WAIF
The Man of 1004 Names
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Post by WAIF on Oct 18, 2014 14:46:53 GMT -5
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gabe
I am shrimp
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Post by gabe on Oct 18, 2014 14:54:00 GMT -5
You have to put it on unlisted dude.
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WAIF
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Post by WAIF on Oct 18, 2014 14:57:17 GMT -5
You have to put it on unlisted dude. My bad. Its up now |
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King Of Spice
Trevor From OLN
Let the retards run wild
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Post by King Of Spice on Oct 18, 2014 15:09:53 GMT -5
Make it public, brah.
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Post by Tony on Oct 19, 2014 2:46:14 GMT -5
You asked me to do this, so if you call me out for being harsh, then...
Bourne vs Tensai: Not a fan of this match at all. There were so many odd poses, also a few moves that aren't realistically possible. How the hell did Tensai turn a running SSP into a victory roll? I completely lost my cool when Tensai did a moonsault. It's cool to do cool spots but have a limit, please. A lot of other very odd spots throughout the match. Posing wasn't good either. Based on this match, you have a lot to work on.
Sheamus vs... Tyler Breeze?: You have some serious work to do on that Breeze. No offense, but it actually took away from the match itself. I'm a fan of technical matches, but you tried too much with this match. There was also a plenty off blurry pictures, so definetly work on that. Odd and bad posing continued here, however there was a lot less of those unrealistic spots. Still, work on your pacing, posing and also one thing, you have way too much pictures of a single move at times. Also, a thing I noticed and I take a lot of notes on these kind of little details; the way the wrestlers act, if they are similar to what they actually do. Sheamus never does the Brogue Kick with his left foot, but you made him do that. Not a big deal, but... still.
Kingston vs Morrison: There was so much stuff that could have been done with this match, but I was dearly disappointed. Just unlogical poses (which makes it look like you try too hard) and a crap ton of blurry pictures.
Cesaro vs Mox(?): What the heck is that on Cesaro's leg? Take it off, thank you. Another match which showed so much effort that it was bad. The ending was so weird as well.
I did not like this show at all. I struggled through it. I'm not trying to bring you down or sound like I can do better - I have no shows out myself. Still, I'm trying my best to advice you. The couple of things I want you to focus on your next shows; realism. Try to make spots that actually could happen in real life - I'm not saying that you can't make spots that haven't been seen in real life (because that's exactly what we are doing with pic feds, doing stuff we haven't seen but want to see) but still, have a limit. That Tensai moonsault had me dying.
Another thing, the blurry pictures. Do not let them slid into your show. It takes so much away. Also, I am not judging you, but you should probably ask someone to make your customs for you.
One thing that I've found helpful when doing practice stuff for pic fed (and my earlier fed that ran for one show lol) is to think how would I do this move in real life. I don't know if I have advantage for that since I backyard wrestle and am heading into pro training soon, but you should try to think that as well. That will help you with posing, thinking how the move would logically go if you did it.
You're welcome.
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Post by DIRTBAG TAREN on Oct 19, 2014 6:54:53 GMT -5
dedicated to ZCW with a show that is equally as bad as ZCW itself.
great.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 19, 2014 7:27:11 GMT -5
COMING SOON FROM ZCW HOME VIDEO  Jokes aside, I'll try to check out the show soon |
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Gnaddi
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Post by Gnaddi on Oct 19, 2014 9:27:05 GMT -5
You asked me to do this, so if you call me out for being harsh, then... Bourne vs Tensai: Not a fan of this match at all. There were so many odd poses, also a few moves that aren't realistically possible. How the hell did Tensai turn a running SSP into a victory roll? I completely lost my cool when Tensai did a moonsault. It's cool to do cool spots but have a limit, please. A lot of other very odd spots throughout the match. Posing wasn't good either. Based on this match, you have a lot to work on. Sheamus vs... Tyler Breeze?: You have some serious work to do on that Breeze. No offense, but it actually took away from the match itself. I'm a fan of technical matches, but you tried too much with this match. There was also a plenty off blurry pictures, so definetly work on that. Odd and bad posing continued here, however there was a lot less of those unrealistic spots. Still, work on your pacing, posing and also one thing, you have way too much pictures of a single move at times. Also, a thing I noticed and I take a lot of notes on these kind of little details; the way the wrestlers act, if they are similar to what they actually do. Sheamus never does the Brogue Kick with his left foot, but you made him do that. Not a big deal, but... still. Kingston vs Morrison: There was so much stuff that could have been done with this match, but I was dearly disappointed. Just unlogical poses (which makes it look like you try too hard) and a crap ton of blurry pictures. Cesaro vs Mox(?): What the heck is that on Cesaro's leg? Take it off, thank you. Another match which showed so much effort that it was bad. The ending was so weird as well. I did not like this show at all. I struggled through it. I'm not trying to bring you down or sound like I can do better - I have no shows out myself. Still, I'm trying my best to advice you. The couple of things I want you to focus on your next shows; realism. Try to make spots that actually could happen in real life - I'm not saying that you can't make spots that haven't been seen in real life (because that's exactly what we are doing with pic feds, doing stuff we haven't seen but want to see) but still, have a limit. That Tensai moonsault had me dying. Another thing, the blurry pictures. Do not let them slid into your show. It takes so much away. Also, I am not judging you, but you should probably ask someone to make your customs for you. One thing that I've found helpful when doing practice stuff for pic fed (and my earlier fed that ran for one show lol) is to think how would I do this move in real life. I don't know if I have advantage for that since I backyard wrestle and am heading into pro training soon, but you should try to think that as well. That will help you with posing, thinking how the move would logically go if you did it. You're welcome. This basically. I could´nt get myself to watch the whole show tbh. That crowd effect was an awful idea. You were on a good way with your last few shows but I did´nt like this one at all man. |
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King Of Spice
Trevor From OLN
Let the retards run wild
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Post by King Of Spice on Oct 19, 2014 12:59:23 GMT -5
dedicated to ZCW with a show that is equally as bad as ZCW itself. great. shut the fuck up and finish everyone's customs. |
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Post by Tony on Oct 19, 2014 13:06:37 GMT -5
dedicated to ZCW with a show that is equally as bad as ZCW itself. great. shut the fuck up and finish everyone's customs. We sincerely need Jackie Moon right now. |
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Post by Mile Morales on Oct 19, 2014 16:01:33 GMT -5
dedicated to ZCW with a show that is equally as bad as ZCW itself. great. lol |
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Post by Mile Morales on Oct 19, 2014 16:03:07 GMT -5
Everybody love everybody
- Jackie Moon
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Post by Trademark on Oct 19, 2014 16:06:24 GMT -5
Ladies, ladies. Get a room
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Post by Jesus on Oct 22, 2014 0:45:12 GMT -5
dedicated to ZCW with a show that is equally as bad as ZCW itself. great. You're just as good as they are. |
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Post by DIRTBAG TAREN on Oct 22, 2014 2:53:50 GMT -5
dedicated to ZCW with a show that is equally as bad as ZCW itself. great. You're just as good as they are.  |
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