Gnaddi
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Post by Gnaddi on Nov 2, 2014 4:05:56 GMT -5
Wow, you have really improved a lot since I watched your fed the last time. Posing has gotten great. There are still some weird looking poses here and there but yeah, a huge improvement. Match quality was also really good trough out. Storytelling was great especially in the Shelton vs Fandango brawl. Enjoyed that a lot. Bray vs Dean was´nt bad either. Maybe sister abigail was reversed a bit often but beside that very well done. Raven vs Punk was were my internet fucked up again but I´ll definitely will get to watch it. Overall all I have to say is that you have improved soooo much. Great job man.
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Post by Karl Malone on Nov 2, 2014 15:02:31 GMT -5
Man for someone who seems to be just starting out your posing is on point. - I enjoyed most of the matches -It was many odd pictures - i like the fact that you use shelton benjeman (he's the man) -I liked the Raven/Punk match -overall nice show
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Wicked
The Man of a Thousand Questions
'The Nightmare Warrior'
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Post by Wicked on Nov 7, 2014 0:12:14 GMT -5
This show was good shelly. You definitely improved a lot. Posing has gotten so much better. For the most part this show was awesome. You did a lot of cool things for this one. I think your arena could use some tweeking like adding extra black boards to close of the arena like the stage and the other side. The opener was really cool. I dug it. Xavier vs. Sandow was cool, tbh I have only watched Xavier as Consequences in TNA. The tag match was alright, I liked the finish. Fandango vs. Shelton was alright, I think it was a bit over the top, especially the glass part, I get you are building Fandango up to be like a fighter but it just didn't seem to work for me. I think Shelton is built up as a good heel. Bray vs. Dean was ok.. Nice Pride Title, that makes you unique dude and I dig it. I wasn't to big on Raven vs. Punk, I think it wet on way to long especially for a Raven match, sorry bud but this one just didn't click for me. I did like the moonsault from the ladder in the corner of the ring. I think you didn't give Raven or Punk enough time to build up to big spots and they just kept on doing big spots with out any real set up. This was a good show just work on pacing your matches, posing, and the actual psychology of your matches. Good work.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 7, 2014 11:23:41 GMT -5
This show was good shelly. You definitely improved a lot. Posing has gotten so much better. For the most part this show was awesome. You did a lot of cool things for this one. I think your arena could use some tweeking like adding extra black boards to close of the arena like the stage and the other side. The opener was really cool. I dug it. Xavier vs. Sandow was cool, tbh I have only watched Xavier as Consequences in TNA. The tag match was alright, I liked the finish. Fandango vs. Shelton was alright, I think it was a bit over the top, especially the glass part, I get you are building Fandango up to be like a fighter but it just didn't seem to work for me. I think Shelton is built up as a good heel. Bray vs. Dean was ok.. Nice Pride Title, that makes you unique dude and I dig it. I wasn't to big on Raven vs. Punk, I think it wet on way to long especially for a Raven match, sorry bud but this one just didn't click for me. I did like the moonsault from the ladder in the corner of the ring. I think you didn't give Raven or Punk enough time to build up to big spots and they just kept on doing big spots with out any real set up. This was a good show just work on pacing your matches, posing, and the actual psychology of your matches. Good work. Thanks for the review! I agree for the most part, a lot of times when I'm filming I have no idea what I do so I just do a big spot or something. Thanks
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