King Of Spice
Trevor From OLN
Let the retards run wild
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Post by King Of Spice on Oct 15, 2014 14:29:51 GMT -5
This could be the last match I ever release. So if you guys could give me some reviews on it I'd greatly appreciate it. Thanks. This was for my next show.
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Hobbs
I like to Review Shows and Matches
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Post by Hobbs on Oct 15, 2014 15:16:20 GMT -5
So Im going to give this a ***.
Now this was a good match in all, but I just felt that some things didn't transition that well and kinda threw me off a bit. Now I felt that there were a bit more kicks than wrestling for my taste but hey whatever. Overall good match and that's my thoughts.
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Post by Trademark on Oct 15, 2014 20:51:51 GMT -5
you'll be back.
not too bad. firstly, your arena looks much better and while I think you should just buy an ESR, the spring ring you're using now is better than the one from Home Depot. one thing I would do is fix the ring mat. currently, it is way to wrinkly and loose. I can't recall what the last show I watched from you was, but since then your posing has drastically improved. still, that's not to say there isn't things to work on because there is. for example, Daniel Bryan's Yes! Lock was incredibly loose and awkward. look at how Troy does submission moves to get a better understanding. this might just be my personal preference but I would suggest zooming out or backing up a bit when filming so the shots aren't so close to the figures. Bryan's flying headbutt was nice but Bourne's SSP was odd. overall, it was decent, yet still managed to be the best work i've seen from you. now, stop saying you're going to quit.
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