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Post by WAIF on Aug 23, 2014 0:16:23 GMT -5
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Post by FWL on Aug 23, 2014 22:02:39 GMT -5
This was pretty good. I see improvement and I can tell you're really trying to get better. I'm glad you dropped the whole 3-count thing, but I would suggest dropping the frame of the ref dropping down to their level before starting the count. One frame of different may not seem like much, but it really does help to keep the pace and flow of the match steady. I get that you want to do different things, but as the old saying goes: "If it's not broke, don't fix it". Also, releasing a two-match show isn't a good idea. Quick shows are nice, but should never be THAT quick. This could've waited a bit until you finished a couple more matches.
Keep working at it. You've improved with almost every show you put out. Just take your time and don't rush your shows just because you want someone to see it. Looking forward to your next one.
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Post by WAIF on Aug 23, 2014 22:19:34 GMT -5
This was pretty good. I see improvement and I can tell you're really trying to get better. I'm glad you dropped the whole 3-count thing, but I would suggest dropping the frame of the ref dropping down to their level before starting the count. One frame of different may not seem like much, but it really does help to keep the pace and flow of the match steady. I get that you want to do different things, but as the old saying goes: "If it's not broke, don't fix it". Also, releasing a two-match show isn't a good idea. Quick shows are nice, but should never be THAT quick. This could've waited a bit until you finished a couple more matches. Keep working at it. You've improved with almost every show you put out. Just take your time and don't rush your shows just because you want someone to see it. Looking forward to your next one. Thanks for the review. I will work on these things. My next show will have more matches. Its just that I pushed some stuff back to fit the time frame of when I wanted to do these matches. The next show won't be out until October so yeah. Glad you enjoyed it for the most part. EDIT) What wasn't broken that I tried to fix? |
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Post by PRIME Wrestling on Aug 23, 2014 23:39:52 GMT -5
I'm gonna go ahead and say pacing got a lot better and posing has a little improvement, but I will also say that these horrible CAWs will stop your fed from growing and becoming bigger and having a two match PPV isn't even worth releasing. I don't get how having school is an excuse. I've been releasing 25-30 minute shows every month for a long time. John, Harrison, and Cody all were finishing up high school when some of their best stuff was released. If you took more time to film then you wouldn't be disappointing. Two matches? I can film two matches in two-three days. No one is in a rush for you to release a show, so just take your time. And seriously, these CAWs need to be thrown away.
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Post by gabe on Aug 23, 2014 23:51:50 GMT -5
Yeah I agree with what Jordan said, I really don't like the caws. 1 is fine, but the rest are just egh. That's one of the main reasons why I only have one CAW in my fed now. Because CAWS are garbage in a fed if not used right. Cena vs. Bourne was fine. There were still a lot of things that can be fixed that still bother me in your fed. Pacing was good, posing has improved slightly, just the psychology. Never forget the psychology of the match. It felt like sometimes during the match some random moves were being thrown around to make it longer. As well as some other stuff. You've improved a bit, but the CAWS are blegh.
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Post by FWL on Aug 24, 2014 0:07:13 GMT -5
This was pretty good. I see improvement and I can tell you're really trying to get better. I'm glad you dropped the whole 3-count thing, but I would suggest dropping the frame of the ref dropping down to their level before starting the count. One frame of different may not seem like much, but it really does help to keep the pace and flow of the match steady. I get that you want to do different things, but as the old saying goes: "If it's not broke, don't fix it". Also, releasing a two-match show isn't a good idea. Quick shows are nice, but should never be THAT quick. This could've waited a bit until you finished a couple more matches. Keep working at it. You've improved with almost every show you put out. Just take your time and don't rush your shows just because you want someone to see it. Looking forward to your next one. Thanks for the review. I will work on these things. My next show will have more matches. Its just that I pushed some stuff back to fit the time frame of when I wanted to do these matches. The next show won't be out until October so yeah. Glad you enjoyed it for the most part. EDIT) What wasn't broken that I tried to fix?I was referring to the pin count method that the majority of us use on here. Two frames, one to raise the hand and one to bring it down. That's all you need. |
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Post by Trademark on Aug 24, 2014 8:55:19 GMT -5
I skimmed through and one of the first things that annoyed me is your top top moves. You don't really have them jump up like they should, they sort of just glide through the air.
