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Post by Deleted on Aug 27, 2014 3:13:25 GMT -5
Turned out better then I expected for a traditional fed converted into a video but the matches are still pretty bad. Partially because I can't pose to save my life.
Enjoy...........
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PRIME Wrestling
Production Isn't Everything, huh?
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Post by PRIME Wrestling on Aug 27, 2014 6:47:33 GMT -5
I like the storyline development in your fed a lot, but not much else. Honestly, your posing needs a lot, and a lot of work. I can't even tell what's going on because of the poses. Also, you need to work on pacing. Big E and Truth were beating down The NAO, and Big E hit some awesome slams and then just picked him up for a suplex. You wouldn't hit high impact moves and then just go back to a simple move like that. You're customs are really something, too. That Punk head on a Jericho body...what the hell is that? Solid pass. And there was a lot of cussing. It makes your show seem amateur and childish. "Fucktard"? Really? You used the word "fucktard" in a promo. That's really something else. If you're gonna make customs like this, at least add a little paint. Paint over the Jericho designs on whoever that is or the Axel designs on the Ambrose. And bring back your camera angles. It's so hard to see what's happening because you're so close to your figures with the camera shots.
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