WAIF
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Post by WAIF on Nov 1, 2014 20:47:36 GMT -5
I feel terrible about the fact that I couldn't film the show before my mania. It really sucks.
Need to know info about the last show:
Cesaro interrupted The Rock during his debut.
After Ambrose vs Ziggler, Cena made his return and attacked Ambrose.
Kurt Angle cost Punk the MITB briefcase.
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Post by Karl Malone on Nov 1, 2014 21:36:08 GMT -5
Hey man i was a total surprised this was actually pretty good.
-the posing has improved
-one con was definitely the vest Daniel Bryan had on. it didn't add anything and was just an eyesore (its ugly just let that shit die).
-nice cant to see what haymen and Harper have in store.
this was an Okay show
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King Of Spice
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Let the retards run wild
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Post by King Of Spice on Nov 2, 2014 3:46:09 GMT -5
Well, I'll give this a review, I guess.
Daniel Bryan is making his way to the ring. What the fuck is he wearing? Take that off of him, he looks hideous. Where did Evan Bourne come from? And they're going.. Backstage? Ok, I can dig that. They're brawling for a little while, and Daniel Bryan just did a suicide dive? This was something that really irked me, because not only was he stood on the same level as Bourne, but it looked like he jumped off of the table. Alright, now they're in the ring. Posing has improved, I'll give you that. One thing that I noticed was Bourne kicked the mat a few times too many. Alright, a little bit of back and forth... Looking decent. Finally that fucking vest is off of Bryan, but Davonni, easy on the vest spots. They got repetitive as hell and looked ridiculous. What did Bryan just do, pull Bourne to the mat by his head? And they're back and forth, okay.. Few nice spots, but they were starting to do what your fed does a lot towards the end - getting way over the top. And the match is over. Here comes Brodie Lee. Did he just hit Baron Corbin's finisher..? Well, this is a little random.
I'm gonna be honest with you here, this was a weird match, but it was still the best you've put out. Things I disliked -
Crazy spots.
That. Fucking. Vest.
All the moves with the vest wrapped around the head.
Weird looking moves.
Random irritations, such as Bryan looking like he jumped off the table, and also Bryan going for the diving headbutt a minute into the match.
The fact that Brodie Lee hasn't even had a match yet but he somehow gets a shot at the World Title.
Things I liked -
Posing improved.
Pacing improved.
Nice arena.
Overall, this was an improvement, but there's still a lot of work to be done...
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gabe
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Post by gabe on Nov 2, 2014 11:09:53 GMT -5
Well, I'll give this a review, I guess. Daniel Bryan is making his way to the ring. What the fuck is he wearing? Take that off of him, he looks hideous. Where did Evan Bourne come from? And they're going.. Backstage? Ok, I can dig that. They're brawling for a little while, and Daniel Bryan just did a suicide dive? This was something that really irked me, because not only was he stood on the same level as Bourne, but it looked like he jumped off of the table. Alright, now they're in the ring. Posing has improved, I'll give you that. One thing that I noticed was Bourne kicked the mat a few times too many. Alright, a little bit of back and forth... Looking decent. Finally that fucking vest is off of Bryan, but Davonni, easy on the vest spots. They got repetitive as hell and looked ridiculous. What did Bryan just do, pull Bourne to the mat by his head? And they're back and forth, okay.. Few nice spots, but they were starting to do what your fed does a lot towards the end - getting way over the top. And the match is over. Here comes Brodie Lee. Did he just hit Baron Corbin's finisher..? Well, this is a little random. I'm gonna be honest with you here, this was a weird match, but it was still the best you've put out. Things I disliked - Crazy spots. That. Fucking. Vest. All the moves with the vest wrapped around the head. Weird looking moves. Random irritations, such as Bryan looking like he jumped off the table, and also Bryan going for the diving headbutt a minute into the match. The fact that Brodie Lee hasn't even had a match yet but he somehow gets a shot at the World Title. Things I liked - Posing improved. Pacing improved. Nice arena. Overall, this was an improvement, but there's still a lot of work to be done... Basically summed up what I was gonna say, agree with a lot of this. Davonni, sometimes it's like you improve, and then you regress with these weird things and ideas that are way too over the top. Yeah you're pacing improved and the posing is starting to come along, but it's the random and weird ideas that really bother me. Best example, besides that vest, is Brodie Lee already getting into the title scene. He just debuted, I don't think he should get main event status as soon as he arrives. That's just weird. For me, the biggest thing that I think you should work on is storylines, character development, and all that sorta stuff. Because at least with that in hand, some of the stuff that goes on will make sense. You have me added on Kik, I have some good ideas for you so just text me when you got somethin'. |
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Post by Wicked on Nov 6, 2014 23:59:35 GMT -5
This match was a fresh of breath air for WAIF. You really improved in this one. You did make a couple of questionable choices throughout the match like weird spots, that vest, etc. I enjoyed this match. I thought your posing was a lot better and your pacing got better too. There were a couple moments in this match were I marked out in. This was your best match so far. I still know you can do better with posing and pacing a match so try to work on that. Good match Von. PS. I got pretty excited for Harper coming out.
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