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Post by WAIF on Jul 17, 2014 21:13:40 GMT -5
I live reviewed your shit so review mine, or I will send a landmine to you through the mail. I know, I made Bray attempt a suicide dive, but FTW and get GTS'd. After this I am starting Fresh. New name, new show, new ring, new me
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Post by Darrius "DJ" Jackson on Jul 17, 2014 21:46:42 GMT -5
Pretty good show but you should work on movesets you should watch top moves of a certain wrestler and play with your figures so you know what move/ spot to do next
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Wicked
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Post by Wicked on Jul 17, 2014 22:06:44 GMT -5
Posing was pretty stiff throughout this whole show. Matches didn't have the best flow. Von this show wasn't the best. I liked a couple things but the rest of it just didn't click with me. Work on posing and match flow. Also stick to real move sets of the guys. Also the samsung camera pictures were such a big distraction...
-That Jeff Hardy really puts me off. If you have elite 1 jeff why don't you just use it, and if it has broken legs put the bottom of the elite 1 jeff legs on your fix up jeff. This match had a couple cool aerial moves.
-It seemed like you tried really hard on Bryan vs. Punk. This match really didn't click for me. I understood what spots you were doing but they all looked a bit wanky. Posing took away from this match. Also during a test of strength when someone monkey flips someone they don't just land right into a bridging position. This match had some weird spots as well. Why did Bryan do a Kneck breaking Ace Crusher and Punk no sold it?
- Claufio vs. HBK was probably the worst match. A lot of it didn't make sense. You made Claudio and HBK do moves that aren't in there move sets. Also the pile driver from the moonsault was done so poorly, You should've done a tomb stone.
-Bray vs. Randy was ok. A but long and drawn out. Weird spots, and not the best match flow. You made Bray hit the towers of london and an suicide dive :/ ... Some of this match was ridiculous. You may think Punk joining the Wyatt family is award winning creativity but it just seems a bit ridiculous to me. It seems like something vince russo in late WCW would do. Whatever happened with the shield with the miz?
This show wasn't that good. I hope next show you improve your posing, match quality, and book people with there propper move set. I get a feel from your fed that you don't watch indy wrestling but jsut do what everyone else is doing in there fed but just end up botching the indy spots. Anyways nice effort. Hopefully your new ring can bring a new and improved LDHW.
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Post by WAIF on Jul 17, 2014 22:25:06 GMT -5
Posing was pretty stiff throughout this whole show. Matches didn't have the best flow. Von this show wasn't the best. I liked a couple things but the rest of it just didn't click with me. Work on posing and match flow. Also stick to real move sets of the guys. Also the samsung camera pictures were such a big distraction... -That Jeff Hardy really puts me off. If you have elite 1 jeff why don't you just use it, and if it has broken legs put the bottom of the elite 1 jeff legs on your fix up jeff. This match had a couple cool aerial moves. -It seemed like you tried really hard on Bryan vs. Punk. This match really didn't click for me. I understood what spots you were doing but they all looked a bit wanky. Posing took away from this match. Also during a test of strength when someone monkey flips someone they don't just land right into a bridging position. This match had some weird spots as well. Why did Bryan do a Kneck breaking Ace Crusher and Punk no sold it? - Claufio vs. HBK was probably the worst match. A lot of it didn't make sense. You made Claudio and HBK do moves that aren't in there move sets. Also the pile driver from the moonsault was done so poorly, You should've done a tomb stone. -Bray vs. Randy was ok. A but long and drawn out. Weird spots, and not the best match flow. You made Bray hit the towers of london and an suicide dive :/ ... Some of this match was ridiculous. You may think Punk joining the Wyatt family is award winning creativity but it just seems a bit ridiculous to me. It seems like something vince russo in late WCW would do. Whatever happened with the shield with the miz? This show wasn't that good. I hope next show you improve your posing, match quality, and book people with there propper move set. I get a feel from your fed that you don't watch indy wrestling but jsut do what everyone else is doing in there fed but just end up botching the indy spots. Anyways nice effort. Hopefully your new ring can bring a new and improved LDHW. Honestly this show was pretty rushed. I was at my grandmothers house on her table. I understand what your saying about the indy stuff. I will try my hardest to improve. The CM Punk thing will be explained soon. The posing was something I did try to work on, I guess I didn't execute it well. What is a Towers of London though? I will try my hardest on my next show. Thanks for the review. EDIT: Also keep in mind that the Wyatt Family isn't a thing in my fed. Just think of it as CM Punk and Bray Wyatt joining for forces |
