WAIF A Hypocrite's Paradise

[WAIF]

I know I finished rather quickly, but this was so fun to film. I haven't had fun filming in a while tbh. I love it, I hope you guys do to. Leave a review and I will return the favor on a show of your choosing.



Tagline- "Isn't this the same guy who took a hit on Jordan's reboot? What a hypocrite....."



Randy Orton vs Dean Ambrose- US Title Extreme Rules



Evan Bourne vs Sin Cara- X Division Title



Kurt Angle vs CM Punk vs Cesaro- MITB



Daniel Bryan vs Dolph Ziggler- WAIF Title

[WAIF]

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[FWL]

Decent show. Like the new arena. Your posing improved a bit, but keep working on it. Ditch the 3-count for pinfalls, they don't work. It just doesn't flow well with the pace of the match and you weren't consistent with the speed of it throughout anyway. Stick to what works for us all. I was impressed with the triple threat match, you had some good sequences in it. Work on the Angle Slam though, it didn't look good at all. Something about the main event just didn't click for me, but I liked the ending. I'm happiest about the fact that you had fun filming this, because that tells me you enjoy it and you'll keep working at it, which can only lead to improvement. Keep it up man.

[WAIF]

Jul 27, 2014 17:43:09 GMT -5 FWL said:

Decent show. Like the new arena. Your posing improved a bit, but keep working on it. Ditch the 3-count for pinfalls, they don't work. It just doesn't flow well with the pace of the match and you weren't consistent with the speed of it throughout anyway. Stick to what works for us all. I was impressed with the triple threat match, you had some good sequences in it. Work on the Angle Slam though, it didn't look good at all. Something about the main event just didn't click for me, but I liked the ending. I'm happiest about the fact that you had fun filming this, because that tells me you enjoy it and you'll keep working at it, which can only lead to improvement. Keep it up man.

Glad you enjoyed it. As for the 3 counts, I am going to keep them because it helps with the psychology of the matches. Makes it more suspenseful. Glad you liked the triple threat match. I do agree with the stuff you said about the main event though. At first I loved it, but the more times I watched it the more I hated it, but hey. Thanks for the review. 

[Dylan.]

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Honeslty this show was not very good. A lot of this show felt weird. Not enough pictures. Awkward posing throughout. And not to mention a lot of unrealistic moves in between. My advice is to focus on posing and how matches are done. Like flow and psychology so people will enjoy your show. Also get Heyman some legs.

[PhoenixFeathers]

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This is the first time I have seen one of your shows in a while Davonni, man. You need to work on a lot.. I dont mean this in an asshole way, but man. The spots are too much, there is hardly any chain wrestling in your fed, it's just big move after big move. I feel like FSW took over your fed. Make the matches build up to the big moves and stop doing completely unrealistic moves, I couldn't even tell what was going on at some points. The posing was pretty good for the most part, but it is also very odd in a lot of it. And that tiger bomb on the top rope.... -sigh- Please just work on these things.

-Match Quality (building up to big moves, actual chain wrestling. Matches should start off slow unless proven unnecessary)

-Posing

-Not doing some of the most ridiculous spots I've seen

-get rid of the 3 count as it sucks huge pee-pee.

[WAIF]

Jul 27, 2014 22:00:32 GMT -5 PhoenixFeathers said:

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This is the first time I have seen one of your shows in a while Davonni, man. You need to work on a lot.. I dont mean this in an asshole way, but man. The spots are too much, there is hardly any chain wrestling in your fed, it's just big move after big move. I feel like FSW took over your fed. Make the matches build up to the big moves and stop doing completely unrealistic moves, I couldn't even tell what was going on at some points. The posing was pretty good for the most part, but it is also very odd in a lot of it. And that tiger bomb on the top rope.... -sigh- Please just work on these things.

-Match Quality (building up to big moves, actual chain wrestling. Matches should start off slow unless proven unnecessary)

-Posing

-Not doing some of the most ridiculous spots I've seen

-get rid of the 3 count as it sucks huge pee-pee.

Thanks for the review man. I will work on those things. What spots were you talking about that were so crazy? 

Jul 27, 2014 21:58:21 GMT -5 Dylan. said:

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Honeslty this show was not very good. A lot of this show felt weird. Not enough pictures. Awkward posing throughout. And not to mention a lot of unrealistic moves in between. My advice is to focus on posing and how matches are done. Like flow and psychology so people will enjoy your show. Also get Heyman some legs.

Jul 27, 2014 21:58:21 GMT -5 Dylan. said:

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Honeslty this show was not very good. A lot of this show felt weird. Not enough pictures. Awkward posing throughout. And not to mention a lot of unrealistic moves in between. My advice is to focus on posing and how matches are done. Like flow and psychology so people will enjoy your show. Also get Heyman some legs.

LOL, I didn't want the Samsung part in there but I don't really know why it keeps happening. I will ask the same question to you as well. Which spot was so crazy? And what do you mean by get Heyman some legs?