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Post by WAIF on Aug 1, 2014 23:55:28 GMT -5
Dylan. PhoenixFeathers, is this any better than the last show? King Of Spice you promised hoe.
Also sorry about my shows coming so rapidly. I have no life. Also I will admit that the curb stomp spot in the first match was really stupid.
Post Show Interview Jack WFigs: Hey Daniel after that amzing match, do you see Evan Bourne as a threat in the near future? Daniel: Well... *Heyman steps in* Heyman: Are you an idiot Mr. Diamond? Of course you are because you would know that there is no such thing as a threat when it comes to the reigning, defending WAIF champion. He is the champion for a reason. That reason just ironicly is that he is the personification of Wrestling At It's Finest. He is WAIF. What is next, you ask? Well that is simple. Watch and see. *Heyman and Bryan walk off* Jack: Thank you Mr Heyman
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Post by Deleted on Aug 2, 2014 0:10:20 GMT -5
One of your best shows that's all man amazing.
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Post by WAIF on Aug 2, 2014 0:11:54 GMT -5
One of your best shows that's all man amazing. Thanks. You may wanna finish it though
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Post by PhoenixFeathers on Aug 2, 2014 0:38:16 GMT -5
I feel like your fed could be really good if you fixed up some awkward poses and learned how to pace a match. It was better than last show, but there is so much repetitiveness in matches it's unreal. People should try hit only 2 finishers minimum in a match unless there NEEDS to be more. Please work on it.
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Post by WAIF on Aug 2, 2014 0:44:58 GMT -5
I feel like your fed could be really good if you fixed up some awkward poses and learned how to pace a match. It was better than last show, but there is so much repetitiveness in matches it's unreal. People should try hit only 2 finishers minimum in a match unless there NEEDS to be more. Please work on it. I think it was like the for the first match, which I filmed before you guys gave me. I think you should give the rest a chance man.
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Post by Steiner Recliner on Aug 2, 2014 0:50:45 GMT -5
This is what happens when you film a show in less than a week.
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Post by WAIF on Aug 2, 2014 0:54:17 GMT -5
This is what happens when you film a show in less than a week. There is no way the WHOLE show was that bad. Can somebody please watch past the first fucking match?
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Post by Deleted on Aug 2, 2014 8:03:11 GMT -5
This is your problem Davoni, you ask people for criticism and when you get it you are quick to defend what they said about it. You really just need to take your time, your last two shows came out with only a week or two in between and I even honestly haven't had time to watch the last show let alone this one. We get that you are having fun filming but just because you are having fun doesn't mean we the viewrs are enjoying seeing a show from you what feels like every other week. You have to understand that it's hard for us to see any improvement when you are putting out shows at the rate you are a few weeks is a small time period to improve in.
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Post by WAIF on Aug 2, 2014 11:32:32 GMT -5
This is your problem Davoni, you ask people for criticism and when you get it you are quick to defend what they said about it. You really just need to take your time, your last two shows came out with only a week or two in between and I even honestly haven't had time to watch the last show let alone this one. We get that you are having fun filming but just because you are having fun doesn't mean we the viewrs are enjoying seeing a show from you what feels like every other week. You have to understand that it's hard for us to see any improvement when you are putting out shows at the rate you are a few weeks is a small time period to improve in. I do admit that I do get mad or frustrated when people don't watch the whole show or something. I will work on that, but I do get what you're saying when it comes to the rapid shows. I have nothing else to do but film and I get done way earlier than needed. I will try to find something to do instead of filming. I hope you enjoy the show when you give it a watch. Also I don't understand how people can judge an entire based off of the first match. Thats why I was kind of mad. So yeah. Thanks fkr the advice.
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Post by Gnaddi on Aug 2, 2014 12:08:02 GMT -5
The first match was awful. Lots of weird moves, posing was ok at some parts and at some parts it was´nt. You repeated some moves way too often. Also why would Punk go for a powerbomb after he hit the GTS? So yeah there was´nt anything that I really liked about that match. The squash match was ok. Morrison vs Cena was better. Ok Cena in the Macho jacket was kinda stupid but oh well.. But the match was good, posing was good at some points. But still you had a lot of stiff poses in there. As others told you before you need to get out these 3 counts by the referee. They ruin the flow. Last two matches were ok, for posing same applies as on the Cena vs JoMo. I don´t know but there was nothing that was awesome about this show but it was´nt too bad either. Take more time for your next one and make sure every pose looks good before taking the pic.
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Post by PhoenixFeathers on Aug 2, 2014 13:29:38 GMT -5
I feel like your fed could be really good if you fixed up some awkward poses and learned how to pace a match. It was better than last show, but there is so much repetitiveness in matches it's unreal. People should try hit only 2 finishers minimum in a match unless there NEEDS to be more. Please work on it. I think it was like the for the first match, which I filmed before you guys gave me. I think you should give the rest a chance man. John and I watched the entire show last night.
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Post by Trademark on Aug 2, 2014 13:34:30 GMT -5
I think it was like the for the first match, which I filmed before you guys gave me. I think you should give the rest a chance man. John and I watched the entire show last night. Tis is true. I agree with everything Micheal and Troy said. The room for improvement is there, but I couldn't get past the odd posing and sometimes utterly ridiculous sequences. On the bright side, your arena looks nice and the quality remained great throughout the show.
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Post by gabe on Aug 2, 2014 15:39:20 GMT -5
Basically what everyone above me said. Use that advice and put it to use when you film. Take your time with every move, no need to rush. Also, the psycology of the match as well. There doesn't need to be so many finishers in one match. That's all from me.
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Post by Jack on Aug 3, 2014 11:42:50 GMT -5
Right, I am not going to repeat what everyone else has said, but I will talk briefly about the psychology of a wrestling match just to help you gain greater insight into what we all mean. A finisher is a finisher, it it meant to end the match. I see far too many feds that just destroy the illusion of a finisher by having guys kick out of such EVERY show. It doesn't make it a finisher anymore. Defeating its whole purpose. I will talk to you about one match which justifies this, Tanahashi vs. Suzuki in 2012. 5 Star Classic. Number of finishers hit in the match 1. It ended a classic. Good matches come by building up to a finish. NO ONE has kicked out of Okada's rainmaker. When someone does, THE CROWD WILL LOOSE THEIR FUCKING MINDS. That is the reaction YOU want when someone kicks out of a finisher. Problem is, that is not the reaction YOU are getting. No one gives a crap when a finisher is kicked out off, as it is the norm.
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Post by Dylan. on Aug 3, 2014 12:41:39 GMT -5
Right, I am not going to repeat what everyone else has said, but I will talk briefly about the psychology of a wrestling match just to help you gain greater insight into what we all mean. A finisher is a finisher, it it meant to end the match. I see far too many feds that just destroy the illusion of a finisher by having guys kick out of such EVERY show. It doesn't make it a finisher anymore. Defeating its whole purpose. I will talk to you about one match which justifies this, Tanahashi vs. Suzuki in 2012. 5 Star Classic. Number of finishers hit in the match 1. It ended a classic. Good matches come by building up to a finish. NO ONE has kicked out of Okada's rainmaker. When someone does, THE CROWD WILL LOOSE THEIR FUCKING MINDS. That is the reaction YOU want when someone kicks out of a finisher. Problem is, that is not the reaction YOU are getting. No one gives a crap when a finisher is kicked out off, as it is the norm. So I asked like five times for you to review my show from over a month ago and you review Davonnis just now and everyone elses? Nigga I'm fucking done
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