WWW The Beginning

[wyattg10]

WWW The Beginning 

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Not bad man

The posing was good for your first show although i suggest moving all the figure parts for each picture and try to make it look more realistic.
Get a better Set Up/Arena. Yours is kinda distracting with the background things. I mean its ok but buy a couple of black/white poster boards to cover that up and put more effort on the entrance stage.

Now the PPV its self wasn't that bad although try to keep your camera steady, you can also use a tripod which is super helpful or a couple books and rubber bands as an alternative, also some parts were hard to understand.

But this is your first so i'll let this slide.

I see potential in your fed.

[Jack]

Nice to see some new feds around. I really suggest you just make a few small changes that will go a long way. Make sure the camera is in focus before you take the picture. This will make it all clearer and much easier to follow. Also try your best move EVERY joint in every figure. This will allow more realism and in general make it look a whole lot better. Also speed up the frame rate to maybe 0.80? That will give your match a better flow between moves and matches. Maybe try and make a better arena as well? Add some crowd in, be creative with your stage? Finally also think about pacing, matches should start slow, build and build and build to a good finish.

Keep Going Dude!!!

[wyattg10]

Thank you