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Post by Deleted on Oct 24, 2014 17:57:06 GMT -5
Hey guys, heres my newest show, I hope you enjoy it!
I don't really know what I thought of this, I'll let you guys be the judge of that, reviews are very much appreciated!!
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Post by gabe on Oct 24, 2014 17:58:53 GMT -5
I'm gonna review the fuck out of this! Oh man.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 24, 2014 18:07:35 GMT -5
I'm gonna review the fuck out of this! Oh man. thank you. I hope you enjoy it!!! |
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Post by Hobbs on Oct 24, 2014 19:13:22 GMT -5
Ratings
IC Title: ***1/2
Woods vs Sandow: **1/4
Tag Titles: ***1/4
Wyatt vs Ambrose: ***3/4
Punk vs Raven: ****1/4
Thoughts: This was an awesome show for starters with the excellent opener and a tremendous main event. At the beginning of the their was a bit too much highflying for my taste but i ended up liking it in the end. I was glad that McIntyre was in the 3 way ic title match otherwise Bourne and Kidd needed a bit of mat time to make the match good to the match because their was too much air time for the both of them. Also I'm glad Mcintyre won cause that was a tremendous match. Which leads me to Sandow vs Woods cause at the beginning of the match Woods was flying a bit too much but as the match went along i looked past it and glad that Woods won.
Now I'm not sure if the Tag Titles was traditional or a tornado tag because it started out like a traditional but as it went on it felt more like a tornado tag but i shouldn't complain because the match was good either way so i like it a lot as it went on and glad that Barrett & Price retained.
Now after Fandango came out and there was a long pause for if Benjamin was going to come through the entrance or not and well the way Benjamin attacked Fandango and that leading to the brawl between the two was so freaking awesome and has me really tuned into their rivalry. Now the way you use Shelton as a heel is awesome and the feud with Fandango is even better.
Now I don't have much to say about Wyatt vs Ambrose as it played out as i expected and how it usually does with the Shield and The Wyatt Family an it was a great match.
Punk vs Raven was freaking amazing for how brutal it got and how it played out and the ending gave me that Rock vs Mankind feeling which was sweet. Now when Punk pulled a Morrison with the Laddersault was sick as I wasn't sure how that would turn out with the huge ladder that was used. In the end, I was glad that Punk stomped Raven's head into a chair and retained the IWC Title to cap off a tremendous show at which I will give a 8/10.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 24, 2014 19:21:48 GMT -5
Ratings IC Title: ***1/2 Woods vs Sandow: **1/4 Tag Titles: ***1/4 Wyatt vs Ambrose: ***3/4 Punk vs Raven: ****1/4 Thoughts: This was an awesome show for starters with the excellent opener and a tremendous main event. At the beginning of the their was a bit too much highflying for my taste but i ended up liking it in the end. I was glad that McIntyre was in the 3 way ic title match otherwise Bourne and Kidd needed a bit of mat time to make the match good to the match because their was too much air time for the both of them. Also I'm glad Mcintyre won cause that was a tremendous match. Which leads me to Sandow vs Woods cause at the beginning of the match Woods was flying a bit too much but as the match went along i looked past it and glad that Woods won. Now I'm not sure if the Tag Titles was traditional or a tornado tag because it started out like a traditional but as it went on it felt more like a tornado tag but i shouldn't complain because the match was good either way so i like it a lot as it went on and glad that Barrett & Price retained. Now after Fandango came out and there was a long pause for if Benjamin was going to come through the entrance or not and well the way Benjamin attacked Fandango and that leading to the brawl between the two was so freaking awesome and has me really tuned into their rivalry. Now the way you use Shelton as a heel is awesome and the feud with Fandango is even better. Now I don't have much to say about Wyatt vs Ambrose as it played out as i expected and how it usually does with the Shield and The Wyatt Family an it was a great match. Punk vs Raven was freaking amazing for how brutal it got and how it played out and the ending gave me that Rock vs Mankind feeling which was sweet. Now when Punk pulled a Morrison with the Laddersault was sick as I wasn't sure how that would turn out with the huge ladder that was used. In the end, I was glad that Punk stomped Raven's head into a chair and retained the IWC Title to cap off a tremendous show at which I will give a 8/10. Thank you for the detailed review! I appreciate it man. I'm very glad you enjoyed it. Thanks!! |
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Post by gabe on Oct 24, 2014 19:51:30 GMT -5
Can't wait to watch this, your last show was so awesome I loved it. Can't wait to see what this show will bring.
