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Post by UTTW on Jun 25, 2014 14:31:22 GMT -5
Feel free to leave a review and like.
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Post by Wicked on Jul 4, 2014 23:59:13 GMT -5
This show wasn't the worst man. I liked your stage. Posing wasn't too bad but could still use some work. I don't really get what you are doing with Edge's gimmick and character, it seems awfully similar and maybe even a cheep knock off of Harrison's Joker Edge. Some of the spots were over the top especially the Spear from the top of the ladder out to the floor. There was also some no selling in this show, like when a guy gets right back up after jumping off a ladder. This was an ok show.
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Post by UTTW on Jul 5, 2014 12:31:24 GMT -5
Thnx the edge is meant to be a combination of him during his time with the broods and in 2008 when feuding with undertaker so he is crazy after failing to cash in the money in the bank briefcase last year
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Post by Wicked on Jul 5, 2014 15:56:35 GMT -5
Thnx the edge is meant to be a combination of him during his time with the broods and in 2008 when feuding with undertaker so he is crazy after failing to cash in the money in the bank briefcase last year Whats up with the make up? |
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Post by UTTW on Jul 6, 2014 17:06:30 GMT -5
it was used to make him look more crazy and more like he was in 98 with the broods and that with like blood and stuff
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Post by Deleted on Jul 7, 2014 2:34:09 GMT -5
Here's my first post here:
Opening segment is odd, curious as to why Lesnar tackled Miz into a table instead of just f5ing him into it. I've never watched your fed so I have no clue why Miz is getting assaulted but I don't like miz so I'm enjoying the heck out of it. Stage is pretty neat. Although I think it would look better with a big piece of black construction paper behind it. Roman vs ADR? huh? Weird matchup, hopefully the match is good. The flow is really odd. One minute Roman's attempting a jaw breaker that appears to do nothing then he tips over the ladder and instead of landing with his back to the turnbuckle he lands the other way around. They both seem to not sell anything. I feel like there was lots of stuff they could've done but didn't. 2nd match had lots of cool spots even though I don't really know what it was. I'm assuming it's another ladder match for something. Daniel Bryan wins and suddenly he's on the ground. What did he win? Rock vs Diesel now for some reason...Then skip to the next segment and there's generic promo talking. I'm surprised, I thought this was just gonna be a clip show.
Show was ok. I'd go more indepth but I'm not sure if you guys like indepth replies over here (Not even the pic fed board over on WFIGS likes indepth replies that much). Matchups make some sort of sense.
In a nutshell:
Match flow is odd
Some cool spots
I liked how you had a promo but it was pretty generic
Matchups are odd
I have to ask something though, do you have ongoing storylines or is it just people fighting other people? Never seen your fed before so I don't know.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 7, 2014 4:01:57 GMT -5
Here's my first post here: Opening segment is odd, curious as to why Lesnar tackled Miz into a table instead of just f5ing him into it. I've never watched your fed so I have no clue why Miz is getting assaulted but I don't like miz so I'm enjoying the heck out of it. Stage is pretty neat. Although I think it would look better with a big piece of black construction paper behind it. Roman vs ADR? huh? Weird matchup, hopefully the match is good. The flow is really odd. One minute Roman's attempting a jaw breaker that appears to do nothing then he tips over the ladder and instead of landing with his back to the turnbuckle he lands the other way around. They both seem to not sell anything. I feel like there was lots of stuff they could've done but didn't. 2nd match had lots of cool spots even though I don't really know what it was. I'm assuming it's another ladder match for something. Daniel Bryan wins and suddenly he's on the ground. What did he win? Rock vs Diesel now for some reason...Then skip to the next segment and there's generic promo talking. I'm surprised, I thought this was just gonna be a clip show. Show was ok. I'd go more indepth but I'm not sure if you guys like indepth replies over here (Not even the pic fed board over on WFIGS likes indepth replies that much). Matchups make some sort of sense. In a nutshell: Match flow is odd Some cool spots I liked how you had a promo but it was pretty generic Matchups are odd I have to ask something though, do you have ongoing storylines or is it just people fighting other people? Never seen your fed before so I don't know. okay kid ill make this short welcome to PFI we say hurtful things that we laugh about later on i'm Dann i cant spell for shit so welcome, the dude that is in control is the brah that Created FWI here is the link to his channel im Dann i have been here for 1 year and 10 months here is my channel link www.youtube.com/user/MrDannynolan so hi and welcome to hell, i'm sure you'll grow on us sooner or later |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 7, 2014 4:06:14 GMT -5
oh by the way this show wasn't bad and it wasn't good so i'll give you an 6.25/10 spots were off but just get better soon you'll be up there with ASW as a Lower Mid Card -card fed but you'll get there i know it  |
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Post by UTTW on Jul 7, 2014 12:42:22 GMT -5
Thanks Dann. the thing that Daniel Bryan won was the Money in the bank for the World Heavyweight championship. Also there are stroylines and on pic fed cards and extras i do 3 shows a week Heat Mid Week Mayhem and Combat Zone which all have the storylines towards the ppv
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