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Post by Deleted on Aug 4, 2014 21:34:41 GMT -5
**Please Read** My old computer can't take all the files and things so this was very hard to make. I'm also new to pic fed with a camera and computer it's easier on iPod so didn't expect it to be this short. Also some of the pictures got messed up. I will also make a fallout showing some people's reactions from backstage in the near future Match Card 1. Battle Royal for Intercontinental Title 2. Best Friends (Chuck Taylor and Trent Barretta) vs E&C 3. 5-man Championship Scramble Kurt angle vs Chris Hero vs CM Punk vs Wade Barrett vs Chris Jericho |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 5, 2014 20:25:53 GMT -5
so, I watched this yesterday, and I also watched it today, from what I take, this is your first full PPV? If so, you did good, by far better than my first. If you carry on improving at this rate, I reckon you can get good fast. It still had some thing which I didn't like though, which I will explain.
13 man battle royal
13 men? Bit weird, anyway, I think you had a lot of interesting wrestlers in this match, looks like you have a solid roster. Start was pretty cool, I think in this match (and others) your posing was inconsistent. Sometimes you had great poses, sometimes they where pretty bad. The german suplex to the outside was cool, I think Ziggler went to high, still a cool spot. I think Big Show got eliminated WAY to early. At the start you made him look real strong by playing up the fact that 'it needs everyone to take him down', then he just got eliminated straight away. The Eddie spot was pretty cool, Jomo's superkick was done well. Pretty cool match overall, some bad and some good poses. Happy with the outcome.
Batita and Lesnar vs Edge and Christian
having the Bestfreinds is unique, nice Taylor. Also love the Edge. Again, there were great and bad poses, you need to be consistent and always take your time! I like the Lesnar and Batista team. The match itself was fine, nothing much special. I loved how you did that F-5 though, nice one. The ending was alright, looks like you have a great tag team division!!
Kurt Angle vs Chris Hero
Damn, only 4 matches! Anyway, unique match right here, don't think anyone's done it before (?) either way, I like the idea. Awesome Angle!!! Hero is good to, this was MOTN. even though it didn't really make sense for me. Posing was quite a bit better in this match! I really think Angle did that top rope suplex WAY WAY to early, a top rope suplex would NEVER happen in the first 15 seconds, that's just not realistic. Um, why did Punk just randomly join the match? I'm really confused, anyway. Kurt got defeated in the first 42 seconds...really? Timing looks like a big factor you need to work on buddy. Hero went way to high in that GTS. So now Wade randomly joins..? Is this like a royal rumble for the WHC or something, because I don't think that's anything what it said on the card, anyway, Wade's elbows were done very well!! Why's Angle still in the match? I'm sure Hero got pinned to, but whatevs. The main event was cool, I just don't really know what was meant to be going on. That Angle slam was pretty cool. Interesting ending, hope to see a storyline with that soon.
Overall thoughts: As I said, good show for a first, well done. I can see your fed going far, but there is still a lot you need to work on!! Work on realism, timing, consistency of posing etc. I really hope this review helped you. I don't usually give ratings, but if it'd help you, i'd give it a 6/10
good job for your first! Hope to see more.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 5, 2014 20:36:33 GMT -5
so, I watched this yesterday, and I also watched it today, from what I take, this is your first full PPV? If so, you did good, by far better than my first. If you carry on improving at this rate, I reckon you can get good fast. It still had some thing which I didn't like though, which I will explain. 13 man battle royal 13 men? Bit weird, anyway, I think you had a lot of interesting wrestlers in this match, looks like you have a solid roster. Start was pretty cool, I think in this match (and others) your posing was inconsistent. Sometimes you had great poses, sometimes they where pretty bad. The german suplex to the outside was cool, I think Ziggler went to high, still a cool spot. I think Big Show got eliminated WAY to early. At the start you made him look real strong by playing up the fact that 'it needs everyone to take him down', then he just got eliminated straight away. The Eddie spot was pretty cool, Jomo's superkick was done well. Pretty cool match overall, some bad and some good poses. Happy with the outcome. Batita and Lesnar vs Edge and Christian having the Bestfreinds is unique, nice Taylor. Also love the Edge. Again, there were great and bad poses, you need to be consistent and always take your time! I like the Lesnar and Batista team. The match itself was fine, nothing much special. I loved how you did that F-5 though, nice one. The ending was alright, looks like you have a great tag team division!! Kurt Angle vs Chris Hero Damn, only 4 matches! Anyway, unique match right here, don't think anyone's done it before (?) either way, I like the idea. Awesome Angle!!! Hero is good to, this was MOTN. even though it didn't really make sense for me. Posing was quite a bit better in this match! I really think Angle did that top rope suplex WAY WAY to early, a top rope suplex would NEVER happen in the first 15 seconds, that's just not realistic. Um, why did Punk just randomly join the match? I'm really confused, anyway. Kurt got defeated in the first 42 seconds...really? Timing looks like a big factor you need to work on buddy. Hero went way to high in that GTS. So now Wade randomly joins..? Is this like a royal rumble for the