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Post by Deleted on Oct 9, 2014 12:52:49 GMT -5
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Post by FWL on Oct 9, 2014 13:24:49 GMT -5
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PRIME Wrestling
Production Isn't Everything, huh?
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Post by PRIME Wrestling on Oct 9, 2014 15:42:35 GMT -5
This is no where near the same level that FWL is on. You can't just come onto the site, especially with a 4/10 fed, and expect to get a PFB World title match right away. C'mon, bud.
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WAIF
The Man of 1004 Names
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Post by WAIF on Oct 9, 2014 18:13:13 GMT -5
I'm not gonna say it was phenomenal or anything but if was a good amount of improvement. Keep it up like this and keep improving then you'll be at least a decent fed in no time. One thing I will say is your posing needs to stay consistent. It was good at first but it looked like more towards the end you got a little lazy with the poses. Also work on those running poses because the back arm is ALWAYS crooked. So fix those things and work on pacing. And please stop this thing saying that your better than or even on the same level of Jake. It makes you look like your kind of picking fights and honestly cutting a tree that we all know will fall on top of you and kill you.
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