WWW The Beginning dark match

[wyattg10]

  
First Figure Fed Ever 
So Pretty bad

[Karl Malone]

-First off your arena could use alot of work. It could use some creativity.
- the posing is okay needs sum work
this needs work before you think of releasing a show. Just saying.
you got potential tho.

[wyattg10]

Yea I didn't really have much time to work on it with school and stuff
The whole show isn't that good..
But I'll have a whole new set that I'm working on in December.
Thank you.

[Deleted]

Some advice:
An arena with actual effort put into it greatly improves the presentation. I wouldn't suggest something like my set up (a full blown arena with a black sheet covering the wall and entrance ramp and crowd and floor mats on a table), but I'd at least try to cover up the fact it's just a ring on carpet.

A good match length (for a video fed) is 280+ pics running at either 1 pic per second or 1 pic every 75 milliseconds. The 300+ pics thing doesn't mean do 281 and call it a day. It's more of a minimum, I might be wrong on this so take it with a grain of salt unless a more prominent video fedder (I'm more of a traditional guy myself) says the same.

When it comes to posing, try to make it as close to real life as you possibly can. In video feds most people don't use string for posing, so if there's a move you can't pull off without string, don't take an awkward move pic without a transition, hold the figs joints that help it stand still and take a pic without showing your hand but still showing the move. If you want to go above and beyond and use string, you'll need a tripod. Weird suggestion, but if you're using a phone or tablet to take pics, you can make a makeshift tripod out of spare legos, or cardboard boxes, anything you can find really.

No fed would be complete without storylines. I honestly would love if every fed had tons of storylines and promos, however the average amount for video feds is usually 2 promos a show. If you need help writing promos or storylines, you can always ask me via private message. I'm no means a master of promo or storyline writing (My own are pretty okay but they do have a few inconsistencies), but I can offer some advice.

That's all the advice I can give. I look forward to your first show, and hope it's a lot better then my first show.

[wyattg10]

Thank you..
I promise my next shows are going to improve
Sadly I already started the first show in the same place ( my original place was taken over)
Thank you I need as much advice as I can get
Thank you..