King Of Spice
Trevor From OLN
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Post by King Of Spice on Jul 24, 2014 18:09:37 GMT -5
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Part 2:
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Post by Trademark on Jul 24, 2014 20:31:01 GMT -5
Nah mate, it's okay in the videos section.
As for the matches, there is still a lot to be worked on. One thing that was bothering me is that your arena doesn't really feel like a wrestling arena. I would recommend getting either a black towel or poster board for a floor mat.
I know it's been said a thousand times, but a ring would do WONDERS for you. Besides some poses being sloppy, this is the one thing holding you back imo. As for the posing, it could still use a lot of improvement. Don't get me wrong, you're getting better, but it still feels like some sequences don't flow well and just leaves a bad taste.
You're putting out consistent shows though, and that's all you can really do so well done and keep at it.
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Post by King Of Spice on Jul 25, 2014 3:08:10 GMT -5
Nah mate, it's okay in the videos section. As for the matches, there is still a lot to be worked on. One thing that was bothering me is that your arena doesn't really feel like a wrestling arena. I would recommend getting either a black towel or poster board for a floor mat. I know it's been said a thousand times, but a ring would do WONDERS for you. Besides some poses being sloppy, this is the one thing holding you back imo. As for the posing, it could still use a lot of improvement. Don't get me wrong, you're getting better, but it still feels like some sequences don't flow well and just leaves a bad taste. You're putting out consistent shows though, and that's all you can really do so well done and keep at it. Thanks very much John. I appreciate you taking the time to watch and review this. Yeah, I really do need to get a new ring, because Richard put it best the other night - "Because your ring looks bad, people will presume what's going on in it will be bad." Anyways, I appreciate the review John-Boy. (btw, for those who don't know, this is a compilation of old PFBs and unreleased matches.)
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Post by King Of Spice on Jul 25, 2014 11:03:44 GMT -5
Updated with part 2.
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