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Post by WAIF on Aug 24, 2014 9:50:05 GMT -5
I skimmed through and one of the first things that annoyed me is your top top moves. You don't really have them jump up like they should, they sort of just glide through the air. Dont wanna sound dumb or anything, but what do you mean? |
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Post by Trademark on Aug 24, 2014 9:55:17 GMT -5
I skimmed through and one of the first things that annoyed me is your top top moves. You don't really have them jump up like they should, they sort of just glide through the air. Dont wanna sound dumb or anything, but what do you mean? Look at the Airbourne. |
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Post by WAIF on Aug 24, 2014 10:03:15 GMT -5
Dont wanna sound dumb or anything, but what do you mean? Look at the Airbourne. Oh ok I understand what you mean. Let me know when you give it a full watch so I can see what you thought. You're kind of god. |
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Post by Trademark on Aug 24, 2014 10:36:40 GMT -5
Oh ok I understand what you mean. Let me know when you give it a full watch so I can see what you thought. You're kind of god. I'll do that tonight. The venue looks nice and the addition of the curtain really adds to it. While watching the first match I can see improvement but the CAW's are really throwing everything off. No offence m8, but they're very poorly done and really decrease your feds production in a sense. Going to what Gabe said, Cena Vs. Bourne was good but it felt like you were doing moves just to do moves. I will say that your posing has without-a-doubt improved so good on that. Overall it was average. It's hard to give full fledged thoughts on a 10 minute show, especially when you're pumping them out at such a high rate. If you want my advice, take your time on your next show. Have it be 5-6 matches and don't put it out within the span of a few weeks. Sorry for the short comment. I'm very tired right now and promised a comment so here it is. Good signs of improvement. :bo |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 24, 2014 22:36:39 GMT -5
First time watching your fed.
God knows who vs God knows who for the wtf championship. Match is already better then anything I've ever done (I find myself saying that a lot) but it's a little too fast paced. I know I can't expect commentary but if there was just some sort of caption under them explaining who they are because to me they look like caws and probably are caws. I saw storyline progression for once out of the 3 shows I've reviewed here. Decent match although it went a little fast. By video fed standards it was a bit too short.
Cena vs the horribly disfigured Evan Bourne
What is with everyone and evan bourne? Meh I'll admit he's pretty cool. Nice arena btw. This match is better paced then the first one. I like how Cena's wrestling like rookie cena. Pretty good match. D-bry's heel?
Show was a little short. Other then that it was pretty decent.
3/5 stars
1 pretty good match 1 ok match
Posing was decent
Pacing on one of the matches was pretty good.
Some effort to have a story. Wouldn't really expect more tho Paul e. coulda said a word or two.
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Post by WAIF on Aug 24, 2014 22:41:45 GMT -5
First time watching your fed. God knows who vs God knows who for the wtf championship. Match is already better then anything I've ever done (I find myself saying that a lot) but it's a little too fast paced. I know I can't expect commentary but if there was just some sort of caption under them explaining who they are because to me they look like caws and probably are caws. I saw storyline progression for once out of the 3 shows I've reviewed here. Decent match although it went a little fast. By video fed standards it was a bit too short. Cena vs the horribly disfigured Evan Bourne What is with everyone and evan bourne? Meh I'll admit he's pretty cool. Nice arena btw. This match is better paced then the first one. I like how Cena's wrestling like rookie cena. Pretty good match. D-bry's heel? Show was a little short. Other then that it was pretty decent. 3/5 stars 1 pretty good match 1 ok match Posing was decent Pacing on one of the matches was pretty good. Some effort to have a story. Wouldn't really expect more tho Paul e. coulda said a word or two. Thanks. I cant put as much mic time and backstage segments because I have no mics XD! I really would though. But thanks for that. Also Evan Bourne is just really fun to use. And yes Bryan is heel. |
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