IC Title Match: Match starts fast but that's alright, like the brawling to start it. Bourne looks to dive, and damn already he misses! Woaaah that springboard thing Kidd did looked nice, McIntyre reverses and now they're on the outside. Some brawling on the outside, and OMG BOURNE WITH A SHOOTING STAR TO BOTH MEN ALREADY GOD DAMN. Everyone back inside, and the double team reverse rana holy shit!! and that canadian destroyer looked sick! that superplex looked awesome. Nice suicide dive by Kidd. The way Kidd and Bourne are going back and forth is great. And that handspring was great haha holy shit! man Kidd is shining in this match. that High cross by Drew god damn. WHAT THE FUCK THAT TOP ROPE INTO A BUCKLE BOMB, AND NOW A FUTURE SHOCK. DREW RETAINS! Wow, awesome match. I really like Drew as your IC Champ, and this match made me wanna see a Bourne and Kidd feud in your fed and see how you would do it. Great work.
Sandow vs. Woods: Match starts quick again but that's not bad. Nice plancha by Woods! Sandow has control now. That headscissors was cool. Nice backstabber! The Eat Defeat looked nice, nice quick match.
This is all i can review right now, i'll edit with my full length review soon.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 24, 2014 19:54:52 GMT -5
I'm just focusing on the bad things, so I'm going to quickly get out of the way that your posing is pretty great.
Your awkward pics are terrible.
You absolutely positively screwed up Raven, at least when it comes to the psychological aspects and his promos.
Raven does not come out and say nothing. If he's going to fight punk, you have to either go off their past history or create your own. Neither route gives you consent not to do promos. There is no reason Punk is fighting Raven in this match other then maybe they fought 11 years ago. It is easy to screw up raven's promos, and I have even done so in the past, but there's no reason not to try. The match was ok, but Punk handcuffing Raven was idiotic, considering Punk is capable of beating Raven. The match not ending on the GTS was also stupid, and if you wanted to do the chair curb stomp then you coulda done it sometime other then the finish.
Posing? 10/10
Story development? 3/10
Incredibly minimal and you doomed Raven vs Punk from the start by having Raven lose once without any buildup to a big match or anything. Benjamin/Fandango seems like the only storyline you care about.
Handling raven?
4/10, just because you know some of the moves raven does.
I can elaborate for days what's wrong with the way you treated and presented raven, but I won't unless you want me to.
7.5/10 show.
I deducted .5 because of Raven.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 24, 2014 20:01:53 GMT -5
I'm just focusing on the bad things, so I'm going to quickly get out of the way that your posing is pretty great. Your awkward pics are terrible. You absolutely positively screwed up Raven, at least when it comes to the psychological aspects and his promos. Raven does not come out and say nothing. If he's going to fight punk, you have to either go off their past history or create your own. Neither route gives you consent not to do promos. There is no reason Punk is fighting Raven in this match other then maybe they fought 11 years ago. It is easy to screw up raven's promos, and I have even done so in the past, but there's no reason not to try. The match was ok, but Punk handcuffing Raven was idiotic, considering Punk is capable of beating Raven. The match not ending on the GTS was also stupid, and if you wanted to do the chair curb stomp then you coulda done it sometime other then the finish. Posing? 10/10 Story development? 3/10 Incredibly minimal and you doomed Raven vs Punk from the start by having Raven lose once without any buildup to a big match or anything. Benjamin/Fandango seems like the only storyline you care about. Handling raven? 4/10, just because you know some of the moves raven does. I can elaborate for days what's wrong with the way you treated and presented raven, but I won't unless you want me to. 7.5/10 show. I deducted .5 because of Raven. I knew you'd be touchy about Raven lol, i'll personally admit I don't think I used him all that well. thanks for the review Brick |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 24, 2014 20:03:49 GMT -5
Can't wait to watch this, your last show was so awesome I loved it. Can't wait to see what this show will bring. IC Title Match: Match starts fast but that's alright, like the brawling to start it. Bourne looks to dive, and damn already he misses! Woaaah that springboard thing Kidd did looked nice, McIntyre reverses and now they're on the outside. Some brawling on the outside, and OMG BOURNE WITH A SHOOTING STAR TO BOTH MEN ALREADY GOD DAMN. Everyone back inside, and the double team reverse rana holy shit!! and that canadian destroyer looked sick! that superplex looked awesome. Nice suicide dive by Kidd. The way Kidd and Bourne are going back and forth is great. And that handspring was great haha holy shit! man Kidd is shining in this match. that High cross by Drew god damn. WHAT THE FUCK THAT TOP ROPE INTO A BUCKLE BOMB, AND NOW A FUTURE SHOCK. DREW RETAINS! Wow, awesome match. I really like Drew as your IC Champ, and this match made me wanna see a Bourne and Kidd feud in your fed and see how you would do it. Great work. Sandow vs. Woods: Match starts quick again but that's not bad. Nice plancha by Woods! Sandow has control now. That headscissors was cool. Nice backstabber! The Eat Defeat looked nice, nice quick match. This is all i can review right now, i'll edit with my full length review soon. thank you Gabe, happy you enjoyed the fisrt two matches, exited to hear what you think about the rest!! |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 24, 2014 20:13:04 GMT -5
