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[WAIF]

[FWL]

Cesaro vs Orton wasn't bad. I liked the toss up through the middle ropes into the Swiss Death by Cesaro, but it could've been sold a little better to make it look as devastating as that move really is. Ending was cool, it caught me by surprise.

MITB was a little up and down for me. Your posing was off and on here. I thought it was really good at times, and others it was a little tough to follow. Some of the standing flips and stuff like that were a little over the top. I liked Tensai and Bourne's battle towards the end, probably my favorite action of the match. Really liked the submission sequence towards the end. I liked how the ending was set up, but wasn't a fan of the move that ended it. I would've rather had a shooting star press end it.

Wasn't really a fan of Cena vs Sheamus, to be honest. Again, your posing was up and down here, and the stuff towards the end didn't really do it for me. Cena just doesn't do apron piledrivers or brainbusters. I'm all for going a different direction for the way a character would normally act, but I just don't buy it with Cena.

Really enjoyed Taker vs Rollins. I liked the cat and mouse game at the beginning of the match with Rollins eluding Taker until he gained the upper hand. You made Rollins look good throughout, and I was convinced Taker was going to lose. Definitely thought it was over when the blackout happened towards the end. Posing was off and on again, but I think it was more on than off this time around. Best match I've ever seen from you.

Bourne vs Tensai was okay. Way too fast paced though, you've gotta give some time to breathe between moves. This was a problem with a few of your matches in this show. I really liked Tensai catching Bourne out of the dive and turning it into a belly to belly, but you didn't give enough time to react to that move before moving right on.

Triple threat match wasn't bad. It seemed to ride the line between being fast paced without being too crazy and too fast paced to make sense. Like when Ziggler was put through a table, Bryan got one or two moves in before Ziggler was back up and fighting again. Just not realistic. Really liked the back body drop over the turnbuckle onto Ziggler, haven't seen that before. Very creative. Swagger coming in to interfere was cool. Posing was more good than bad in this match, it had its moments.

Overall, I think you did good. Rollins vs Taker was definitely match of the night for me. I really hope you get your computer situation worked out, because I'd love to see more from you. You can definitely improve if you keep working at it. You've come a really long way. Good job man.

[WAIF]

Apr 18, 2014 21:47:49 GMT -5 FWL said:

Cesaro vs Orton wasn't bad. I liked the toss up through the middle ropes into the Swiss Death by Cesaro, but it could've been sold a little better to make it look as devastating as that move really is. Ending was cool, it caught me by surprise.

MITB was a little up and down for me. Your posing was off and on here. I thought it was really good at times, and others it was a little tough to follow. Some of the standing flips and stuff like that were a little over the top. I liked Tensai and Bourne's battle towards the end, probably my favorite action of the match. Really liked the submission sequence towards the end. I liked how the ending was set up, but wasn't a fan of the move that ended it. I would've rather had a shooting star press end it.

Wasn't really a fan of Cena vs Sheamus, to be honest. Again, your posing was up and down here, and the stuff towards the end didn't really do it for me. Cena just doesn't do apron piledrivers or brainbusters. I'm all for going a different direction for the way a character would normally act, but I just don't buy it with Cena.

Really enjoyed Taker vs Rollins. I liked the cat and mouse game at the beginning of the match with Rollins eluding Taker until he gained the upper hand. You made Rollins look good throughout, and I was convinced Taker was going to lose. Definitely thought it was over when the blackout happened towards the end. Posing was off and on again, but I think it was more on than off this time around. Best match I've ever seen from you.

Bourne vs Tensai was okay. Way too fast paced though, you've gotta give some time to breathe between moves. This was a problem with a few of your matches in this show. I really liked Tensai catching Bourne out of the dive and turning it into a belly to belly, but you didn't give enough time to react to that move before moving right on.

Overall, I think you did good. Rollins vs Taker was definitely match of the night for me. I really hope you get your computer situation worked out, because I'd love to see more from you. You can definitely improve if you keep working at it. You've come a really long way. Good job man.

Thanks man! I posted the main event if you want to give that a watch. Hopefully my computer situation gets better

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Can't wait to watch this!!!

[WAIF]

Apr 19, 2014 5:13:42 GMT -5 @theshowoffcollector said:

Can't wait to watch this!!!

Can't wait to see your review

[WAIF]

23 hour bump

[Wicked]

This was an good show Davonni. I liked it. The posing was stiff or off in some parts but you can always improve. Overall it was a good show and I am excited for the next one.
-Orton vs. was a cool match I thought you did well with this one. I liked how Cesaro stole the win setting up for a rematch. 
-The mitb was alright but it through me off for the whole match with no ladder use until I clued in that it was elimination by pin. I liked the exchange between Tensai and Bourne. This was a cool match.
-Cena vs. Sheamus was really cool. I really liked the way you made Cena such a dastardly heel. Very unique and it makes for a cool character for Cena.
-Rollins vs. Taker was good. It had a lot of back and forth and I liked it. The super pile driver at the end was cool. The posing of Taker on the stage looked a bit goofy and unrealistic at the end.
-Tensai vs. Bourne was cool and really sets the ground for a cool feud. Its a very unique feud as well.
-The main event was cool. I liked the lighting and fancy entrance for Dolph. There were some unrealistic elements to the match but it was ok. I didn't understand why swagger came out really. The end was ok.
Good show Davonni. 

[WAIF]

4 day Bump

[Dylan.]

Apr 22, 2014 15:26:51 GMT -5 WAIF said:

4 day Bump

People who want to watch it will, multiple bumps is not needed. There aren't many feds being posted enough to push your show back even a page for awhile. I'll try and get to this show soon.

[King Of Spice]

This wasn't your worst show, but it was by no means your best either. The posing was good, but in my opinion, your moving the joints a little too much.

Cesaro Vs. Orton -
Probably the best match of the night. I enjoyed the spots, and the roll up finish was cool.

Money In The Bank -
I enjoyed, but again, a little too much joint movement. Another thing I noticed was that they were jumping waaaay too high. But that can be worked on. Some nice spots, just work on what I said.

Cena Vs. Sheamus -
I liked it. Heel Cena is a pretty cool idea. Few stiff poses here and there but nothing too major.

Rollins Vs. Taker -
Nice match. Best posing of the night, but it was a little short. I liked the back and forth aspect, and that fix up looks rather nice. Good work on this one.

Bourne Vs. Tensai -
A good filler match that sets up an original feud. Dominant big guy Vs. Innovative highflier. I love it. Bourne was flying a little too much in this match, but it was still coolio.

Bryan Vs. Ambrose Vs. Ziggler -
I actually really enjoyed this :3. The spots were a little unrealistic, but still didn't detract from the match itself. I loved a good deal of this. Ziggler's table spot and back body drop were both very nice, I liked them.

As I said before, I'm only doing short reviews now to save time for everyone involved. This was a good show Davonni. You're improving, and it's a shame you're quoting, I do see potential in you, just work on a few things like realism and Setups, and you'll be on the way to getting very good.
7/10