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Post by Deleted on Aug 16, 2014 18:32:47 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Aug 16, 2014 19:52:47 GMT -5
first thoughts: you made this ppv pretty quick by the looks of it, but's that's not a bad thing, because by just watching the first part of the MITB I can see your posing has improved! I think you really need to speed up your frame rate though, it does get quite boring when the pictures are on for that long. I would recommend 0.75, that's what I enjoy watching/use for my ppv's.
Money In The Bank: I like your Rollins and Hardy customs a hell of a lot more than the Chris Hero and Generico, their actually pretty good. Good posing in this match, lot's of cool spots, you did that codebreaker nicely. Kofi's dropkick was also pretty nice. RVD's rolling thunder was verry stiff, work on that, but tbf it is hard with those knee pads. I liked the part when Sheamus threw the ladder on Jericho and everyone hit their finisher, that spot was very cool! All your codebreakers look great. I was rooting for Kofi, but Jericho winning is pretty cool. Good back and forth action in this one, posing was pretty good and you had a lot of nice spots, good match! I liked it.
Kofi Kingston vs Bryan Danielson: Kofi in another match? He just completely no sold the MITB lol. I really really loved the spot were Kofi went for the TIP and Bryan hit the knee, that was great, too many finishers really early in the match though. Kofi's boom drop was nice, the double footstomp wasn't the best though. That finish just completely came out of no where. Average match, some really cool poses and spots but it just kinda felt like something was missing, idk, nice job though.
Jon Moxley vs Bray Wyatt: The Moxley custom is quite good. Your punches through the ppv were quite stiff, so work on them. Another finisher at the start? C'mon man, it just takes away the whole effect of a finisher. Match had some cool extreme spots, I liked the blood. That powerbomb through the table with nails was nasty!! But Moxley kicking out of that is very unrealistic, even for Moxley, should of saved that for later. And there shoulda been more blood after that imo. He just rolled him up after the sister abigail, you'r not being realistic with finishers!! Ending was kinda cool, but Mox completely no sold the sister abigail. Cool extreme match, some good spots and use of weapons, but was pretty unrealistic tbh, just work on the realism of the matches.
CM Punk vs Seth Rollins: I like that steel cage! I think they both tried to escape wayy to early. That CM Punk spot where he get's him on his shoulders came out of NO WHERE! Save big spots like that for later and build it up!! It can't take 2 frames for a big spot like that to happen. I really can't tell what Rollins tries to do, a SSP? a footstomp? It was kinda weird, did Rollins just bounce of the cage? That's kinda stupid since their are no ropes in the ring. I liked that flying kick to the head Rollins did! Looked nasty. So Rollins just hit the blackout and Punk gets STRAIGHT back up? You need to work on realism of finishers bud. How does Punk hit a pepsi plunge from the top in 4 frames, you need more frames! Still pretty cool though. That GTS reversal was pretty cool, good spot right there. Holy shit! That blackout was nasty! and you did it well to! Nice one. wait, how did Rollins just win? He didn't pin him or escape? He just hit the blackout. Was Punk out? Chris cashing in was cool and you did it at a cool time. I seriously doubt it takes TWO codebreakers to pin Rollins after that blackout! Chris as champ is pretty cool. Good match, nice main event, some cool spots and a good ending!
final thoughts: good ppv! I enjoyed it for the most part, you improved a lot in a short time which is a good sign! Here are the main things I think you should work on.
1. the amount on frames in moves.
2. less finishers
3.realism
4. there were some stiff poses, but for your first ppv, it was great.
really good for your first man, I hope I helped. Can't wait to see more!!
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