I'm just focusing on the bad things, so I'm going to quickly get out of the way that your posing is pretty great. Your awkward pics are terrible. You absolutely positively screwed up Raven, at least when it comes to the psychological aspects and his promos. Raven does not come out and say nothing. If he's going to fight punk, you have to either go off their past history or create your own. Neither route gives you consent not to do promos. There is no reason Punk is fighting Raven in this match other then maybe they fought 11 years ago. It is easy to screw up raven's promos, and I have even done so in the past, but there's no reason not to try. The match was ok, but Punk handcuffing Raven was idiotic, considering Punk is capable of beating Raven. The match not ending on the GTS was also stupid, and if you wanted to do the chair curb stomp then you coulda done it sometime other then the finish. Posing? 10/10 Story development? 3/10 Incredibly minimal and you doomed Raven vs Punk from the start by having Raven lose once without any buildup to a big match or anything. Benjamin/Fandango seems like the only storyline you care about. Handling raven? 4/10, just because you know some of the moves raven does. I can elaborate for days what's wrong with the way you treated and presented raven, but I won't unless you want me to. 7.5/10 show. I deducted .5 because of Raven. I knew you'd be touchy about Raven lol, i'll personally admit I don't think I used him all that well. thanks for the review Brick I'm not even that good at handling Raven when it comes to his promos, he's pretty hard to capture correctly and of the 4 people who use raven that I know of (Richard, Tyler Black over at WFIGS, me, and you), Tyler Black's came closest to properly representing him, I do kinda well with my booking of the flock but it's still kinda flawed (the flock of brian lee, cm punk, mick foley, and ryan reeves would not lose once to Al snow, jamie noble, Danny Doring, Stevie or Fandango), Richard's raven just debuted and I'll be completely honest, I'm not exactly sure how good his new stable's gonna be, but I'm sure he'll be perfect at his in ring psychology, and your raven match was not THAT bad, I'd give it a 3/5 but it lacked the psychology aspects of both Raven and Punk, seeing as Punk was acting a little off too. So don't get too down on yourself, just research raven a bit more. One last question though, is this supposed to be a long term feud? |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 24, 2014 20:16:16 GMT -5
I knew you'd be touchy about Raven lol, i'll personally admit I don't think I used him all that well. thanks for the review Brick I'm not even that good at handling Raven when it comes to his promos, he's pretty hard to capture correctly and of the 4 people who use raven that I know of (Richard, Tyler Black over at WFIGS, me, and you), Tyler Black's came closest to properly representing him, I do kinda well with my booking of the flock but it's still kinda flawed (the flock of brian lee, cm punk, mick foley, and ryan reeves would not lose once to Al snow, jamie noble, Danny Doring, Stevie or Fandango), Richard's raven just debuted and I'll be completely honest, I'm not exactly sure how good his new stable's gonna be, but I'm sure he'll be perfect at his in ring psychology, and your raven match was not THAT bad, I'd give it a 3/5 but it lacked the psychology aspects of both Raven and Punk, seeing as Punk was acting a little off too. So don't get too down on yourself, just research raven a bit more. One last question though, is this supposed to be a long term feud? I honestly hate doing promos. I'll have a go I guess. and I haven't really planed ahead, so I don't know. |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 24, 2014 20:19:02 GMT -5
I'm not even that good at handling Raven when it comes to his promos, he's pretty hard to capture correctly and of the 4 people who use raven that I know of (Richard, Tyler Black over at WFIGS, me, and you), Tyler Black's came closest to properly representing him, I do kinda well with my booking of the flock but it's still kinda flawed (the flock of brian lee, cm punk, mick foley, and ryan reeves would not lose once to Al snow, jamie noble, Danny Doring, Stevie or Fandango), Richard's raven just debuted and I'll be completely honest, I'm not exactly sure how good his new stable's gonna be, but I'm sure he'll be perfect at his in ring psychology, and your raven match was not THAT bad, I'd give it a 3/5 but it lacked the psychology aspects of both Raven and Punk, seeing as Punk was acting a little off too. So don't get too down on yourself, just research raven a bit more. One last question though, is this supposed to be a long term feud? I honestly hate doing promos. I'll have a go I guess. and I haven't really planed ahead, so I don't know. If you ever need help anytime when it comes to promos, shoot me a message. I'm by no means the master of promo writing, but I could probably help a little. |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 31, 2014 16:46:06 GMT -5
Any more reviews would be cool!
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Post by f1gh7er2 on Oct 31, 2014 16:52:40 GMT -5
I love that Raven figure! Had good spots and solid matches all the way through. Great show I enjoyed it!
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Post by Deleted on Nov 1, 2014 11:04:12 GMT -5
I love that Raven figure! Had good spots and solid matches all the way through. Great show I enjoyed it! thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! |
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