WHC or something, because I don't think that's anything what it said on the card, anyway, Wade's elbows were done very well!! Why's Angle still in the match? I'm sure Hero got pinned to, but whatevs. The main event was cool, I just don't really know what was meant to be going on. That Angle slam was pretty cool. Interesting ending, hope to see a storyline with that soon. Overall thoughts: As I said, good show for a first, well done. I can see your fed going far, but there is still a lot you need to work on!! Work on realism, timing, consistency of posing etc. I really hope this review helped you. I don't usually give ratings, but if it'd help you, i'd give it a 6/10 good job for your first! Hope to see more. thanks man that helped a lot and ill work on what you said I love your fed also. The last match was a Championship Scramble but thanks ill work on making matches more longer and realistic. |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 5, 2014 20:40:30 GMT -5
so, I watched this yesterday, and I also watched it today, from what I take, this is your first full PPV? If so, you did good, by far better than my first. If you carry on improving at this rate, I reckon you can get good fast. It still had some thing which I didn't like though, which I will explain. 13 man battle royal 13 men? Bit weird, anyway, I think you had a lot of interesting wrestlers in this match, looks like you have a solid roster. Start was pretty cool, I think in this match (and others) your posing was inconsistent. Sometimes you had great poses, sometimes they where pretty bad. The german suplex to the outside was cool, I think Ziggler went to high, still a cool spot. I think Big Show got eliminated WAY to early. At the start you made him look real strong by playing up the fact that 'it needs everyone to take him down', then he just got eliminated straight away. The Eddie spot was pretty cool, Jomo's superkick was done well. Pretty cool match overall, some bad and some good poses. Happy with the outcome. Batita and Lesnar vs Edge and Christian having the Bestfreinds is unique, nice Taylor. Also love the Edge. Again, there were great and bad poses, you need to be consistent and always take your time! I like the Lesnar and Batista team. The match itself was fine, nothing much special. I loved how you did that F-5 though, nice one. The ending was alright, looks like you have a great tag team division!! Kurt Angle vs Chris Hero Damn, only 4 matches! Anyway, unique match right here, don't think anyone's done it before (?) either way, I like the idea. Awesome Angle!!! Hero is good to, this was MOTN. even though it didn't really make sense for me. Posing was quite a bit better in this match! I really think Angle did that top rope suplex WAY WAY to early, a top rope suplex would NEVER happen in the first 15 seconds, that's just not realistic. Um, why did Punk just randomly join the match? I'm really confused, anyway. Kurt got defeated in the first 42 seconds...really? Timing looks like a big factor you need to work on buddy. Hero went way to high in that GTS. So now Wade randomly joins..? Is this like a royal rumble for the WHC or something, because I don't think that's anything what it said on the card, anyway, Wade's elbows were done very well!! Why's Angle still in the match? I'm sure Hero got pinned to, but whatevs. The main event was cool, I just don't really know what was meant to be going on. That Angle slam was pretty cool. Interesting ending, hope to see a storyline with that soon. Overall thoughts: As I said, good show for a first, well done. I can see your fed going far, but there is still a lot you need to work on!! Work on realism, timing, consistency of posing etc. I really hope this review helped you. I don't usually give ratings, but if it'd help you, i'd give it a 6/10 good job for your first! Hope to see more. thanks man that helped a lot and ill work on what you said I love your fed also. The last match was a Championship Scramble but thanks ill work on making matches more longer and realistic. ohhh, my bad, sorry. glad I helped anyway. |
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Post by Jack on Aug 6, 2014 8:21:49 GMT -5
This was not too bad dude for a first show, I have seen much worst, but obviously there is a lot to work on. Firstly, some of the poses were good, others were pretty off. I suggest working on the stiff poses especially and making sure you move all the joints in the figures just to make it smoother and more realistic as a match goes on. Also, the pacing of your matches is slightly meh. In the battle royal guys were getting thrown out in the first 20 seconds from big moves, also, Batista was hitting big moves within the opening of the match. I know they are short matches, but nonetheless, have SOME kinda off pacing. The Codebreaker poses were cool though.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 6, 2014 21:43:11 GMT -5
This was not too bad dude for a first show, I have seen much worst, but obviously there is a lot to work on. Firstly, some of the poses were good, others were pretty off. I suggest working on the stiff poses especially and making sure you move all the joints in the figures just to make it smoother and more realistic as a match goes on. Also, the pacing of your matches is slightly meh. In the battle royal guys were getting thrown out in the first 20 seconds from big moves, also, Batista was hitting big moves within the opening of the match. I know they are short matches, but nonetheless, have SOME kinda off pacing. The Codebreaker poses were cool though. thanks jack looking back I really need some work on my posing and pacing. Ill do better next time. |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 12, 2014 18:17:49 GMT -5
Bubble bump
bubble bubble bump
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