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Post by Deleted on Mar 15, 2014 16:59:33 GMT -5
WELCOME TO A NEW ERA Fully detailed match card 1. (Pre-show) 6 man battle royal for the IC title winner faces Evan Bourne at WRESTLMANIA 2. 6 man battle royal for the the Winged Eagle title winner faces Eddie Guerrero at WRESTLMANIA 3. CM Punk vs Jeff Hardy EXTREME Ladders match for WHC title Main event 4. John Cena vs Chris Jericho for the WWE/NAW championship NAW WRESTLEMANIA COMING SOON DON'T FORGET TO LIKE COMMENT AND SUBSCRIBE Follow me on twitter: mobile.twitter.com/NAWownerThanks for watching I just wanted to know if there was any tips do I can get better in this I'm new at pic fed this is my first ever PPV special Special thanks to Harrison for giving me tips when I was EIW and asparagus3 for support
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Post by Gnaddi on Mar 19, 2014 11:01:29 GMT -5
I´m going to be honest with you man. The first impression I get when I start watching your fed is not that good. Picture quality sucks, the arena does not look good either. Using PS3 games as floor does not look good. Use some black card board and it will look alot better already. Having a bunch of wires laying arround is not looking too good as well. I mean its not making your fed bad but it´s just the first impression I get. Posing was ok, needs alot of work though. Some confusing stuff like what happend with Rey and Trent. I hope I helped you a little with giveing you advice man.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 19, 2014 17:36:49 GMT -5
I´m going to be honest with you man. The first impression I get when I start watching your fed is not that good. Picture quality sucks, the arena does not look good either. Using PS3 games as floor does not look good. Use some black card board and it will look alot better already. Having a bunch of wires laying arround is not looking too good as well. I mean its not making your fed bad but it´s just the first impression I get. Posing was ok, needs alot of work though. Some confusing stuff like what happend with Rey and Trent. I hope I helped you a little with giveing you advice man. thanks for being truthfully man ill work on that
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Post by Wicked on Mar 24, 2014 16:10:13 GMT -5
I was not really digging the arena or the lighting. The carpet sort of bothered me. Looks weird. Work on the arena a bit and maybe try to make your filming arena a brighter. Posing wasn't that good, try to work on that I seen a couple of hands in photo's which completely distracts me. Try to bend your figure's joints a bit more and it will look better. The posing is really stiff. Work on posing and stuff and you will improve. I am excited to see more.
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Post by Jesus on Mar 25, 2014 19:11:17 GMT -5
I won't give you shit because this is your first PPv ever but I will say the posing was off, the lighting wasn't great, and the arena was a disappointment. Do not let these words discourage you from filming, you just need to work on your posing and edit the pictures because your hand was showing and you don't want the viewers to put their focus and attention on you holding the figure, they want to see the figures posing by themselves. Be creative with your entrance and try to clean up a bit because the wires throwened around was a for me. If you have jakks part such as hell in a cell pieces, money in the back pieces, or anything else like that, then use that to crest your stage and if you don't have non of that then build a ramp and stage out of cardboard. I advise you to get a bigger ring and improve on your customs as well. The Jeff hardy could've actually came out pretty decent if you took your time and paint with layers. Don't rush your customs either, just take your time on them and practice. Overall the year just began and it's up to you if you wanna improve and make your fed better or continue your old routine. I'm pretty sure you will improve and I hope you do! Waiting to see your next show to see some improvement !
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Post by JC Deadly Shot! on Mar 26, 2014 19:45:53 GMT -5
Alright first off I just want to say something, and this isnt just to you but to everyone that does this. You guys do not need pre shows. Theres no point in pre shows for pic feds IMO. I mean WWE does them for many reasons but one main reason is because they already have a 3-4 hour PPV and still want to put another match on before the show. All together this was 11 minutes so you could have just put the pre show match on the card anyway, I mean why not. The first battle royal was good, the things in the match were good but the posing of that stuff needs some work though. Improvement takes time so dont stress because it will come in time but just little things that I noticed are whats bringing the matches down a bit like when Ryder punches Gabriel and Gabriels head stays in the same place the whole time so there was no sell. The second Battle royal was good too but you should not really have more than one battle royal on a card. Especially if they are going to be very similar. I mean you kind of did the same thing in both matches like when Trent attacked Rey before the match and then in the next battle royal Barrett did the same thing to Randy. So to enhance or create storylines between people you need to be more creative. The presentation is also something to look at, I mean you have video game covers as a ramp, they dont look alike or have the same colouring. Your stage should look like it stands out, even if its just a cardboard box with nothing in the background its still alright just make it look nice. I know Ive said more negative than positive but please take this as pure advice and motivation to do better on your next show. Just work on that stuff I said, but keep up the good work man.
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