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Post by Wicked on Jul 17, 2014 22:30:05 GMT -5
Posing was pretty stiff throughout this whole show. Matches didn't have the best flow. Von this show wasn't the best. I liked a couple things but the rest of it just didn't click with me. Work on posing and match flow. Also stick to real move sets of the guys. Also the samsung camera pictures were such a big distraction... -That Jeff Hardy really puts me off. If you have elite 1 jeff why don't you just use it, and if it has broken legs put the bottom of the elite 1 jeff legs on your fix up jeff. This match had a couple cool aerial moves. -It seemed like you tried really hard on Bryan vs. Punk. This match really didn't click for me. I understood what spots you were doing but they all looked a bit wanky. Posing took away from this match. Also during a test of strength when someone monkey flips someone they don't just land right into a bridging position. This match had some weird spots as well. Why did Bryan do a Kneck breaking Ace Crusher and Punk no sold it? - Claufio vs. HBK was probably the worst match. A lot of it didn't make sense. You made Claudio and HBK do moves that aren't in there move sets. Also the pile driver from the moonsault was done so poorly, You should've done a tomb stone. -Bray vs. Randy was ok. A but long and drawn out. Weird spots, and not the best match flow. You made Bray hit the towers of london and an suicide dive :/ ... Some of this match was ridiculous. You may think Punk joining the Wyatt family is award winning creativity but it just seems a bit ridiculous to me. It seems like something vince russo in late WCW would do. Whatever happened with the shield with the miz? This show wasn't that good. I hope next show you improve your posing, match quality, and book people with there propper move set. I get a feel from your fed that you don't watch indy wrestling but jsut do what everyone else is doing in there fed but just end up botching the indy spots. Anyways nice effort. Hopefully your new ring can bring a new and improved LDHW. Honestly this show was pretty rushed. I was at my grandmothers house on her table. I understand what your saying about the indy stuff. I will try my hardest to improve. The CM Punk thing will be explained soon. The posing was something I did try to work on, I guess I didn't execute it well. What is a Towers of London though? I will try my hardest on my next show. Thanks for the review It's #9. |
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Post by WAIF on Jul 17, 2014 22:34:46 GMT -5
Honestly this show was pretty rushed. I was at my grandmothers house on her table. I understand what your saying about the indy stuff. I will try my hardest to improve. The CM Punk thing will be explained soon. The posing was something I did try to work on, I guess I didn't execute it well. What is a Towers of London though? I will try my hardest on my next show. Thanks for the review It's #9. Oh ok, I didn't know that was an indy move Also keep in mind that the Wyatt Family isn't a thing in my fed. Just think of it as CM Punk and Bray Wyatt joining for forces. |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 17, 2014 22:35:39 GMT -5
Since you will review mine ill try too review yours I'm not really good at this like you are but this will not be in depth becuase like I said I suck at these.
Evan vs hardy
I really liked the match it had good spots and highflying spots. I didn't really understand the end after tho.
CM punk Daniel Bryan.
Wow I liked this match more. The beginning was kinda wierd but it kept on getting better and better my favorite thing about it is the submission pins and stuff.
Cesaro vs Shawn micheals
I didn't really pay much attention too this match then the others but this was one of those solid generic matches that you can see on WWE SmackDown. But it's a nice gues between the both.
Bray vs Orton
This match started off good but as time went by it started getting kinda weird with the botch especially. But it had some good parts.
Overall posing was fine in this show and loved the matches.
5.5/10
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Post by Wicked on Jul 17, 2014 22:57:46 GMT -5
Overall posing was fine in this show and loved the matches. 5.5/10 I really don't understand your way of reviewing. Leave some criticism, don't just say "I loved everything, 5/10".. |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 17, 2014 22:59:40 GMT -5
Overall posing was fine in this show and loved the matches. 5.5/10 I really don't understand your way of reviewing. Leave some criticism, don't just say "I loved everything, 5/10".. read the whole thing and I don't want to be that rude...........just whatever I'm taking this as advice ill do that next time I review stuff. |
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