and get when posing. Bryan hitting a piledriver not even 30 seconds into the match is a bit too much as well. You need to learn how to pace a match. Watch Mike or Cody's fed before filming to try and get a better understanding. When watching Undertaker Vs. Rollins I couldn't help but wonder if you knew about his move set, no offense. I don't mean to sound like a dick, I do want you to improve. There was some spots that were so unrealistic it completely threw me out of the match. Taker caught Rollins in a powerbomb while he was on his knees. Let me know if you need me to go over anything else for you. I will definitely try and help. On the plus sides, Undertaker's dive looked nice and you did do some innovative stuff like the Five Knuckle Shuffle while Bryan was in the tree of woe. You have a lot of potential, but I felt when watching this you didn't put in all the effort you could have. Hope I helped and cleared up a few things.

[Wicked]

I agree with John and Mike a lot however I think you have improved a lot. I did enjoy this show however just keep on working on posing and everything Mike and John said. Good show though buddy. I am looking forward to the next one.

[Jack]

I think you are without doubt getting better, which is good to see, still stuff to work on. Pacing still needs work, a piledriver being it in the first 25 secs of a match should never happen unless it is a squash. It kinda takes away from the realism of the rest of the match as Cena just kinda gets back up and starts taking bumps on his head without any impact from the big move. The joint movements are getting better but sometimes they are overdone. Think more carefully after every frame if everything is how it should and would look if they were having a match. I did liked Bryans dropkick sequence in the corner. Rollins vs. Taker was a decent match actually, I agree with Mike about the movesets though.

Overall Rating - 6.

[Dylan.]

Posing improved a bit, but match pacing was off severely. The little things threw me off, the ref. Rollins on ambroses body, you can change vests pretty easily. I thought this was a step forward for you, but you've got a long way to go.

[JC Deadly Shot!]

Damn dude, I got to say I havnt seen your stuff in a while and you really are improving heaps. Posing was very good in this, there were a few minor bad poses but over all, I could tell most of the things that were going on. The Cena/Bryan match was ok, it started to a good pace but the chain wrestling wasnt really done that well. Also that piledriver was way too early in the match and also because straight away Cena did something it took ALL the credibility and believability away from that move, IMO it should have ended on that move. Glad Bryan won though. The Orton/Cesaro match was possibly match of the night, the posing was very well done. The match builded up good and had a good pace for a No DQ match, The euro uppercuts were done good but Id add another frame or two when posing those just to make them look more devastating and also because at first I kept thinking he was going for a neck breaker or a cutter. Great match. The Taker/Rollins match started off great and I liked the mind games at the start. Although I didnt like how Rollins was doing a waist lock takedown to Taker and then circling on him, it just doesnt fit very well. I think only someone like Kurt Angle could actually believably do that to Taker just cause of his shoot background and his power but Rollins isnt exactly suited to do that move on someone bigger than him, It just makes Taker come off as a bit weak, but I like everything you did with him as far as the high flying goes and everything you did with him in his offence to Taker was great and had thought and meaning behind it. Also with Taker, cause of his style in the ring and him being a major boxing/mma fan he wouldnt be doing euro uppercuts but instead just straight and long boxing jabs and upper cuts (but more jabs). The finish was good but I felt it missed something, but it was still a great way to finish. Great PPV man, your really improving alot. 7/10. Theres still a lot of room for improvement but your on your way man. Keep up the great work man.

[FWL]

Cena vs Bryan was okay. Cena doing a backstabber was a little weird, work on move sets. Try to use moves they'd actually use. I did like the 5KS out of the tree of woe though, never seen that before. Very creative. Liked the springboard knee from Bryan, but Cena shouldn't be getting up that quick to attack from it. Work on pacing. Bryan reversing the AA into a DDT was cool, but wasn't posed very well. There was no impact to it. The ending would've been better if we hadn't seen that same springboard knee earlier on.

Cesaro vs Orton started off WAY too fast. No buildup at all before crazy shit went down. The corner Neutralizer through the table spot, while it didn't happen, is something that shouldn't even be set up until towards the end. That's a crazy move. Cesaro hitting the running uppercut to send Orton through the table was sick, loved that. Kendo sticks aren't made for hitting with the base either, kinda defeats the purpose, could've used something different for that. I had wondered why Cesaro's leg was wrapped in chain, the ending explained that. Okay finish.

Liked the head game stuff to start out Taker vs Rollins. Why did Taker hold his back after a bulldog? That didn't make sense to me. WAY too much air on the legdrop, Taker is not Michael Jordan. Work on that. Ending was alright.

Overall, I can tell you're improving, but keep working at it. You'll only get better. Also, get a new referee. I don't like that I can blatantly see that it's Shawn Michaels wearing a Cena jersey. Love Kendrick by the way. I look forward to seeing what you do next.

[WAIF]

Apr 11, 2014 15:00:35 GMT -5 FWL said:

Cena vs Bryan was okay. Cena doing a backstabber was a little weird, work on move sets. Try to use moves they'd actually use. I did like the 5KS out of the tree of woe though, never seen that before. Very creative. Liked the springboard knee from Bryan, but Cena shouldn't be getting up that quick to attack from it. Work on pacing. Bryan reversing the AA into a DDT was cool, but wasn't posed very well. There was no impact to it. The ending would've been better if we hadn't seen that same springboard knee earlier on.

Cesaro vs Orton started off WAY too fast. No buildup at all before crazy shit went down. The corner Neutralizer through the table spot, while it didn't happen, is something that shouldn't even be set up until towards the end. That's a crazy move. Cesaro hitting the running uppercut to send Orton through the table was sick, loved that. Kendo sticks aren't made for hitting with the base either, kinda defeats the purpose, could've used something different for that. I had wondered why Cesaro's leg was wrapped in chain, the ending explained that. Okay finish.

Liked the head game stuff to start out Taker vs Rollins. Why did Taker hold his back after a bulldog? That didn't make sense to me. WAY too much air on the legdrop, Taker is not Michael Jordan. Work on that. Ending was alright.

Overall, I can tell you're improving, but keep working at it. You'll only get better. Also, get a new referee. I don't like that I can blatantly see that it's Shawn Michaels wearing a Cena jersey. Love Kendrick by the way. I look forward to seeing what you do next.

Thanks for the review. A lot of that stuff is helpful bro. I needed that bro. I hope you like mania