First time watching anything of yours, so here we go.
Rock vs Yokozuna was a good match. Nothing too crazy, good back and forth action. I thought you posed Yokozuna's high kicks pretty well. Just a note though, I don't believe anyone EVER kicked out of Yokozuna's Banzai Drop, so I think something like that should be saved for a very special occasion. Details.
The five way started out WAY too chaotic. The whole sequence in the beginning was pretty tough to follow for me. Not sure if you did this here, but try playing back the whole sequence on your camera to make sure it all flows nicely and makes sense. I did like Morrison's counter to the Disaster kick on Rhodes. The tandem springboard knee on Christian was nice. I liked the cross body counter into Crossrhodes, but the Crossrhodes itself could've been better. Ending was good.
Liked the little brawl between D-Bry and Kane. Kane making them disappear at the end was cool.
Cena vs Ryback was okay. Ryback looked very strong throughout. Liked when he did the 5KS. The ending was good, but I have no idea what happened to knock the ref off the apron. Really tough to follow for me.
The brawl with Lesnar and HHH was nice. Lesnar looks tough, but try to pace out those moves a bit. There was almost no time between them. Lesnar put him through the ladder, then instantly picks him up and puts him through a table.
Kingston vs Bourne had some good moments. Some of the action was good, lots of fast-paced stuff that you'd expect from them. At times, it was a bit over the top. Too much springboarding and stuff that wasn't really necessary. Liked Big E's appearance at the end.
Really liked Punk vs Edge. Edge needs to sell those elbows though. Elbows to the face will hurt, so make sure Edge reacts to them and doesn't sit there as if nothing's happening. The diving elbow onto the barrier was nice, loved that. You don't need to focus on the referee every other picture though, you can keep the angle on all three of them for each count. Punk's springboard into the spear was nice, but I really liked the rail run into the spear on the outside. Very creative, haven't seen anything like that before. That's how you end a match.
Divas match was okay. I liked the seuqences between AJ and Tessmacher towards the end. Not sure I've ever seen a Divas battle royal in a pic fed before, so it was a nice change of pace.
I liked the main event. Jericho has to bend his legs for the Codebreaker, so as tough as it is to pose, you've gotta do it. You did pose the Walls of Jericho pretty nicely though. I thought your posing was better here than any of the other matches. HBK's kip up could've been done better. I liked the chair catch into the Sweet Chin Music. Backstage action was good, REALLY liked the handcuffed together sequences. I don't think I've seen that before, nice job there. Also liked the false finish with Jericho fooling the referee. Good ending. Match of the night for me, just over Punk vs Edge.
Overall, you made a good first impression on me. You're pretty creative with your in-ring stuff. The biggest things for me that you need to work on are posing and the abundance of finishers. It felt like someone kicked out of a finisher in every match, which kinda defeats the purpose of them for me. Save that stuff for big time matches and it'll mean a lot more when it happens. Also, for your entrances, don't have them just appear at the end of the ramp. Make them appear at the top of the stage, then the ramp. It'll look better that way. Otherwise a good job man, looking forward to seeing more from you.